VN Ren'Py Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.6 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

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Zuhl

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On Day 3, Angel walks Brutus and meets the dog breeder. If you recall that day, she says she will be back on Thursday, which is Day 5.

So to answer your question, yes, Day 5 will be the next update and Angel will need to convince the dog breeder that Toby still has what it takes in order to save the dogs life or convince him to let her adopt him.
Regarding the beast/pet scenes, if work hours allow, perhaps an alternative would be to create scenes that don't involve beasts, where something happens to the human in a purely random, surgical situation. But I think that would be too time-consuming. It's a shame, but dreams are allowed, and asking questions doesn't cost anything ;)
 

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DigiurgeCreations, in the version I downloaded there are only 9 pages for Save/Load. As someone who tends to spam saves, that is not nearly enough, especially since you offer at least three separate routes to follow.

Could you please expand that. Most games here have unlimited pages for Save/Load. Perhaps you could copy one of them or ask one of the developers for coding assistance.
There is a hidden > button just to the right of the 9th page. If you click there, you will get more pages. There is also a hidden < button to go back to the left of the A (Auto Save) page. It goes up to 999. That's nearly 6000 save slots. You will also notice that the zero is hidden on the page number, but I assure you it is there. So page 10 will read like 1 , and page 20 will read as 2 . But if you have gone from 19 to 2, then you know it's actually 20 if that makes sense.

Edit: For the next update, I have changed the hidden < > buttons into Previous and Next buttons that can be seen. I still have yet to figure out how to get the zero's to be seen on the page number.
 
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I played the update and loved it because I love these kind of games. However, I do agree that the mafia boss scene came out of nowhere. Other than that I only have small nitpicks because I enjoyed it very much...
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I will list the positives whenever I write the review of the whole game so far. Thanks again for the amazing update
 
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I played the update and loved it because I love these kind of games. However, I do agree that the mafia boss scene came out of nowhere. Other than that I only have small nitpicks because I enjoyed it very much...
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I will list the positives whenever I write the review of the whole game so far. Thanks again for the amazing update
I do agree with you on those points, and at the end it does get quite extreme. You're right, you do completely avoid the scene on Pure but have no choice when it comes to the other paths.

I did consider putting a Pure choice to avoid it, but changed my mind last minute. I guess I just wanted to finally put the update out and not delay anymore, so there will be a choice to avoid it in the next update.
 
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...Are you saying that about 30 points would be inconsequential for the final outcome? How odd. It only seems to make sense if you are planning for a rather long game with dozens and dozens of choices yet to come. Well, if this be the case, good to know. I do not mind the notion.
If you download the latest updated tutorial, it will explain everything in detail. Also, I have already fixed the error in point accumulation, so the next update will be working with no points missing.

New Tutorial
 

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First time noticing this game and first time playing and I loved it 100%! For what I like its just perfect in terms of context and content. Cant wait for more updates and I would gladly be a paid member if @DigiurgeCreations ever opens a subscribestar account.
 
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Balbaar

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Not bad at all, from what I've seen so far it's a very nice game. Angel is beautiful and I definitely appreciate the amount of choice in being able to decide what she does or doesn't allow to happen, so great job there.

But I gotta say, if I have to read "Could of", "Must of" or "Should of" one more time while playing this, my head might genuinely explode...

Seeing as the rest of the dialogue contains few to no mistakes, and your messages here are pretty much flawless grammar-wise DigiurgeCreations , I can't help but wonder what the reason for this is. I'm starting to think you're doing it on purpose to piss off frustrate people like me. :HideThePain:
 
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Not bad at all, from what I've seen so far it's a very nice game. Angel is beautiful and I definitely appreciate the amount of choice in being able to decide what she does or doesn't allow to happen, so great job there.

But I gotta say, if I have to read "Could of", "Must of" or "Should of" one more time while playing this, my head might genuinely explode...

Seeing as the rest of the dialogue contains few to no mistakes, and your messages here are pretty much flawless grammar-wise DigiurgeCreations , I can't help but wonder what the reason for this is. I'm starting to think you're doing it on purpose to piss off frustrate people like me. :HideThePain:
Oh no! I thought I got all of those corrected. That is just my deep seeded bad habit from childhood based on the sound of should've/could've.

I will make it a goal of mine to snuff out all of those should of and could of grammar mistakes.

Edit: I could not find any instances of "could of". I did find 15 instances of "should of" and 6 instances of "must of" and corrected those however.
 
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First time noticing this game and first time playing and I loved it 100%! For what I like its just perfect in terms of context and content. Cant wait for more updates and I would gladly be a paid member if @DigiurgeCreations ever opens a subscribestar account.
I appreciate it. Right now I am considering a subscriberstar, but I feel like my game needs to be a bit more polished up first, so I think I'll wait until the next update before I do. I also want to show that I can speed up production, so those of you who do subscribe won't have to wait months and months for an update.
 

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I appreciate it. Right now I am considering a subscriberstar, but I feel like my game needs to be a bit more polished up first, so I think I'll wait until the next update before I do. I also want to show that I can speed up production, so those of you who do subscribe won't have to wait months and months for an update.
A nice goal to set for yourself. GL with that.
 
