VN Ren'Py Alternate Worlds [v0.0105] [Motkeyz Games]

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RoadWulf

RoadWulf

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Nov 18, 2018
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Concept: Great idea
Actual game: BORING AS FUCK.

I don't know if Motkeyz is trying to make up for the super sluttiness of Timestamps with a "serious" story, but god that whole first day was the most boring ass thing to read in existence. General themes: "Life is great, marriage is great, the past is the past" repeated ad nauseum with little sprinklings of you being able to check out other women occasionally. By the time it finally got to the alternate reality, nearly an HOUR AND HALF OF READING LATER, I just did not care about the premise of the story anymore.

I just turned it off and deleted it.

Can't believe he stopped making Timestamps for this.
 
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Garatempus2

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fajiker145 said:
It would be the same, you want someone to come and fuck your wife, either with or without you (doesn't matter), you are a cuck, just by definition.

There are people trying to change the meaning of the words just so they don't fit them :whistle::coffee:.

View attachment 4219146 as simple as that.

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Cucks are usually passive or involuntary participants in the equession. Even Urban Dictionary wont safe you there.

I got the idea that you don't like any of this stuff, but that doesn't change the fact that these things are little bit more complex then you are trying make them. Swinging couple not necessary have to enjoy cheating on each other and so on.
 
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Darth Vengeant

Darth Vengeant

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Another game with horrible colored text box covering nearly 1/3 of the screen. I will never understand the point in it. All text boxes should be transparent, or have the ability to make it so. Mod install time!

Also, yet another game that has the volume set to full when you open it, blasting the doors off your living room. Really fail to see how dev's still keep doing this. Standard game volume should be set to 30% as default. Period.

Sad to see this wont have incest though, like the previous game.
 
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BC

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AgnorWolf said:
Well this one is very hard to judge at the moment but i cant help but feel like the entire premise is just not going to work for some people.
You spend the update getting introduced to the world and characters that are close to the mcs personal life. The code needs work its got bugs and future issues galore and the writing could use a touch up, its a little off at times but overall pretty enjoyable.
Then the biggest issue I have with the game starts, you fall asleep and wake up in some alternative time line. I just find it impossible to give a shit about this timeline to be honest and it fells like cheating on your wife. It would be one thing if the mcs life had gone to shit and he was given a second chance kind of thing but he's got a great life, an amazing wife and a great family. For me its the same as i see dream scenes in other games, absolutely pointless.
It feels like it might be there to add more controversial topics to the game and then use the well technically its just a dream and its not actually your family type. The only part of this game im ever gonna give a shit about is the main world. Like I said it feels like a failed premise from the get go
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Agreed. Why would this guy want another life? He seems well respected by friends, family, and strangers years after ending his career. His wife loves him and shows affection. It really makes no sense at all to ever spin off into an alternate life. To me, the wife should've been cold in the initial world, pushing the MC toward other forbidden relationships. He also should be less famous or more often mocked for former fame. His only problem right now is money, tho his house doesn't really help with that narrative either.

I have hope for this game, but the premise just does not work based on this start. We need a very strong reason why each world should have appeal and have something missing. It should feel like a decision tinged with loss no matter which he decides to stay in, if possible.

Also, the daughter turned sister-in-law doesn't make sense to me. All the dialogue sounds like a younger person, and people (like her sister) should know her more intimately.
 
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Viatovic

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Been a while...
I like the women designs and the idea of a thicc MC, but... why the multiverse/different realities twist?
You got a house full of sin, sexual tension, family relationships, friendship and lust ... and instead of working with that, you take the easy route to avoid controversy.
Like having gold in your hands and throwing it away for some lead.
Sad.
Still gonna play and stay on the loop with it because graphically looks amazing, but it could have been next level.
 
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Frankbob

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fajiker145 said:
It would be the same, you want someone to come and fuck your wife, either with or without you (doesn't matter), you are a cuck, just by definition.

There are people trying to change the meaning of the words just so they don't fit them :whistle::coffee:.

View attachment 4219146 as simple as that.

But well, off topic.
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No cuck, sharing and swinging !!!!
 
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