VN Ren'Py Completed Alexandra [v1.0] [PTOLEMY]

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a Ptolemy Game with JPGs? :eazyHype:

 

[BizeBire]

Wasn't really interested until I noticed it's a Ptolemy game. And, as usual for him, it has the makings of a fantastic project.

I like the writing, as always. Seems a bit of a mystery going on with the protagonists fits of rage, we might get a little bit of mystical stuff going on.

I like how Ptolemy got MUCH better at rendering characters inside a scene than in the beginnings of Dana. No more generic characters showing up "outside" a scene, everything is nicely placed within it.

I also absolutely LOVE the Alexandra model. Fantastic rendering, fantastic body proportions (we'll finally get a high quality game with normal-breast-sized love interest), great feet.

Can't wait for updates!

 

[Zippity]

It looks pretty decent, but I get the feeling it will be fraught with drama/melodrama... Over the top type or not, who knows... I have a pretty good idea the types of story paths this could take based off what is shown so far, and they are paths I've seen lots of times before... If it goes into actual full development, who knows, it could be very pleasantly surprising... But I can see possible cock blocking in this story's future already with the crime boss father and low station employee protagonist having a love/romance affair with his daughter, that the father may or may not approve of... I can hope it doesn't go that kind of route, but I get that sinking feeling it might...

 

[Namco15]

if it's a Ptolemy game I want to see another character like Dana:heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes: smart strong independent and super hot woman , good luck with the new project.

 

[Viatovic]

I have the feeling that Ptolemy has been watching American Gods...
Alexandra calling the MC "puppy" as does Laura with Shadow Moon...

About the game concept... it's cool.
Violence, danger, love and good renders. The only problem, as someone already said, is the corpse on the water.

 

[xb]

Nice start. I'd love the very last line of the game to be something like "Shame I'm going to have to tell them they're siblings." Just as a poke at Patreon.

 

[Ptolemy]

The first thing that comes to mind after playing the alpha is i feel bad for Alex that she has to end up with such a piece of shit MC...and that's a terrible first impression to have.

So is it all doom and gloom...well no,i love the mob boss with a beautiful daughter setting. The daughter is a gorgeous young woman, but obviously very shielded away from the outside world living in a gilded cage so to speak. Seeing who her father is, i doubt she has had any real love in her life yet either. I think the mob boss and the goons look decent as well...you know they look like mobsters which they are intended to look like There could be lot of interesting situations that could happen with the father and the mob so that's all good.
The renders look decent. They don't look any worse than in Intimate Relation...neither do they look any better.
What else do i like...oh the MC doesn't look like generic Michael 7 so that's good.

So what do i not like?...Well the MC is a despicable piece of crap.There is nothing relatable about that character...i'm honestly kind of lost for words as to why Ptolemy thought that was a good idea. Anyway that's just my personal feeling about the MC maybe rest of the players feel differently about that character. The overall story direction thanks to the MC is really not to my likeing.

I know it might seem as i'm being very negative but i belive if Ptolemy reworks the story and characters a bit it would have much more appeal to players.

For example why not make the MC a young man from a small town in the middle of nowhere who was unhappy and wanted more from life. His Cousin Dan offered to organize him an appartment and come work with him until he finds what he is looking for. Now i know it's a bit cheezy but it's also much more relatable to the players then some maniac who kills people because they looked at him wrong. From there the MC can meet the daughter, boss and his goons as it is right now.

Overall i would turn the game to more of a romantic route and slow it down a bit (i know many of you are screaming MILKING right about now but it's necessary for the game to feel more natural and have a better flow...it is afterall the chase and anticipation that is most exhilarating). The MC and the daugher spending time at work,sneaking out for some dates and such. All of that behind the father of course. Even the pool event could be turned around...MC is not a killer but if his woman is being threatened with rape and murder...well he will kill...in the name of LOVE :happyblush. after it could unravel like it is now in game, they run to MCs appartment, MC goes back to mob boss house, gets captured admits he killed the bad guys to save the daughter, they go back to MC appartment find that MC wasnt lying and MC earns respect with the boss, boss and daughter leave the apartment....BUT this is where the first sex scene could happen...let me explain. something traumatic has just happened MC had killed a man...a bad man but a man non the less and the daughter was almost raped and murdered...realising that she owes her life to the MC she somehow sneaks out and goes to MCs appartment,where they make sexy sex for the first time.

