VN Ren'Py Agent Horny [v0.7 (ACT 2) Full] [Mr.Creep Games]

[rdmsvg]

VN means "visual novel" The abbreviation form and term is VN.

It doesn't make sense. It's from the text of this game.
sc "Tonight, we have a simple grab and go - a small time drug dealer and his sister."
"This is not your typical Alabama VN dude. (Yes, player, they are talking to you)"
sc "Recently, he started moving amounts of drugs that are way out of his league. We need to find out, who is sourcing him."
sc "We have info that tonight, most of his crew is out of the city, so it should be only him and his sister, mind you she is one crazy bitch."

 

[hu lover]

It doesn't make sense. It's from the text of this game.
sc "Tonight, we have a simple grab and go - a small time drug dealer and his sister."
"This is not your typical Alabama VN dude. (Yes, player, they are talking to you)"
sc "Recently, he started moving amounts of drugs that are way out of his league. We need to find out, who is sourcing him."
sc "We have info that tonight, most of his crew is out of the city, so it should be only him and his sister, mind you she is one crazy bitch."

That is pretty crazy, and you are right that doesn't make sense.

 

[Deleted member 3494014]

It doesn't make sense. It's from the text of this game.
sc "Tonight, we have a simple grab and go - a small time drug dealer and his sister."
"This is not your typical Alabama VN dude. (Yes, player, they are talking to you)"
sc "Recently, he started moving amounts of drugs that are way out of his league. We need to find out, who is sourcing him."
sc "We have info that tonight, most of his crew is out of the city, so it should be only him and his sister, mind you she is one crazy bitch."

A lot of VNs have incest, but this one doesn't. There is a running joke about the amount of incest in the state of Alabama... the word sister was mentioned in the previous sentence... and this was in V0.1 when I decided to have fun breaking the 4th wall. They are clearly looking at the camera, and there is even this bit (Yes, player, they are talking to you) so even people who suck at the context can get it.

 

[rdmsvg]

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A lot of VNs have incest, but this one doesn't. There is a running joke about the amount of incest in the state of Alabama... the word sister was mentioned in the previous sentence... and this was in V0.1 when I decided to have fun breaking the 4th wall. They are clearly looking at the camera, and there is even this bit (Yes, player, they are talking to you) so even people who suck at the context can get it.

Thank you for the clarification.
But for a Russian, it is not very clear)))
If I say one of the Russian idioms, no one will understand at all - except Russians))))

 

[brianzzz]

walkthrough mod?

 

[UnfinishedSentenc]

Creampies and Pregnancy?

 

[sisco1986]

the game was ok till the first sex scene LOL the dialogue is soooooo bad, is like watching a bad porn starring a 18 year old kid

"im gonna destroy your tight pussy" ROFL

 

[Sylaann]

Are the smileys in the dialogue really necessary?
Everyone has just a surname why MC has Surname + name ?
Maybe remove the thank message at the end of the 1st part? it announce v0.2 but we are allready playing v0.5

And imo choices should have consequences, 2 choices having the same result (sniper or grenade launcher) doesn't really make any sens, if the result is the same just don't let us chose (same for sex scene "end" or "watch again" isn't really a choice when we can reload). I really hate fake choices.

 

[Eonor]

Made a compressed Android port of Agent Horny v0.5.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

Links:

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[Sennistrasz]

Are the smileys in the dialogue really necessary?
Everyone has just a surname why MC has Surname + name ?
Maybe remove the thank message at the end of the 1st part? it announce v0.2 but we are allready playing v0.5

And imo choices should have consequences, 2 choices having the same result (sniper or grenade launcher) doesn't really make any sens, if the result is the same just don't let us chose (same for sex scene "end" or "watch again" isn't really a choice when we can reload). I really hate fake choices.

It seems having "choices" are just there so that the dev can pretend this is not a kinetic novel. I'm hoping with the new tag system, it becomes more difficult to weasel around such technicalities like this or landladies and so on.

