Okay, kinda Sad to say, but I liked it! Kinda sad that it ended/stopped so soon.
I Cannot wait for 'the REAL Game'. I liked the premise.
* I agree with Most everyone else; The Dialog/english needs work.
* I liked the character renders okay.
* I would NOT Say it is a 'slow corruption' game.
Amy was sexually assaulted, but found out that She enjoyed it; even so much as getting excited while talking with her dad on phone afterwards. (She Might be a 'closet' Exhibitionist).
* Then, She was sexually molested by her boyfriend's father. IF She REALLY wanted to get away, she could have,...
* It is a shame that Game didn't go further, Maybe a Couple More Updates would be Nice.
I want to know/see what the 'meeting' is about. What They want her to do. How they expect her to earn the $$ to pay off Father's debt.
I could see a lil bit different storyline here.
- Father and daughter meeting in Cafe was a lil vague about boyfriend and his Dad.
* Could be worked in that Amy is a bit innocent, naive, and prudish. Boyfriend, an over-indulged Ass, is upset and wants MORE sexually from Amy. It is convenient That Amy's Father owes His Dad Money.
So, boyfriend schemes plan; informs his Dad about Amy and who her father is.
In an attempt to make Amy MORE 'Slutty'; she is tasked with sexual assignments to remove her inhibitions.
OR,
that (stereotypically) boyfriend is kind of a Beta wannabe. with smaller than average dick. unable to pleasure Amy.
Alternative: When Amy goes to Boyfriend's Home; Boyfriend's Dad Is dressed in a Nice suit; sitting at his desk, rather than lounging on couch looking like an unemployed bum.
And when Amy & boyfriend have sex, the Dad DOES slightly open the door and watches them/her.
AT that first Intro meeting with Boyfriend's Dad, *Amy's father, and his men.
Amy Is forced to strip naked, kneel in front BF's dad; ordered to giving him a blowjob in front her father, and his men.
While being filmed.
After BF's dad Cums on Amy's face; *( It is her Father's turn next).
His men step up; naked waist down; and gathered around her.
Reluctantly, and a bit excited, she reaches out with both hands and well, You get the idea....
Afterwards, Amy is pressed into doing "Escort" work, and working at BF's Dad's 'Adult' Club.
- BF's dad decides to keep Amy for himself; either cuckolding his son, or makes DEAL with Amy.
- If she agrees to dump/break-up with his son; HE will pay for a Boob-job. (Which she would have been forced to get anyway)
Side note: IF Want to be EVEN MORE Deviant, could say that Amy's father was in on it!
- HE (Amy's father) gave up his Own daughter to 'pay off debt'. OR Maybe there NEVER was a debt;
just a ruse to TAKE Amy and introduce her to her Dad's business.
THERE IS So Much You Can Do with This!!