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Keep in mind that many of us, including other game writers feel that the tragedy is actually the weakest part of the game as it is almost jumping the shark and has everybody acting like dumb idiots and the MC like a totally different character than he was the rest of the game.

For me personally, the twist in the Story, the complete change of tone is a clusterfuck of ME3 ending proportions. It's like Dragon Age II, where no matter whether you do everything right or not, you can't save anybody in the end.
ME3 left much to be desired. Never played DAII. But I did hate LA Noire back in the day because it was a beautiful game that forced you to arrest the wrong people because letting them go would spoil the big "twist" at the end. Ugh.

Sorry, back on topic. Bummed to hear that it's not just getting side swiped by the decision but that the characterization also abruptly changes. Your characters have to be your lode stone through the story and any change has to arise naturally. You should be able to watch the transition occur. Your reader should be able to trust your characters behavior.
 
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the game was fantastic :love: the interim result :sick: real catastrophe:devilish: what's next:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:
 
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Played the game in every possible way now with every possible decisions, and several times each. Playing videogames in General for over 30 years now, but only a few of them made me cry. This game did (thank you liam), and games that causes such deep emotions are always very valuable. so thank you for this (still hope for a happy end at least ;) )
 
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Ankhesenamun

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Absolutely fantastic game, I replayed it so many times with each trait to see what I got out of each choice! Solid story, likeable characters, comedic moments, dramatic moments, sexy moments, it's all there!

Now, I'm left to internally wage war on the decision of who is the best waifu... Is it Rena or Melissa?

(Sorry Megan, you're bland and hardly interesting and I'm not as much of a romantic as you are)

(And we all can agree fuck Leah and her psycho shit)
(Literally fuck her, because she is pretty hot too)

(The college girls are okay too)
 

Journey95

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Despite the divisive comments here i'm starting the game now..if a sex game can cause so many emotions from players there should be some good writing there at least because most of the time I don't care for the characters..only about how hot they are so I fap to them!
 
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Yeah I already heard something like that and apparently many hated it.

Currently in the middle of Episode 3 already, really enjoying it so far. The writing is pretty good for a game like this (also refreshing, no incest & midget MC). Melissa is my favourite so far, hot (unique look) and a fun personality. Meghan is nice but boring af..despite having options to bang Melissa the MC still seems to only have real feelings for Meghan, hope that changes. Liam is a true bro and hilarious
 
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