VN Ren'Py Altered [v0.4] [Mr.J]

[5mithers]

Trying out the game for the first time, and I have one suggestion for you, Mr.J_Dev :

Consider putting outlines on your character names. Lily's name is consistently lost in darker backgrounds. Even a 1 pixel white border would be enough to fix the issue. Most of the other character names are light enough to avoid the issue, but with transparent background on the text box, it's always good to consider outlines on your text to make it more readable for your users.

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Trying out the game for the first time, and I have one suggestion for you, Mr.J_Dev :

Consider putting outlines on your character names. Lily's name is consistently lost in darker backgrounds. Even a 1 pixel white border would be enough to fix the issue. Most of the other character names are light enough to avoid the issue, but with transparent background on the text box, it's always good to consider outlines on your text to make it more readable for your users.

View attachment 4510451

Yeah that has crossed my mind as well, I believe someone made a mode that helps with that. but I do want to eventually fix this problem myself. I just didn't have enough time to address it, I'll see if I can fix it soon.

Here is the mod made by: MrBenny

https://f95zone.to/threads/altered-v0-4-mr-j.204900/post-15156839

 

[Manne1972]

Android not work

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Android not work

Did you have version 0.3? Get to end of that version and save. then update it with new version and continue. I'm looking into a better way for the next update.
I asked for them to leave the previous android version, but I'll leave it here incase you or any other android users need it.
Version 0.3 APK

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[bamachine]

Just started this. Looks promising but the writing is a little stilted, at least up until where I have gotten(the reveal party). Not Engrish or bad spelling, just a bit impersonal, imo. Also, why does Lily look like a 45 year old, while her mom looks like a 28 year old?

Also, damn girl looks like a raccoon in this pic...


...tone down the eyeshadow there lass.

 

[MadMolly62]

I`am enjoying it so far hope there is more incest and maybe pregnancy in it ??. Hit a few sore spots but looking really good Thanks

 

[youraccount69]

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[ImperialD]

ok i think that coke was way to much .. i'm seeing my MC with 2 different colored eyes and then now i see a couple people with different colored eyes .... o.m.g. i'm gonna stop doing that much coke

i really enjoy this vn .. awesome renders awesome storyline Mr.J

 

[bamachine]

The writing does get better the further you get into the story but came across a bug. If you choose not to stick your finger in Laura's ass, you get the following error...

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/story/ch6.rpy", line 3839, in script
jump lauratease_end
ScriptError: could not find label 'lauratease_end'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/story/ch6.rpy", line 3839, in script
jump lauratease_end
File "C:\Games\Altered\Altered-0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1992, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "C:\Games\Altered\Altered-0.4-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1013, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'lauratease_end'.

Windows-10-10.0.22631 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805
0.4
Sun Feb 2 22:42:14 2025
```

 

[ImperialD]

The writing does get better the further you get into the story but came across a bug. If you choose not to stick your finger in Laura's ass, you get the following error...

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/story/ch6.rpy", line 3839, in script
jump lauratease_end
ScriptError: could not find label 'lauratease_end'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/story/ch6.rpy", line 3839, in script
jump lauratease_end
File "C:\Games\Altered\Altered-0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1992, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "C:\Games\Altered\Altered-0.4-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1013, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'lauratease_end'.

Windows-10-10.0.22631 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805
0.4
Sun Feb 2 22:42:14 2025
```

odd i had no tracebacks

 

[bamachine]

odd i had no tracebacks

Maybe if you avoided it with the others. I did not, just wanted to go slower with her, as she is already a bit too clingy.

 

[69Creampie]

Well, that sucks donkey cock. I wanted him to make some incest babies with at least his sister Deborah if not also his other sister, mom and both aunties too, dammit. So much for happy endings. Now might as well be MC and his partner both get killed while on a mission, his family all go to the funeral then later die from depression/mass suicide after never getting over it, the end.

 

[Manne1972]

Did you have version 0.3? Get to end of that version and save. then update it with new version and continue. I'm looking into a better way for the next update.
I asked for them to leave the previous android version, but I'll leave it here incase you or any other android users need it.
Version 0.3 APK
Mega

Thank

Did you have version 0.3? Get to end of that version and save. then update it with new version and continue. I'm looking into a better way for the next update.
I asked for them to leave the previous android version, but I'll leave it here incase you or any other android users need it.
Version 0.3 APK
Mega

THANK

 

[SoraGG]

looks good for now
will wait for the next update

 

[bamachine]

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Well, that sucks donkey cock. I wanted him to make some incest babies with at least his sister Deborah if not also his other sister, mom and both aunties too, dammit. So much for happy endings. Now might as well be MC and his partner both get killed while on a mission, his family all go to the funeral then later die from depression/mass suicide after never getting over it, the end.

They did say they had a way to reverse it, so chin up my little kinky lad/lass

 

[ImperialD]

Maybe if you avoided it with the others. I did not, just wanted to go slower with her, as she is already a bit too clingy.

avoided what .. i played from where i left off from the last update .... so what would i have avoided ????

 

[bamachine]

avoided what .. i played from where i left off from the last update .... so what would i have avoided ????

Did you stick your finger in all of the prior lasses asses, then say no to doing that to Laura? That is what I did, then got that error.