should do some off the wall stuff, and add in stuff like futa, beastiality, stuff people dont do, just a thought, game looks good tho
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Nah... Another copy-by-copy Game... My Score: 0/10
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So got to play through. It is good game and like the story. It looks like will get really interesting soon but right now only 2 really main characters and nice twist to story. The images look good. I like the way it is going. For anyone thinking it is short, it is a little, but it is the first release. It also ends in a good spot to build the story and not leave you hanging.
Eagerly waiting for next update!!! Good Luck, the images and story are very good in my opinion. Nice first start!!!
Eagerly waiting for next update!!! Good Luck, the images and story are very good in my opinion. Nice first start!!!
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Plot is ok. renders are ok. Some mistakes here and there but its fine.
But that whole BDSM and Dom play was weak as fuck.
I don't think you can make anyone your bitch with that kind of play.
And why do i feel like that MC is his wife's Pawn.
But that whole BDSM and Dom play was weak as fuck.
I don't think you can make anyone your bitch with that kind of play.
And why do i feel like that MC is his wife's Pawn.
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I'm proud of you, son.
Now go ahead and kill it with this videogame of yours!
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The backdrop is tailor made for a "revenge by Netori" (on the board's wives and daughters) game. May have missed an opportunity here.
Excellent first Chapter!
I feel like this could be labeled as a Visual Novel. I like visual novels, so please don't take offense to that if you don't.
Also, if you are going to continue in Chapter format, you could probably use that as a version number.
Again, great work! Can't wait for more!
I feel like this could be labeled as a Visual Novel. I like visual novels, so please don't take offense to that if you don't.
Also, if you are going to continue in Chapter format, you could probably use that as a version number.
Again, great work! Can't wait for more!
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Thanks to everyone for your feedback! This the first release and will upload a version with corrections soon; before I even released this chapter - I was adamant about having a follow up and a continuation to the story. I have a clear goal in mind and that is to make a game that people like ( sorry if it sounds selfish - but most importantly a game I like); chapter 2 is already on production and your feedback helps a lot. So thanks to everyone at f95 for your help and guidance
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"Semen" as a genre, now this is something new. Care to exemplify what is the meaning of that?
Should we expect some kind of cum play content in this game or what?
Should we expect some kind of cum play content in this game or what?
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thanks for your feedback = the story is expanding a lot, im planning more characters background stories outside of MC
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glad that you liked the the game! i am planning on releasing it as chapter so i wasnt sure what "name coding" for it - so it went went with 0.10; so far i know where the story is going to end up but i dont have a clear picture of how to get there and thats okay, thats the fun of making a game. you could have a story in mind but filling in the blanks is where the fun is at, i can guarantee that before i even released this chapter i know where the next chapter is going, i already have a release schedule for the next chapter and how im gonna get there. i feel like i cant take one step before knowing where the next is - so im taking everyone's feedback and advice into consideration before i write and render the next part
So the MC will fuck all wives and daughters of the Board for revenge if i have understood correctly?
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Here's a little spoiler - MC will whatever and whomever he can to get out of his situation. When i wrote and imagined MC - i wanted him to stand out, im not picturing MC as the virgin/cuck/beta bland character that is the protagonist of a lot of games. My MC has a back story, goals, desires - i want him to be human - have flaws, make mistakes, and more importantly win at the end ( if the player makes the right choices ).
I started developing a game so that i can tell a story about MC, i want to make a lewd game but have the sex be secondary to the story, have the sex be part of it - not as reward. i absolutely hate games with sex as a reward ( if sex is the goal, i feel like it would be a waste, anyone can get laid; but a story is more important )
glad that you enjoyed the game so far and i hope you are looking forward to the next chapter
What do you understand under winning? To me that would be having all the female characters be his exclusive, submissive fuckpets, followed by the protagonist rolling in the dough while the board members look at him in powerless envy.
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I think I just played something else then. Just a series of pointless unavoidable sex scenes. Where is the story? Where are player choices? I expected a lot more after reading the game description on your patreon page.
Anyway, some pointers from me.
- You should consider giving characters' names different colours in the text box. At least make the MC distinctly not pink.
- There are two renders with inconsistent lighting in the office scene.
Unfortunately, a cheap porn is not something I'm interested in, so this is where your game ends for me most likely. Good luck with your project though!
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So far, the story is linear, with no choices whatsoever. Just choosing positions in sex. and offers (forces upon you without choice) 3 sex scenes; all with the same woman.
While it has a decent length for a 0.1 release, it lacks most elements that would make it a game.
That's just my 2 cents. Make of it what you will.
While it has a decent length for a 0.1 release, it lacks most elements that would make it a game.
That's just my 2 cents. Make of it what you will.
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Fun intro, especially loving the husband/wife dynamic implemented here where mc's wife doesn't give a fuck what he does as long as he's not screwing her over... Now that's love, especially her reaction to the phone call.