VN Ren'Py Completed Alison Fall of the Apple [v1.0] [OneManVN]

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

The way I see it is... The rape scenes are integral to the story/narrative; skipping them would be like missing half the game; I don't particularly like rape scenes, but in this case, just saying "such and such a character was raped or abused" takes you out of the game somewhat, but if you see it then the rest of the game is much more immersive.

On the whole Jessica and Maria situation... They will always be a big part of MCs life, just maybe not in a romantic way. MC is finally getting over losing her, for her to then come back is going to be too much for him to handle I think. Jessica has been through too much to just 'pick up where they left off'. Maria has no doubt heard from Jessica that her dad is a hero, so I don't see there being any problems with that relationship.

Overall, I think it's an awesome game! I've finished the love route, just working through Harem now (yes, I know the next version is harem, but I want to finish all three before that's released)

 

[OneManVN]

The way I see it is... The rape scenes are integral to the story/narrative; skipping them would be like missing half the game; I don't particularly like rape scenes, but in this case, just saying "such and such a character was raped or abused" takes you out of the game somewhat, but if you see it then the rest of the game is much more immersive.

On the whole Jessica and Maria situation... They will always be a big part of MCs life, just maybe not in a romantic way. MC is finally getting over losing her, for her to then come back is going to be too much for him to handle I think. Jessica has been through too much to just 'pick up where they left off'. Maria has no doubt heard from Jessica that her dad is a hero, so I don't see there being any problems with that relationship.

Overall, I think it's an awesome game! I've finished the love route, just working through Harem now (yes, I know the next version is harem, but I want to finish all three before that's released)

Even more, reasons to play Harem now Catch up on the story and learn to love or hate the cast. Next update should bring a whole lot more content and some serious order in that house!

 

[Avaron1974]

The way I see the Jessica thing....

It's obviously he loves her, he always will, she was a huge part of his life and they have a child together so will always remain a huge part of his life.

However, despite not giving up on her and believing her to be alive he had slowly been moving on since he met Mel. It took a big shake up in his life like Alison/Alice appearing to give him the last push but move on he has.

On Jessica's side. She's been abused for years and while she never gave up hope of him finding her her body and mind have taken severe abuse. Eventually she may be able to have a happy relationship but it's going to take her a long time to get over and she known he's moved on.

Jessica is probably going to focus on sorting her own life out and looking after their daughter.

Unless you got the bad ending then......

 

[OneManVN]

The way I see the Jessica thing....

It's obviously he loves her, he always will, she was a huge part of his life and they have a child together so will always remain a huge part of his life.

However, despite not giving up on her and believing her to be alive he had slowly been moving on since he met Mel. It took a big shake up in his life like Alison/Alice appearing to give him the last push but move on he has.

On Jessica's side. She's been abused for years and while she never gave up hope of him finding her her body and mind have taken severe abuse. Eventually she may be able to have a happy relationship but it's going to take her a long time to get over and she known he's moved on.

Jessica is probably going to focus on sorting her own life out and looking after their daughter.

Unless you got the bad ending then......

Yeah, unless you got the "Redacted." at which point... You'll be mad, and then who knows what happens next. I have no idea tbh.

 

[Avaron1974]

Yeah, unless you got the "Redacted." at which point... You'll be mad, and then who knows what happens next. I have no idea tbh.

That "redacted" is a bit spoilery so left that bit out.

 

[OneManVN]

That "redacted" is a bit spoilery so left that bit out.

Like I said when I first released the build. (Which btw has been updated 4 times now quietly...) I regret nothing. Also, Ava? Kekekeke.

