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Some feedback. Leaving the options menu in the title screen plays the splash screens again every time. Truthfully, unskippable splash screens are pretty annoying in general. We don't need to see those every time we go to the title screen. Once is enough.

Auto text doesn't seem to have a slider. It's way too slow currently. It also gets disabled after every conversation. You need to click it again when new text box appears.

The game seems pretty heavy on resources even with all visual and audio effects turned off. I'm not sure how optimized the game is, but I thought it was worth a mention. Not that my laptop is a powerhouse or anything, RPGM with a bunch of plugins do tend to run a bit poorly on my machine.


The overall presentation was very good. I liked the art style. It does have that amateur vibe to it, but it still looks great. Also, the CG art and sprites seems like it was drawn by the same artist which is always a plus. Many games have super amazing sprites but much less detailed CGs (or just generally having vastly different art style which can be jarring).

As I expected, the writing is great. There are no issues with the English. The dialogues, characters, and plot set up were excellent. What I liked the most was the tone of the story. I feel like NTR is best when the game takes itself seriously rather than making everything about porn humor.

Good luck.
 
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I don't agree if this one called NTR because basically the MC is a female, more likely it's just cheating play by cheater whore that already succumbs to her desire and degenerated through pain and gain to become a slave of seqqz. And not reverse harem also, because there is mind break/corruption behind it...
I just hope if dev already decided that those horrible thing really can be avoided, dev also make some hotz moment with vanilla path. And not just some cheap scenes that gone in a blink of eyes (just make it balance between horrible one and the sweet one)
 

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So will we able to play it with Emma having lots of fun sex & saving the day, or is it a choice between prude & corruption?
 

menatv

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Nice start. Enjoyed the demo. Definitely keeping an eye on the status of this game. Good job.
 
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will be there any mind control or brainwash?
Never understood the appeal of hypnosis/ brainwash or mind control. I've asked and some people have only just said it's about "full control" or "domination" or "power", but that's so vague, I think it just strokes an ego superficially giving them an illusion of being in control, dominating or having power over the person. It makes no sense to me because it sounds like it'd be no different if they just used a blow-up doll or a non-decay-able non-necro corps.

Like, through hypnosis they can get their little marionette doll to "consent" but it's not true autonomous consent of the mind-controlled persons free will. It's just rape. Not kink shaming of course, I just don't see what others who like it see in it.
 
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CobraPL

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Good technical quality. I just fear cliche/stupid themes.
Oh no, boyfriend cursed, girl needs to wh0re!
Well...
 

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I tried the one in GoFile and received "Error: Failed to Initialize Graphic."

Edit: Try the MEGA one and received the same error. Anyone knows what happen?
 
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Some notes after having played the demo

First of all, I enjoyed it. I can't critique too much since it's at such an early stage so I'll hold off on some of them with only brief mentions, as I'm sure that these are things that are already being looked at or considered.

- Running/ sprinting speed felt no faster than walking to me. Perhaps increase the run/ sprint speed a little more.

- I had a frame rate issue in the game as well, I don't know if anyone else had this problem but the frame rate would only be above 55 while in the in-game menu, but in the over-world moving around the frame rate just completely tanks to between 7 to 13.

- I think someone else already mentioned earlier but at the main menu screen (before starting a new game/ loading a game), if you try to tinker with any options and then close it, it automatically just does the entire games intro all over again.

- On the note about the games intro, it'd be nice if you could skip/ speed that up a bit by pushing the Z/ Start buttons or something.

- On skipping text in general, I appreciate just a simple holding down a button to skip texts, the auto fast skip is nice and fine, I just like to hold down a button myself.

That's about all I got for now. I'll keep an eye out for updates.
 

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Art is good and premise offers a lot of options. I hope that there are many ways to progress the story, so that you can get to the victory without having to cheat Cross. Choosing to stay true to Cross should also have its own set on sexy times with him, so that player is not punished for making one choice over another. That would also improve on the replayability of the game.
 