 

[rdmsvg]

MrCreepGames

Okay, see you later. *door closes*

Should be in parentheses.
Okay, see you later. (door closes)

Fuck... should I call him? We had such a great time together, and I can't stop thinking about him. But what if he thinks I'm too needy? On top of that, he's probably busy at work. I could call him tonight to say thanks for driving me to work and maybe have a chat.

And a girl's thoughts should be in *********

*Fuck... should I call him? We had such a great time together, and I can't stop thinking about him. But what if he thinks I'm too needy? On top of that, he's probably busy at work. I could call him tonight to say thanks for driving me to work and maybe have a chat.*

 

[WhY NoT?!]

Dev, I don't know if anyone else brought this to your attention, but mate, it's weird to read every time the full name of every one of the people in the game, especially of the MC, because he is the most we see in the game.

 

[Deleted member 3494014]

Are the smileys in the dialogue really necessary?
Everyone has just a surname why MC has Surname + name ?
Maybe remove the thank message at the end of the 1st part? it announce v0.2 but we are allready playing v0.5

And imo choices should have consequences, 2 choices having the same result (sniper or grenade launcher) doesn't really make any sens, if the result is the same just don't let us chose (same for sex scene "end" or "watch again" isn't really a choice when we can reload). I really hate fake choices.

I am kind of having enough of this place, so this will be my last response to comments like this one or criticism that's focused on fundamental things in my approach, things that will never change. I wonder if some people here are just trolls or have limited comprehension abilities.

"Are the smileys in the dialogue really necessary?" You mean the 2-3 times there are emojis in V0.1 and V0.2? That never show up again in later updates?

"Everyone has just a surname why MC has Surname + name ?" Beside "The Maid" all characters have a first name, some have both a first and last name, so I have no idea WTF are you even talking about.

"Maybe remove the thank message at the end of the 1st part? it announce v0.2 but we are allready playing v0.5"

No, this is not a problem for my patrons because they play every update when the update is out, plus some of them use those screens for save points. I am not going to fuck with that because someone who pirates the game finds those screens an inconvenience.

"And imo choices should have consequences, 2 choices having the same result (sniper or grenade launcher) doesn't really make any sens, if the result is the same just don't let us chose (same for sex scene "end" or "watch again" isn't really a choice when we can reload). I really hate fake choices."

The "end" or "watch again" is not a choice... it's something I decided to code extra so those who did not save before the sex scene don't have to click back so many times and can just rewatch the scene.

The proper choices in the sex scene are those who control what type of sexual content and what type of foreplay the player will pick, so those who want a more dominant or sensual option can pick what they like, and those who, for example, don't like footjob can skip it, and yeah, you can't do that in a KN can you?

Why do I even bother... Some of the comments since the leak were actually useful for helping me make a decision on something, and the community here won't like it for sure . It's a shame that because of some loud minority, the rest who just downloaded and enjoyed the content for free, will now lose too, but hey it's not my problem.

 

[robrize2169]

played this from the beginning last night. i thought it was amazing, sure some of things i read about are good points, but in the end, the dev has created an amazing game. the story is more interesting than most of the games on here, and i have played ALOT of them. i prefer stories such as this where the mc is not a pussy and has to figure out why girls don't like him. boring. and who doesn't want to be the leader of a special forces group that goes around doing cool shit like this.
the girls are smoking hot and the mc has them eating out of his hand, even his hot boss can't say no to him for long.. well i could talk more about it
Can't wait for the next update. keep up the great work Mr. Creepy Games.

 

[Deleted member 3494014]

played this from the beginning last night. i thought it was amazing, sure some of things i read about are good points, but in the end, the dev has created an amazing game. the story is more interesting than most of the games on here, and i have played ALOT of them. i prefer stories such as this where the mc is not a pussy and has to figure out why girls don't like him. boring. and who doesn't want to be the leader of a special forces group that goes around doing cool shit like this.
the girls are smoking hot and the mc has them eating out of his hand, even his hot boss can't say no to him for long.. well i could talk more about it
Can't wait for the next update. keep up the great work Mr. Creepy Games.

