Another great installment! Your writing improves with each chapter, and the H-scenes only get sexier!
Just a few notes:
While I really do love all the characters (Stella is my gf's new favorite! She insisted on doing my makeup today and gave me huge winged eyeliner like hers, and it's so pretty!), I think you are reaching capacity. Don't get me wrong; you are juggling what you have pretty well, but once Rika and Jessica enter the mix (and maybe Arisu?), not leaving anyone behind will get a lot harder.
On another note, with updates coming every few months, I find the overarching plot hard to follow. A short synopsis at the start of each chapter would really help, I think.
Either way, this is quickly becoming our favorite game on this site. You are doing wonderfully, and we are really excited to see where this goes next.
Just a few notes:
While I really do love all the characters (Stella is my gf's new favorite! She insisted on doing my makeup today and gave me huge winged eyeliner like hers, and it's so pretty!), I think you are reaching capacity. Don't get me wrong; you are juggling what you have pretty well, but once Rika and Jessica enter the mix (and maybe Arisu?), not leaving anyone behind will get a lot harder.
On another note, with updates coming every few months, I find the overarching plot hard to follow. A short synopsis at the start of each chapter would really help, I think.
Either way, this is quickly becoming our favorite game on this site. You are doing wonderfully, and we are really excited to see where this goes next.
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