VN Ren'Py Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.6 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

[Zuhl]

On Day 3, Angel walks Brutus and meets the dog breeder. If you recall that day, she says she will be back on Thursday, which is Day 5.

So to answer your question, yes, Day 5 will be the next update and Angel will need to convince the dog breeder that Toby still has what it takes in order to save the dogs life or convince him to let her adopt him.

Regarding the beast/pet scenes, if work hours allow, perhaps an alternative would be to create scenes that don't involve beasts, where something happens to the human in a purely random, surgical situation. But I think that would be too time-consuming. It's a shame, but dreams are allowed, and asking questions doesn't cost anything

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

DigiurgeCreations, in the version I downloaded there are only 9 pages for Save/Load. As someone who tends to spam saves, that is not nearly enough, especially since you offer at least three separate routes to follow.

Could you please expand that. Most games here have unlimited pages for Save/Load. Perhaps you could copy one of them or ask one of the developers for coding assistance.

There is a hidden > button just to the right of the 9th page. If you click there, you will get more pages. There is also a hidden < button to go back to the left of the A (Auto Save) page. It goes up to 999. That's nearly 6000 save slots. You will also notice that the zero is hidden on the page number, but I assure you it is there. So page 10 will read like 1 , and page 20 will read as 2 . But if you have gone from 19 to 2, then you know it's actually 20 if that makes sense.

Edit: For the next update, I have changed the hidden < > buttons into Previous and Next buttons that can be seen. I still have yet to figure out how to get the zero's to be seen on the page number.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

...that don't involve beasts, where something happens to the human in a purely random, surgical situation.

I honestly have no idea what you are inferring here. Can you be more specific?

 

[michelita]

I played the update and loved it because I love these kind of games. However, I do agree that the mafia boss scene came out of nowhere. Other than that I only have small nitpicks because I enjoyed it very much...

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I will list the positives whenever I write the review of the whole game so far. Thanks again for the amazing update

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

I played the update and loved it because I love these kind of games. However, I do agree that the mafia boss scene came out of nowhere. Other than that I only have small nitpicks because I enjoyed it very much...

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I will list the positives whenever I write the review of the whole game so far. Thanks again for the amazing update

I do agree with you on those points, and at the end it does get quite extreme. You're right, you do completely avoid the scene on Pure but have no choice when it comes to the other paths.

I did consider putting a Pure choice to avoid it, but changed my mind last minute. I guess I just wanted to finally put the update out and not delay anymore, so there will be a choice to avoid it in the next update.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

...Are you saying that about 30 points would be inconsequential for the final outcome? How odd. It only seems to make sense if you are planning for a rather long game with dozens and dozens of choices yet to come. Well, if this be the case, good to know. I do not mind the notion.

If you download the latest updated tutorial, it will explain everything in detail. Also, I have already fixed the error in point accumulation, so the next update will be working with no points missing.

New Tutorial

 

[Jhin00]

thxthxthxthx <33

 

[ppaso3443]

First time noticing this game and first time playing and I loved it 100%! For what I like its just perfect in terms of context and content. Cant wait for more updates and I would gladly be a paid member if @DigiurgeCreations ever opens a subscribestar account.

 

[Balbaar]

Not bad at all, from what I've seen so far it's a very nice game. Angel is beautiful and I definitely appreciate the amount of choice in being able to decide what she does or doesn't allow to happen, so great job there.

But I gotta say, if I have to read "Could of", "Must of" or "Should of" one more time while playing this, my head might genuinely explode...

Seeing as the rest of the dialogue contains few to no mistakes, and your messages here are pretty much flawless grammar-wise DigiurgeCreations , I can't help but wonder what the reason for this is. I'm starting to think you're doing it on purpose to piss off frustrate people like me.

 

[DigiurgeCreations]

Not bad at all, from what I've seen so far it's a very nice game. Angel is beautiful and I definitely appreciate the amount of choice in being able to decide what she does or doesn't allow to happen, so great job there.

But I gotta say, if I have to read "Could of", "Must of" or "Should of" one more time while playing this, my head might genuinely explode...

Seeing as the rest of the dialogue contains few to no mistakes, and your messages here are pretty much flawless grammar-wise DigiurgeCreations , I can't help but wonder what the reason for this is. I'm starting to think you're doing it on purpose to piss off frustrate people like me.

Oh no! I thought I got all of those corrected. That is just my deep seeded bad habit from childhood based on the sound of should've/could've.

I will make it a goal of mine to snuff out all of those should of and could of grammar mistakes.