You are probably close to my average fans here and supporters on Patreon/Itch. People who like something different, interesting, cool, and lewd with a strong male lead.

Part of the reason I make this exact game is because, as a player, I find a lot of the AVNs boring. The only exceptions are those similar to mine in one way or another. In a lot of AVNs, you have people talking to each other between the sex scenes, and that's it—generic stories that pretty much devolve into dating sims (and yes, a lot of people need exactly that). Some of those games perfect the character dynamics and have interesting fetishes to compensate for the boring or nonexistent story, but most don't do enough, at least for my taste.

And yeah, there are people who will always lose their sh*t and disregard any game if they can't get their "choice fix". But I can't please everyone, so it doesn't matter.

 

[derpdurp]

After the dev seems confrontational about feedback in the above posts IDK is there any point in giving what I thought to be constructive criticism, but I'll just say a couple things. Renders were great, grammar was quite good, I ran into no bugs, but..

The characters and dialogue feel a bit weird, everyone seems to talk in a bit unnatural manner. The MC might be the worst offender in some ways. Some of the longest sentences should be spread to two screens and given a bit of a more conversational/natural touch.

Might be too late to change anything in this game, but I do hope that for the next games if you want to make it actiony and having a fast moving plot, there's so many ways to have a strong and/or confident main character that isn't like this weird kind of hollow super agent. Sort of similar problems plagued The Mason Gambit too.

 

[Sylaann]

I am kind of having enough of this place, so this will be my last response to comments like this one or criticism that's focused on fundamental things in my approach, things that will never change. I wonder if some people here are just trolls or have limited comprehension abilities.

"Are the smileys in the dialogue really necessary?" You mean the 2-3 times there are emojis in V0.1 and V0.2? That never show up again in later updates?

"Everyone has just a surname why MC has Surname + name ?" Beside "The Maid" all characters have a first name, some have both a first and last name, so I have no idea WTF are you even talking about.

"Maybe remove the thank message at the end of the 1st part? it announce v0.2 but we are allready playing v0.5"

No, this is not a problem for my patrons because they play every update when the update is out, plus some of them use those screens for save points. I am not going to fuck with that because someone who pirates the game finds those screens an inconvenience.

"And imo choices should have consequences, 2 choices having the same result (sniper or grenade launcher) doesn't really make any sens, if the result is the same just don't let us chose (same for sex scene "end" or "watch again" isn't really a choice when we can reload). I really hate fake choices."

The "end" or "watch again" is not a choice... it's something I decided to code extra so those who did not save before the sex scene don't have to click back so many times and can just rewatch the scene.

The proper choices in the sex scene are those who control what type of sexual content and what type of foreplay the player will pick, so those who want a more dominant or sensual option can pick what they like, and those who, for example, don't like footjob can skip it, and yeah, you can't do that in a KN can you?

Why do I even bother... Some of the comments since the leak were actually useful for helping me make a decision on something, and the community here won't like it for sure . It's a shame that because of some loud minority, the rest who just downloaded and enjoyed the content for free, will now lose too, but hey it's not my problem.

1. Yeah i mean the 2-3 time early (it would take you 30 secs to edit)
2.Every girl is name with just her surname (and there isn't a lot of male) that's why I asked.
3. You know people can save at litterally any point, they don't need the dev to say them "save now" players aren't kids (at least not the one playing your game, I hope)
4. Still your choices aren't real one (just like someone says they exist to avoid kinetic novel tag, yourstory is really linear, and I never said it was a bad thing to have a linear story)

5. Yeah i didn't pay to play your game (still when i find a nice game with cool dev I do, guess what's different with you), and guess what? the way you talk and just don't care for the opinion of people not paying you, I probably never will.

