The meta joke about patreon rules was dumb. Honestly there are ways around those rules, if you don't use it, it's your own fault. And if you don't like those rules, use other sides like Subscribestar, there nobody cares about incest.
Then there are quite a few typos, like i instead of I. Or sentences where words get mixed up (e.g. "Thank you Katia for cooking" instead of "Thank you for cooking, Katia"), capitalization and punctuation also need work. Needs definitly a proofreader. (And before someone points a finger at me, I know my english isn't the best either...) ATM there is not always difference between thoughts, whispered or spoken words. The renders are grainy, especially the few close ups of the characters. The fact, that the characters are looking most of the time in the direction of the player, let the renders look unnatural. Evelyn is an annoying character, demanding things from her boss is unacceptable and would get her fired, if you think logically. The scenes between these two agents weren't really neccessary, at least in the way they were shown. They felt random. The choice to skip content with Ryan, is...., how to put this..., well..., BS. You should give the option to AVOID content with characters the players don't like. AVOID like in "nothing happens at all", not SKIP like in "it happens in background". Traps, futas and shemales are quite controversal and not everybody likes content with them. Just giving the option to skip it, won't solve the problem. Yes, it would make the writing a bit more work, depending on the choices. But overall more people would appriciate the effort, because in the long run, if scenes would just get skipped, then the content would still be mentioned in other scenes. That would drive people away.
