Very short... But a nice start...
Cool to see something different for a change and Futa/Trans content that looks like it will be a give an take relationship, not Dom one way or the other.
None of us are perfect, but I'm a hater of very poor wording and grammar. Even if English isn't your first language there is no reason you can't run a script by somebody that it is or has a good grasp.
I took a quick run through yours and attached quick re-write. If anyone uses this be warned I changed the names.
Anyway, I look forward to the next installment. I hope there will be a lot more content next time though...