 

[lionarslan]

OneManVN, I have a question. Why is harem route done better than relationship route? I mean, it's written better, no sudden change of scenes, story is smoother and more logical, characters more alive and so on. Frankly speaking, I thought that relashionship route is like a base one, harem route is for porn lovers or something like that. Am I totally wrong? 'Cause those two route look like two different VNs in the same setting. The second one is just lighter and more easy going.
And another thing. I played relationship route before (0.4.1, if I remember correct), then you rewrote it. New version... well, it's not bad, not bad at all, but it became much worse than before. MC speaks with Alison/Alice, next screen is mayor swearing at his employee - that sudden change of scenes (especially comparing to harem route) confuses without any reason. If story before was thrilling and with unexpected twists then now the thrill is gone and it looks like I watching another Hollywood blockbuster with predictable storyline. I remember what I felt when I saw Jessica as a slave for the first time, it was a really good plot twist. Now it still looks good (when Eric and Number One discuss Jessica with her and Maria as a background), but it's like movie cliche, that's expected and we all know what happens next. Even when I read/watch new content it was the same, nothing unexpected and out of movie cliches. Sorry, if it looks ubrupt and too... watery, I don't know how it can be described more discretely. You are a good author and your game is a real pleasure to read.

 

[Avaron1974]

Like I said when I first released the build. (Which btw has been updated 4 times now quietly...) I regret nothing. Also, Ava? Kekekeke.

Impact was needed and impact we got. it goes with the choice we make in that particular instance.

Kekekeke is still top of my shit list.

 

[OneManVN]

OneManVN, I have a question. Why is harem route done better than relationship route? I mean, it's written better, no sudden change of scenes, story is smoother and more logical, characters more alive and so on. Frankly speaking, I thought that relashionship route is like a base one, harem route is for porn lovers or something like that. Am I totally wrong? 'Cause those two route look like two different VNs in the same setting. The second one is just lighter and more easy going.
And another thing. I played relationship route before (0.4.1, if I remember correct), then you rewrote it. New version... well, it's not bad, not bad at all, but it became much worse than before. MC speaks with Alison/Alice, next screen is mayor swearing at his employee - that sudden change of scenes (especially comparing to harem route) confuses without any reason. If story before was thrilling and with unexpected twists then now the thrill is gone and it looks like I watching another Hollywood blockbuster with predictable storyline. I remember what I felt when I saw Jessica as a slave for the first time, it was a really good plot twist. Now it still looks good (when Eric and Number One discuss Jessica with her and Maria as a background), but it's like movie cliche, that's expected and we all know what happens next. Even when I read/watch new content it was the same, nothing unexpected and out of movie cliches. Sorry, if it looks ubrupt and too... watery, I don't know how it can be described more discretely. You are a good author and your game is a real pleasure to read.

If I could make sense of what you wrote I would actually do my best to reply to everything. Right now All I can say is this without a single doubt in my mind. Nothing in this entire VN was ever at any time, something that you had predicted or seen coming. With that out of the way. Harem is a different game. Love is a different game. Dom is a different game. None of them link to each other. All characters in all three paths are intended to be different. As is the story for most parts.

PS: I'm not trying to insult you. I appreciate your comment and respect your opinion. I honestly couldn't make sense of most the things you wrote. You jump from one thing to the next. And if you can predict a single scene of what's coming next on Harem update next month? Do so, tell me here publicly. I'll give you everything I make next month if you do. It should be easy, after all everyone can see it coming

 

[Red469]

Worshiping? Let me answer that as politely as I can without making this personal. I'll do whatever the .... I want. You, on the other hand, are free to do exactly the same. Play it, or don't play it. But, this has nothing to do with worshiping. I like Rob, I added Rob. I like Ava, I added Ava. I worship nobody.

Hi OneManVN

Can I just say I SERIOUSLY Love your attitude... Way to go.

Thank you for a Wonderful VN, Great work.

 

[OneManVN]

Hi OneManVN

Can I just say I SERIOUSLY Love your attitude... Way to go.

Thank you for a Wonderful VN, Great work.

Yes, you sure can And thank you for trying it, glad you actually like it Stay tuned for Harem, as well as the new project currently in the early stages.

 

[MLBnoob]

Yeah, I mean she's only been apart from him for 4+ years now, she's only been through hell, and she clearly thinks very highly of herself in his eyes right now. (Sarcasm off now.) I'll see what I can do about the "Not rape scenes." Maybe I'll add a skip just to stop the whine.

As for why she can't be his mistress, it's clear enough. He has moved on at this point. You did just click Alice, or Alison, even Melissa for some. Not going to give a free fuck and then let's move on back with our long lost love.

Understandable. So no plans for a Jessica route in Love story?

 

[OneManVN]

Understandable. So no plans for a Jessica route in Love story?