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Art is good and premise offers a lot of options. I hope that there are many ways to progress the story, so that you can get to the victory without having to cheat Cross. Choosing to stay true to Cross should also have its own set on sexy times with him, so that player is not punished for making one choice over another. That would also improve on the replayability of the game.
Within the game itself it sounded like there would be definitive "Alternatives" to breaking the curse(s) placed on him, so I'm certain there's ways to not cheat on Cross.
 

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Very short on content, but pretty promising. The writing is solid and, while basic, the premise is interesting. You guys just need to fix the the options menu forcing all the splash screens on you from the main menu.

- On skipping text in general, I appreciate just a simple holding down a button to skip texts, the auto fast skip is nice and fine, I just like to hold down a button myself.
You can hold E to skip.
 

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Never understood the appeal of hypnosis/ brainwash or mind control.
Basically:
Bypass dates, bribing with expensive gifts and honeyed words, (and no guarantee of success even then) to get straight to action.
Pretty damn appealing.
Like, through hypnosis they can get their little marionette doll to "consent"
Nono you don't get it at all, the whole point is to bypass that "consent" stage entirely, and without fuss at that. :whistle::coffee:
There are all manner of ways this could be fun and useful, like making them believe that walking around naked is normal for example.
Or in one game i played the guy made her believe that she was wearing clothes while in reality she didn't, and then she went outside and at some point was made to realize that she was naked, that sudden shock was exciting to watch.
Lots of fun if done right. :giggle::coffee:
 
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Basically:
Bypass dates, bribing with expensive gifts and honeyed words, (and no guarantee of success even then) to get straight to action.
Pretty damn appealing.

Nono you don't get it at all, the whole point is to bypass that "consent" stage entirely, and without fuss at that. :whistle::coffee:
There are all manner of ways this could be fun and useful, like making them believe that walking around naked is normal for example.
Or in one game i played the guy made her believe that she was wearing clothes while in reality she didn't, and then she went outside and at some point was made to realize that she was naked, that sudden shock was exciting to watch.
Lots of fun if done right. :giggle::coffee:
This is what I'm talking about when I said I dont understand the appeal. lol My thought process is correct, you're just not connecting the dots because you don't understand what hypnosis is.

(Edit: well, im sure you know what hypnosis is, im just saying. )

Hypnosis, the person whom is hypnotized loses all senses of self awareness, loss of bodily autonomy, they're not in control of what they think or their actions i.e. therefore they cannot consent. At that point they're more like just a walking non-decay-able corpes, it'd be no different than if you just bought a blow-up doll.

"Bypassing consent to go straight to the action" is what you'd call "non-consensual" with extra word gymnastics steps.
 

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Hypnosis, the person whom is hypnotized loses all senses of self awareness, loss of bodily autonomy, they're not in control of what they think or their actions i.e. therefore they cannot consent. At that point they're more like just a walking non-decay-able corpes, it'd be no different than if you just bought a blow-up doll.
Not necessarily.
They can be self-aware or whatever if that is what the controlling party wants, just unable to act against commands.
They DO become living dolls yes, but that's exactly the appeal of it all.

Do you think humanity wants to build robots just because? It's pretty much the same thing. We want to control. Everything.
You don't need to convince, don't need any consents, you can do what you want with them. Convenient. Empowering.
It IS rape in a sense, but without all the sobbing, or tears, or violence, or blackmailing, etc. In other words: No fuss.

Closer to getting it now? :whistle::coffee:
 
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Not necessarily.
They can be self-aware or whatever if that is what the controlling party wants, just unable to act against commands.
They DO become living dolls yes, but that's exactly the appeal of it all.

Do you think humanity wants to build robots just because? It's pretty much the same thing. We want to control. Everything.
You don't need to convince, don't need any consents, you can do what you want with them. Convenient. Empowering.
It IS rape in a sense, but without all the sobbing, or tears, or violence, or blackmailing, etc. In other words: No fuss.

Closer to getting it now? :whistle::coffee:
Nope, no closer than before. What you look at as empowering, control, domination, those are all illusions. Pseudo empowerment & pseudo control. Its not the same as if breaking them into submitting to their most basic primary needs & desires.
 
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