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ppaso3443

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I appreciate it. Right now I am considering a subscriberstar, but I feel like my game needs to be a bit more polished up first, so I think I'll wait until the next update before I do. I also want to show that I can speed up production, so those of you who do subscribe won't have to wait months and months for an update.
Glad to hear that and about the speed of development being increased. But I think you should get the subscriberstar right away and TAKE MY MONEY :ROFLMAO:. It will also motive you.
 

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Oh no! I thought I got all of those corrected. That is just my deep seeded bad habit from childhood based on the sound of should've/could've.

I will make it a goal of mine to snuff out all of those should of and could of grammar mistakes.

Edit: I could not find any instances of "could of". I did find 15 instances of "should of" and 6 instances of "must of" and corrected those however.
Oh thank the heavens for that, I'm relieved to hear it wasn't intentional. :KEK:

Thank you for hunting down those mistakes, I appreciate the rapid response! I thought I saw some instances of "could of" but now I'm not 100% sure anymore, they may have just been instances of "should of" and "must of" seeing as you managed to find quite a few.
If in the future I decide to play through the game again from the beginning, I'll make sure to keep an eye out and let you know if I encounter any leftover mistakes and when/where they occur.
 
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Glad to hear that and about the speed of development being increased. But I think you should get the subscriberstar right away and TAKE MY MONEY :ROFLMAO:. It will also motive you.
Yes, indeed it would motivate me a lot!

I will consider it for the new year, as the holiday season is usually a very busy time of year for me and I just don't feel like accepting any money at this time is the right thing to do.

I also feel like the game could be better, and accepting money would put me into a much higher level of scrutiny that would require a lot more work in a timely manner.

Given that, I still have some time constraints (a more than full time job and relationships to maintain), so I wouldn't be able to dedicate all my time to this game.

If all that being said is okay with anyone and they still support me regardless of the above, then I may consider it sooner than later. Either way, I appreciate the encouragement.
 

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Yes, indeed it would motivate me a lot!

I will consider it for the new year, as the holiday season is usually a very busy time of year for me and I just don't feel like accepting any money at this time is the right thing to do.

I also feel like the game could be better, and accepting money would put me into a much higher level of scrutiny that would require a lot more work in a timely manner.

Given that, I still have some time constraints (a more than full time job and relationships to maintain), so I wouldn't be able to dedicate all my time to this game.

If all that being said is okay with anyone and they still support me regardless of the above, then I may consider it sooner than later. Either way, I appreciate the encouragement.
I just played the game. This is a small direct feedback - I find a contradiction in the story - she is introduced as being petite at 5' 3" but her model appears tall. Not a big issue just wanted to say.
 

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I just played the game. This is a small direct feedback - I find a contradiction in the story - she is introduced as being petite at 5' 3" but her model appears tall. Not a big issue just wanted to say.
Do you have an example of her looking tall? She seems petite compared to the other characters to me apart from Daisy.
 

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I think a Subscriber star is a great idea, I know I would happily support if we got advanced art/previews/renders. Art for the game is amazing and would be great for Subscriber star.
 
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Do you have an example of her looking tall? She seems petite compared to the other characters to me apart from Daisy.
Perhaps he may be referring to some renders where the depth perception makes her look taller? Other than that, I can't think of any render where she is at the same depth as another character (other than Daisy who is shorter and more petite) and isn't either the same or smaller than the other.
 

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I get it, a good slow burn is always great, but considering my circumstances it would of been 2029 before anyone got to see any action with Angel at my current pace of production, so I said, fuck the slow burn, here you go fans of Angel (who have been waiting patiently for years already) BAM! 0.6.6!

So yeah, have it now rather than slow burning for the next few years. I think most of my fans appreciate this update and the increase in the pace based on the circumstances, so I stand by my decision to speed things up.

As a side note, the corruption is substantially slower if you choose the pure route.
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I just discovered this game and it has its merits on many levels

Now "slow burn" is a bad term unless its slow burn for the sake of it (like a certain game I know :rolleyes:). Now you had a timing and scaling just because your MC had 3 pathways, but now you have crossed the Rubicon, and the only use of "purity" is to deny your MC's involvement with certain characters... all of which is fine. It's just becomes a game of evolution and development. What you might have intended can still work with alterations to your strategy and content and you still can build upon it any way you wish to.

Now I haven't played EVER angle yet. So far there is the basketball coach (interracial, Dominance and BBC)... ok, I don't know what you had planned in your scripting of the game phase, but since its part of the game, you can work with it on any angle you like. Eventually you could have your MC have the following transformations/Development:

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Unwilling slave
*Looks forward to spending time with the coach
*Becomes totally submissive
*Etc...etc.

Could you take your story down a dark path... sure. Maybe the story evolves where MC if on the coach's path MC to thwart being bred gets medication but, in the end, coach figures out MC's precautions and somehow does breed the MC (pregnancy) {easy enough story to write that keeps the audience vested in the game}. Actually, that dark angle pivots the whole game.

You started a father daughter angle with your game and there is any number of possibilities.

Anyhow congratulations, its a good game-- just likely not the way you first saw it in the beginning;)
 
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