This story is pretty amazing... I downloaded this for the sex scenes... but the story got to me. It makes me wish there were more endings. I like how it straight up tells you that the ending was impossible to avoid. I really wish there was some crazy way to save both girls.
Also... 1 small note that bugs me but probably won't bug anyone else. The paramedics call in a 4th degree burn patient. True that there are burns ranging up to 6th degree... but... 4th-6th degree burns are ONLY burns caused by radiation. And 4th degree are the only radiation burns you can survive. Honestly, serious 3rd degree burns are usually fatal, and is what she would have in that fire.
Overall though, very happy with this, love the writing.