VN Ren'Py Abandoned Above the Clouds [v0.75] [Mundo Games]

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goulet1995

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73MP3ST said:
Oh for FCK sake, The story needs an editor to go through it with a BETTER fine tooth comb to iron out the grammatical errors, but can I PLEASE have ONE game/ VN to NOT start a sentence or paragraph with the retarded words "I MEAN"???

That's about as bad as "Yeah, no"..."No no, YEAH" (choose a goddamned direction...is it yeah..is it NO?).
This was decent until the last update, then the author decided to go all middle school teenagers talking like he is drooling imbecile while THINKING he is being cool~!

This was a great story, with good humor, and fantastic renders, but STOP starting your phrases and sentences with "I MEAN and Yeah, No" PLEASE!!

This may seem trivial to you but for some of us its comparable to nails on a chalkboard, making it either difficult to finish the story or easy to put it away and forget about it altogether, and dont bother with your ridiculous facepalms.
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i have more trouble trying to figure out what you are saying then anything in the game
 
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Canto Forte

Canto Forte

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laszlo12 said:
late April or early May for the next release.
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laszlo12 said:
there is too much work to be done for the steam release
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73MP3ST said:
Oh for FCK sake, The story needs an editor to go through it with a BETTER fine tooth comb to iron out the grammatical errors, but can I PLEASE have ONE game/ VN to NOT start a sentence or paragraph with the retarded words "I MEAN"???

That's about as bad as "Yeah, no"..."No no, YEAH" (choose a goddamned direction...is it yeah..is it NO?).
This was decent until the last update, then the author decided to go all middle school teenagers talking like he is drooling imbecile while THINKING he is being cool~!

This was a great story, with good humor, and fantastic renders, but STOP starting your phrases and sentences with "I MEAN and Yeah, No" PLEASE!!

This may seem trivial to you but for some of us its comparable to nails on a chalkboard, making it either difficult to finish the story or easy to put it away and forget about it altogether, and dont bother with your ridiculous facepalms.
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Mundo Games said:
Somtimes I dotn undirstand why piople complaen when thier has nothing wrong with me write...
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-CookieMonster666- said:
I'm a fan of the irony of a post complaining about problems with the English including several mistakes to demonstrate their qualifications in making such a determination. Thit dun shohed um gud!
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Someone help Mundo with this!
Write a better synopsys!
Write the Steam description you wanna see about this game once it hits your Steam neck of the woods!
Write a plot that your feelings dictate after playing this game!
Make this better for yourself and everybody will feel much better along with you.
 
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Hellster

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73MP3ST said:
Oh for FCK sake, The story needs an editor to go through it with a BETTER fine tooth comb to iron out the grammatical errors, but can I PLEASE have ONE game/ VN to NOT start a sentence or paragraph with the retarded words "I MEAN"???

That's about as bad as "Yeah, no"..."No no, YEAH" (choose a goddamned direction...is it yeah..is it NO?).
This was decent until the last update, then the author decided to go all middle school teenagers talking like he is drooling imbecile while THINKING he is being cool~!

This was a great story, with good humor, and fantastic renders, but STOP starting your phrases and sentences with "I MEAN and Yeah, No" PLEASE!!

This may seem trivial to you but for some of us its comparable to nails on a chalkboard, making it either difficult to finish the story or easy to put it away and forget about it altogether, and dont bother with your ridiculous facepalms.
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Mundo has a proofreader, one I put on to them after the last update.
I was going to offer, but I work on too many already, so things should improve moving forward as far as the dialogue goes etc.
 
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BEST INTRO EVER.

I don't care, this game is gonna be fun. I'm already in love with it.

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Sorry for posting again, but I can't stop laughing. Been awhile since a game like this made me laugh, so I wanted to share.

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laszlo12 said:
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February's 4k Wallpaper (Hannah)

Hello There!

I hope you all enjoy Hannah in this monthly wallpaper.

Development is still ongoing, but there is too much work to be done for the steam release, but the good news is that I'm almost done with that, just a few more days, I hope you all understand.

I'm targeting late April or early May for the next release.

Thank you everyone for your continuous support!
Love, Mundo
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At least, it seems that it wasn't too much for setting the Steam page up:
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:) (y)
 
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