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I have finished the update and I have to say that I like the game. Although the truth is that, except for the images that the MC is constantly seeing on television, I haven't yet had any sex scenes in my game:
So I'm going to assume that Mary doesn't have any scenes at the moment.
I only know about Tonya that you find her in a bar and she stops you when you're leaving to tell you a couple of stupid things.
So I'm going to assume that Mary doesn't have any scenes at the moment.
Maybe Stacy is a little too overprotective.
I only know about Tonya that you find her in a bar and she stops you when you're leaving to tell you a couple of stupid things.
In my game the MC goes to the concert with Mary, so I guess I'm going correctly on the route I've chosen.
Personally, that first date with Nikki wouldn't have happened if I had an option for it. Fortunately, you can simply refuse to let the date go from being a dinner between two friends who just met.
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You encounter Tonya if you don't go to the club on first night. And you'll regret that decision later.
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MC should no go to the club the first night because then the barman and the bodyguard will have a laugh at MC expense.
Then after that whole shabang, where MC ends up in a hot relationship with a very action oriented hottie,
you find out the true colors of that so called best friend ... he sends MC lewds of himself nekkid
Let us all see where you get the kick to game on after that whole fiasco and from who.
Then after that whole shabang, where MC ends up in a hot relationship with a very action oriented hottie,
you find out the true colors of that so called best friend ... he sends MC lewds of himself nekkid
Let us all see where you get the kick to game on after that whole fiasco and from who.
- May 29, 2018
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Are you actually reading the things she says or are you holding skip to look at the renders?
The game has potential and I like a few characters. It's fine that the mc is a beta but it would be a lot better if he had a spine.
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I went to the club and said no to Gaby (I think that's what she's called). Is Tonya that bad?
I'm not sure what you're talking about. The only picture that has been sent to my MC is one of Mary that she sends to him.MC should no go to the club the first night because then the barman and the bodyguard will have a laugh at MC expense.
Then after that whole shabang, where MC ends up in a hot relationship with a very action oriented hottie,
you find out the true colors of that so called best friend ... he sends MC lewds of himself nekkid
Let us all see where you get the kick to game on after that whole fiasco and from who.
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Well, after hooking up with her a few times, she assumes she is his girlfriend. Then when MC meets up with Erin at the bar she crashes their meeting and goes all yandere.
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Is there a future chapter where we can kill stacy? She dragged my ass and burned me twice even though I told mary I wasn't interested in her early which prompted stacy to step on my balls and say go out with mary.
Lol..
To be clear. If you do *anything* to mary except flat out shut her down and let her know you're not interested, your balls are getting stepped on.
As far as getting burned goes.... that only happens if you agree to a date with mary, and then break it off. (There's actually a way to break it off without getting burned, but its pretty hard to do). You can just never agree to a date with mary in the first place - you might still get your balls stepped on, but no risk of getting torched.
If anything happened outside of what I just said, feel free to PM me the specific details and I'll look through the code to make sure, but I've gone through it a number of times and haven't found any issues. =
Thanks for the response lol
No worries, this isnt a bug or anything just poor decision making in my part haha. So, the question is will we be able to kill stacey?
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Lol I also found that funny. People just keep coming into his place and it just runs non stop. In real life, this can lead to some really awkward situations..What's with the mc and constantly watching bukkake gangbang/cuck porn on the tv? I restarted and never noticed that until now. Him sitting there in his tightey whiteys watching that is hilarious for some reason.And how is Stacey "scary" and "intimidating"? She's just an insufferable cunt we have to deal with for story reasons. Me personally, the first time she gave one of her empty threats her number would've been deleted. But since he's a man he puts up with that shit probably in hopes of getting his dick wet.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Well..if you mess up with her friend ( Mary), she sort of drugs you, and then drops your dead body in incinerator. Kills one of the other girls too.And how is Stacey "scary" and "intimidating"? She's just an insufferable cunt we have to deal with for story reasons. Me personally, the first time she gave one of her empty threats her number would've been deleted. But since he's a man he puts up with that shit probably in hopes of getting his dick wet.