"It doesn't bother my patrons cause they don't start from the time everytime" you do realise your patrons aren't people buying your game blindly and finding after if it's good or bad, they play first and if they like the game and wants to support you they become patrons. So maybe don't be a dick and you'll have more. I was just suggesting some quality of life for your game you don't want to listen to anyone that's your choice.

P.S : the sex scene being spamming left mouse button for 300 time in a row... big no.


But i must disagree with the previous message, that's clearly not one the best game I have played on this site, and I also have played a lot.

Now that being said this game has potential to become a good one,II wish you the best of luck with this.

 

[Badgerlad]

Just played the last two updates in one go, and I like that we get some backstory on our MC, he started out a little one dimensional "he's a badass, don't question it", so it was nice to see what made him into the guy he is today.

The clothing store girl was super hot, more of her please.

 

[Deleted member 3494014]

Just played the last two updates in one go, and I like that we get some backstory on our MC, he started out a little one dimensional "he's a badass, don't question it", so it was nice to see what made him into the guy he is today.

The clothing store girl was super hot, more of her please.

"The clothing store girl was super hot, more of her please." Claire? Yep . And Yeah, it was time to bring some of the backstory, and this flashback was just scratching the surface in that regard, but I am a fan of slowly revealing stuff in terms of the story, so it won't be fast. Some people are just not patient with games and movies and immediately went "Ugh, he is just some one-dimensionally boring playboy" after the first few releases, but there is A LOT more to him.

 

[Deleted member 3494014]

After the dev seems confrontational about feedback in the above posts IDK is there any point in giving what I thought to be constructive criticism, but I'll just say a couple things. Renders were great, grammar was quite good, I ran into no bugs, but..

The characters and dialogue feel a bit weird, everyone seems to talk in a bit unnatural manner. The MC might be the worst offender in some ways. Some of the longest sentences should be spread to two screens and given a bit of a more conversational/natural touch.

Might be too late to change anything in this game, but I do hope that for the next games if you want to make it actiony and having a fast moving plot, there's so many ways to have a strong and/or confident main character that isn't like this weird kind of hollow super agent. Sort of similar problems plagued The Mason Gambit too.

That's proper constructive criticism. You talk about things that can be improved. But some people require fundamental changes to the way the game works that won't work for the size of the game. Or things that are small, not a problem (for me), or not worth dealing with.

On the confrontational part, I am just being honest while still trying to be civil. But yes, I am not in my most patient mood. Have that in mind. I busted my ass off for 4 months to make almost double the usual content. V0.5 (Full) was not only big but extremely complex in terms of assets, posing, environmental work, lighting, making A LOT of new characters, both female and male, optimizing because of my laptop GPU, etc. Then, 15 days after the update is out, someone goes and leaks it. And on top of that, some people complain about "choices" when there is a pinned post on the first page that specifically warns them that the game is not for them and that the choices in this Visual Novel affect some scenes but don't affect the grand story. They can't even comprehend that this story won't work with big branches and multiple endings. All they know is their "choices and control". If you were in my place, you wouldn't be patient with them either. And no, I don't agree that major path branches, and control over the main narrative are a requirement for a game to be a VN.

On your constructive criticism. Sure, I don't disagree with this.

"The characters and dialogue feel a bit weird, everyone seems to talk in a bit unnatural manner."

My first goal was to deal with grammar and typos, which are more or less on a high enough level right now, so they are no longer tasks that require a lot of extra work for me. But I am neither a native speaker nor a writer, so sometimes things can sound unnatural. I think that the current quality is okay for a lot of people, and I will keep working on it. Will it ever be good enough for most people? I don't know.

"Some of the longest sentences should be spread to two screens."

Yeah sure, I do that most of the time. But can I miss a few screens where the text goes over the buttons. I don't think it's a fatal error, but it's something that I will improve further.

One thing that a lot of players of VNs miss (I am not talking about you in this case) is that most devs are a one-man show. We can only do so much if we want to produce enough content. We see a lot more that's wrong and can be improved than even the biggest "haters" will ever notice. But at the end of the day, we have to pick our priorities very carefully.