Obviously the stuff the i wrote won't fit itto the alpha time line. Many of you might think my version is stupid and all girled up but if you look at the most played and successful games most of them have romance in them...hell even Dana started out as a romance between brother and sister not the fuck fest it is now XD

Now admittedly i'm no writer...as you can clearly see from my incoherent rambling so take it as you want. Ptolemy does what Ptolemy wants and i have no sway over him but i just thought i give my 2 cents.

PS: Sorry for all the spelling mistakes,i'm really tired :angel:

No offence, but God that would be boring to write.
Farmer boy who falls for the princess......I have nothing to add to that type of story.
I much more prefer a conflicted MC, who doesn't trust himself. Who can grow and have an arc.
Not trying to disparage what you're saying. And maybe it would appeal to more people.
But making the MC a blank slate, or the typical "good guy"....i'd slit my veins in a week, trying to write that.

And having sex that night.
"Ohh, you saved my life. I'm in love with you already.
Here, have some pussy."
NO NO NO NO NO

Sorry, but that's how I feel.

 

[Sam]

No offence, but God that would be boring to write.
Farmer boy who falls for the princess......I have nothing to add to that type of story.
I much more prefer a conflicted MC, who doesn't trust himself. Who can grow and have an arc.
Not trying to disparage what you're saying. And maybe it would appeal to more people.
But making the MC a blank slate, or the typical "good guy"....i'd slit my veins in a week, trying to write that.

And having sex that night.
"Ohh, you saved my life. I'm in love with you already.
Here, have some pussy."
NO NO NO NO NO

Sorry, but that's how I feel.

I agree, there needs to be some conflict.

Perhaps if the character he kills in the intro tried to rob him or something, that would make it a bit more relatable to some players? Regardless, I don't think relatability is too important in a porn game, half of them deal with incest, mind control, rape, etc anyway.

 

[User_10739]

Loved this start up. Yes MC is a killer but from the storyline he is unable to control it, but you can see that the D seems to hold the antidote to his rage. I don't think of the MC as a piece of crap as it is a little more complicated than being premeditated... He doesn't choose to kill, a force/condition compels him to.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Kinda funny to see all the gripers complaining about the lack of incest considering that most of their fav games are currently "homeless", on hold, or possibly even abandoned for exactly that reason.

 

[hopeless]

omg am i the only one who don't like ptolemy games? all the guys here like little girls...lol hype hype hype..

in the end, this story is nothing new. very easy. bad guy with mental disorder and a murderer, become settled and work for a mafia boss, daughter of mafia boss gets in trouble, psychologically mental ill psycho kills bandits, become one of family member and with his fucked up brain its the best habitat and he will kill people and get payed for that and fuck the mafia boss daughter...
better just turn the complete story into incest. mental ill bully goes to uncle villa and try to fuck aunt and 2 female cousins. that would be better.

 

[Dastardly]

I think it should be called 'The Beauty and the Beast'
But that's just my opinion

 

[Dastardly]

omg am i the only one who don't like ptolemy games? all the guys here like little girls...lol hype hype hype..

in the end, this story is nothing new. very easy. bad guy with mental disorder and a murderer, become settled and work for a mafia boss, daughter of mafia boss gets in trouble, psychologically mental ill psycho kills bandits, become one of family member and with his fucked up brain its the best habitat and he will kill people and get payed for that and fuck the mafia boss daughter...
better just turn the complete story into incest. mental ill bully goes to uncle villa and try to fuck aunt and 2 female cousins. that would be better.

My Momma always told me... If you don't like it... STFU! :test3:

 

[Paprika]

Incest, it needs incest. Yeah, I know about Patreon, but regardless of that, it's what it needs and it's what most people like.
Vanilla porn is widely available; incest porn only on these games, it's what sets them apart.
The patreon brokering will have to be replaced because the incest demand won't disappear, quite the contrary; and offer always meets demand.

 

[tek]

Loving the look of this unnamed project Ptolemy, renders are great as always , story line so far is good.Can't wait to see more!!

 

[Claudio83]

What means "IR"?

 

[hopeless]

What means "IR"?

holy moly.... IR = in reallife

 

[BizeBire]

holy moly.... IR = in reallife

Dude, you're hopeless...

IRL = In Real Life (because letters matter).

IR = Intimate Relations, the other game Ptolemy makes.

 

[azertymat]

sooo frustrating! I thinked it was a full game. Hopefully it's a good preview.

 

[User_23654]

Added a mac version.

 

[Eye-switcher]

Whats your Characters name:

"Mickey blue Eyes" naturally