It would be an interesting plot twist if you could actually survive and get back at her.
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Well, finished it.
Overall, a pretty good VN. Girls are very likeable ( Nikki and Mary) and MC, while he could be bit more assertive, is not a typical insufferable twit ( and his best buddy, like in most VNs). Renders are average-ish, though with few good animations. Music,I thought was very good and complements the scenes ( I usually turn it off in most).
The negatives?
I think MC's backstory would be better if inserted at start ( you later learn it from Erin).
Also, it kind of needs a stronger plot. Typically these types of VNs are either story based with strong, central storyline that pushes it forward ( like Defending Lydia Collier), or have some kind of basic dating setting ( life in College, Run a hotel, etc) with a wide cast of Love interests, dynamic and variety of situations ( Intertwined, Being a Dik, etc).
This kind of falls in the "middle" with not really having a lot of characters/scenes or strong story ( so far).
Overall, a pretty good VN. Girls are very likeable ( Nikki and Mary) and MC, while he could be bit more assertive, is not a typical insufferable twit ( and his best buddy, like in most VNs). Renders are average-ish, though with few good animations. Music,I thought was very good and complements the scenes ( I usually turn it off in most).
The negatives?
I think MC's backstory would be better if inserted at start ( you later learn it from Erin).
Also, it kind of needs a stronger plot. Typically these types of VNs are either story based with strong, central storyline that pushes it forward ( like Defending Lydia Collier), or have some kind of basic dating setting ( life in College, Run a hotel, etc) with a wide cast of Love interests, dynamic and variety of situations ( Intertwined, Being a Dik, etc).
This kind of falls in the "middle" with not really having a lot of characters/scenes or strong story ( so far).
Small correction: She only drugs the other girl. Doesn't kill her.
Thanks.
I always will consider renders my weak point - I think they're of the "good enough" quality, but it's one of those thing I'm just not good at, so honestly once I felt I was at "good enough to get by" I was happy with it.
Regarding everything else - I don't necessarily disagree. I definitely think you're right that I should have gotten into MC's story earlier, but it's too late to go back now.
Personally, I feel my strong point is character writing and development. I'm also fairly good at big picture plot type of stuff - however.... this game is my first attempt at something like this. My "dream" game is a story I've already written, that has both a stronger plot, and a lot more characters, but I went with this one first, because well, I wanted to start small. (Some people would say I still started too big, but well, screw em. For me this is small). I intentionally kept the story short and the characters few, for the sake of faster and easier development. I wrote the entire story and developed the characters with that concept in mind.
Whether or not I ever get a chance to attempt that game honestly depends on the reception of this one once it's completed, but we'll have to wait and see. I do believe the story of this one rates much better as a complete picture, but obviously I'd be biased in that regard, so we'll have to see what people think in about 3 updates. (I'll just give a bit away here and now - the current plan for this game is to get through the majority of the story over the next 3 updates, with the 4th being the final, and resolution of it all. That's the current plan, we'll see how it goes).
Whether I ever get to move on to my "other" plans or not, I'm glad I started with this one first. That one is much bigger in scope, and just about everything, and now that I'm this far into this game, I can say for sure, that without the experience this game has given me, I would have absolutely screwed that one up in multiple ways. So either I never do it, but attempting it would have failed miserably anyway, or I do get to it eventually, and I'm glad I have the experience behind me so I can put together a project that I'll be proud to stamp my name on.
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So i love the game and surprisingly I think Tonya is my favorite with mary and erin after but I can't keep it going with tonya at all. Is it just hard coded to have the fling/relationship with tonya just end regardless of what you do?
There's a bit more Tonya stuff in the future (not Ch5, but later on), but for the most part, yea she's just sort of a side fling. Right now (Particularly in Ch5 and 6) the game is going to be focused on progressing the main plot and relationships.
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Can anyone venture a guess about her intentions?
Is she the main vilain? Could be just one antagonizing babe? Will she be tamed?
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