More than you can possibly imagine Just have a little faith in me, please. It's going to be huge. On both good and bad endings. This is a promise you can bank on. I have plans for her all the way to the ends of the game. She wants payback, that's all I can say. And we do have her money still, so let's invest it on something vengeful? *Winks*

 

[Avaron1974]

Understandable. So no plans for a Jessica route in Love story?

He has plans for her but the only love interests have already been presented. You had a choice of Alison, Alice or Mel.

Jessica has a part to play but not that part.

 

[lionarslan]

If I could make sense of what you wrote I would actually do my best to reply to everything. Right now All I can say is this without a single doubt in my mind. Nothing in this entire VN was ever at any time, something that you had predicted or seen coming. With that out of the way. Harem is a different game. Love is a different game. Dom is a different game. None of them link to each other. All characters in all three paths are intended to be different. As is the story for most parts.

PS: I'm not trying to insult you. I appreciate your comment and respect your opinion. I honestly couldn't make sense of most the things you wrote. You jump from one thing to the next. And if you can predict a single scene of what's coming next on Harem update next month? Do so, tell me here publicly. I'll give you everything I make next month if you do. It should be easy, after all everyone can see it coming

Thank you for your answer. I'll try to explain again, this time in sober state. You answered my original question, now I know that 3 routes is 3 different games. Honestly, it explained many things for me.
Another thing I mentioned: sudden change of scene in relashionship route. In harem route when scene is changing you show us this by something like "Meanwhile..." or "At the same time..." at the black screen. There's no such thing in relashionship route, last frame of one scene and then the first frame of another scene right after that, without any notification.
Please, forget about cliches and prediction, I totally knew what I mean yesterday evening after 2 liters of beer but now, at morning I know nothing about that.

 

[MLBnoob]

More than you can possibly imagine Just have a little faith in me, please. It's going to be huge. On both good and bad endings. This is a promise you can bank on. I have plans for her all the way to the ends of the game. She wants payback, that's all I can say. And we do have her money still, so let's invest it on something vengeful? *Winks*

You still haven't presented Jessica's backstory other than being MC's girlfriend. I am curious how rich is/was she and what are/were her assets and property?

 

[OneManVN]

Thank you for your answer. I'll try to explain again, this time in sober state. You answered my original question, now I know that 3 routes is 3 different games. Honestly, it explained many things for me.
Another thing I mentioned: sudden change of scene in relashionship route. In harem route when the scene is changing you show us this by something like "Meanwhile..." or "At the same time..." at the black screen. There's no such thing in relationship route, last frame of one scene and then the first frame of another scene right after that, without any notification.
Please, forget about cliches and prediction, I totally knew what I mean yesterday evening after 2 liters of beer but now, at morning I know nothing about that.

Don't worry. I am also sorry if I've offended in any way. I was only joking. Now on a serious note. What really happened is simply this. I had the worst month of my life last month. I won't go into details again since I have covered it on here enough times. I was under pressure, a week behind already on the 24th of last month. So, real-life issues, GPU died, HDD died, meanwhile I had a ton of people expecting me to keep my promise. MONTHLY UPDATES! So basically, I forgot to add some of the final touchups. We were simply rushing it out the gates. I understand what you meant now clearly, and will rectify it. In fact, it is being worked on, to fix transition mishaps.

 

[OneManVN]

You still haven't presented Jessica's backstory other than being MC's girlfriend. I am curious how rich is/was she and what are/were her assets and property?

You'll learn, in due time Hence why she lives in one side.

 

[TheKryptonian]

OneManVN I have steered clear of this game for a bit because it looked like a bunch of rewrites and other various tinkering was going on and is now a good time to wade through all the current content without too much fear of having to redo it all again in the near future because of future tinkering?

Love the game but I will wait to play if I need to avoid the dreaded "old saves wont work" on the next update. Im sure you cant be 100% certain either way but just ballpark the odds for me

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

I've now completed the Love and Harem routes so far (as much as I can do anyway)

You've said that there are 3 games in one, but surely there are 4 games in one? Since The dom route splits into affection and outright domination I've only just started the dom route though.

It is definitely an excellent game, congratulations!