- Jun 14, 2018
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Really nice game man. The fact that you give us so many choices and have control over how the characters are gonna play out etc is amazing. Can't wait for more content, great work so far!
- Thread starter AndroMax
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- Oct 31, 2019
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Ahh. I see what the problem is, I'll get right on fixing it.
- Jan 10, 2018
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Wow. This version fixed every little thing I saw wrong with the game, bar 3 minor ones:
1. Sometimes there's still odd capitalization, but that's easy to stomp.
2. The rope thing still bugs me, but a quick dialogue fix can make that go away. Just have her get caugh as she reaches the botom of the cliff with the rope still tied to her, and have her forget she's tied when she swims. No one ties a heavy rope to themselves when going for a risky swim, and
3. No one stutters in their thoughts. The MC does here in a few cases, though. Maybe she's talking aloud to herself?
Some typos:
You don't "doze off to sleep" you doze or fall asleep.
I'm at my limit for attachment size, so will do some further posts with a few other mistakes.
I'm really pleased with this game, though, and am adding myself to your patreon supporters.
1. Sometimes there's still odd capitalization, but that's easy to stomp.
2. The rope thing still bugs me, but a quick dialogue fix can make that go away. Just have her get caugh as she reaches the botom of the cliff with the rope still tied to her, and have her forget she's tied when she swims. No one ties a heavy rope to themselves when going for a risky swim, and
3. No one stutters in their thoughts. The MC does here in a few cases, though. Maybe she's talking aloud to herself?
Some typos:
You don't "doze off to sleep" you doze or fall asleep.
I'm at my limit for attachment size, so will do some further posts with a few other mistakes.
I'm really pleased with this game, though, and am adding myself to your patreon supporters.
I was going to change the rope swimming scene to her trying to swim across without a rope when the bad guys show up, but I forgot to replace the dialogue in that scene.
Thanks for pointing out all those typos, It can be hard to catch them all. You're right about the stuttering when she's thinking, I'll use a different method to show hesitation when she thinks to herself.
Thanks so much Joe Steel for your support I really appreciate it.
- Jul 18, 2017
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As mentioned by Mister_M When you choose to have your female characters hair in the back and then choose a Hair color it won't let you have it in the back position and trust me i tried a few ways to get the hair in the back but it won't let you leave the character customization screen so you must choose to have the hair in the front and then the color Please fix this if you can and thanks.
Keep up the great work, looking forward to what happens next.
Keep up the great work, looking forward to what happens next.
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- Aug 4, 2019
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I know it's only v2, but the character creation needs some fixing. Selecting "hair back" and then the hair colour, it defaults to "hair front". What's more is that I wanted my character to have brown hair, with it at the back. The game wanted it to be black, and at the front. Please fix.
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