VN Ren'Py Angel in L.A. Vol. 1 [v0.6.6 Rework] [DigiurgeCreations]

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Dev Update:

The wait is finally over!

I will be updating the OP later once all uploads are finished, but in the meantime, I've included some download links below with early access for those who follow this thread. If you enjoy this update and my game, please leave a review, but remember, this game is still a work in progress :geek:

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Are these download links the newest version for android?
 

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The Wait is finally over, The long awaited update is here, if you want a novel with a solid story and plenty of options then i would highly recommend you find something else, this is nothing more than a run of the mill slut novel, Some of the choices are absoloutely pointless, This should be a kinetic/Linear novel with the useless choices you get, you might as well just have sexual encounters with all the males, Instead of what could be a pretty decent novel you get a slut machine. What a shame and what a waste.
 
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Most of the negative reviews from the past updates were from people who were expecting a different type of experience than what it is, which IMHO is not a fair review. While I can take negative criticism, giving one to three stars because you expected something other than what the game is doesn't seem to be fair to me.
I agree. It's not fair, and F95 does nothing about it. I was "unofficially" banned from reporting reviews. Because I was trying to get those types of reviews deleted, now they (F95) ignore me. (They basically censored me) :mad:

I do proofreading here, and I've worked for a handful of devs who have quit or almost quit, partly because of the unfair negative reviews. (which should be deleted for many reasons).

Great to see the update. :giggle:
 

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if you want a novel with a solid story and plenty of option
Instead of what could be a pretty decent novel you get a slut machine.
This is not a novel, but a porn video game, I don't know what others are thinking, but I find it strange that you want from a porn video game to be "a novel with a solid story'". There are lots of those in any library, not on a porn games site. A porn game should be a good porn game, and that's what this game is. It's actually a great porn game (I haven't played this last update yet). Hopefully the developer gets the success he deserves, because he has the skills to do great work, he shouldn't be discouraged because someone expecting a novel with a solid story is disappointed that a porn game has porn in it.
 

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I get this is a slut simulator running on porn logic, but even then, it was pretty bad.

Mostly because it is completely inconsistent. So much stuff is brought up that goes against all the choices you have made. It's like no variables are being set, and the game is on rails regardless of the choices you make.

If you didn't spy on Landon, it doesn't matter because he talks about it like you did later in your room. Even though you never did. Same with the spanking thing at school. If you never got spanked, she still talks about it like she was spanked. Same when you're in the computer room and those guys assault you, saying you showed your ass and let the other guys touch you, when it never happened.

The game is full of stuff like this. None of your choices actually matter at all. The game assumes you are just picking all the slut choices and ignores any of the other choices you make. Thus, leading to tons of inconsistencies that make absolutely no sense.

So yeah, it just wasn't good. Might as well make a kinetic novel if you are going to ignore all the choices and railroad people down one path. Because as it is right now, it's a mess of inconsistencies. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
 
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I get angel is Naïve and Pure but the teacher straight up humping her outside her panties is a bit much, no way she wouldn't run away or tell someone about it. especially on "Pure" path, even though the Pure option was suspiciously missing from the choice pool

NOTICE: This game uses "porn-logic" and is not meant to be a serious take on real life. The story is not a romance novel by any stretch and is also meant not to be taken too seriously.

Should be " sexual assault constantly by every male including family Logic" lol

WARNING/DISCLAIMER: IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO SEE AN INNOCENT GIRL GET SEXUALLY HARRASSED, GROPED, NEARLY RAPED, AND TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF, THEN THIS IS NOT THE GAME FOR YOU!!!

yep this game defiantly needs those disclaimers
 
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This is not a novel, but a porn video game, I don't know what others are thinking, but I find it strange that you want from a porn video game to be "a novel with a solid story'". There are lots of those in any library, not on a porn games site. A porn game should be a good porn game, and that's what this game is. It's actually a great porn game (I haven't played this last update yet). Hopefully the developer gets the success he deserves, because he has the skills to do great work, he shouldn't be discouraged because someone expecting a novel with a solid story is disappointed that a porn game has porn in it.
Maybe you should do some research, they are called AVN's, And AVN stands for ADULT VISUAL NOVEL, It's a Japanese invention that was never solely based on porn, But i can see you do not have the brain capacity to comprehend that these are not video games. It's a shame to many people believe they are games when they clearly show they are novels you read just like flipping through a book, but instead there on a computer or a phone, and for your information this is a pirate site not a porn site.
 
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Maybe you should do some research, they are called AVN's, And AVN stands for ADULT VISUAL NOVEL, It's a Japanese invention that was never solely based on porn, But i can see you do not have the brain capacity to comprehend that these are not video games. It's a shame to many people believe they are games when they clearly show they are novels you read just like flipping through a book, but instead there on a computer or a phone, and for your information this is a pirate site not a porn site.
Your condescending comment is highly amusing to me because
1. You apparently lack the brain capacity to read the notice on the main post that explicitly says this is not a novel and not meant to be taken particularly seriously.
2. This is not a Japanese game and does not claim to be an AVN anywhere.
3. This is a video game as it has interactive elements and exists in a digital format.
4. For someone who thinks he's clearly so very intelligent, it's amusing you failed to use "too" when you should have and used the wrong version of "they're."
And finally,
5. This is a pirate site that exists to pirate porn games. Given that it probably wouldn't exist if porn games didn't exist, I think it's pretty accurate to call this a porn site. Any argument against this is just a pointless question of semantics.

The developer deserves all the credit in the world for making a game he wants to make while asking for 0 financial support in return. He's very clear in the OP about what this game is and what to expect from it, and if you have some problem with it then that's on you. What you're doing now is like walking into a steakhouse and being unhappy that they serve primarily steaks.

I hope the dev doesn't get discouraged from comments like yours and keeps on working on this project.
 

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Your condescending comment is highly amusing to me because
1. You apparently lack the brain capacity to read the notice on the main post that explicitly says this is not a novel and not meant to be taken particularly seriously.
2. This is not a Japanese game and does not claim to be an AVN anywhere.
3. This is a video game as it has interactive elements and exists in a digital format.
4. For someone who thinks he's clearly so very intelligent, it's amusing you failed to use "too" when you should have and used the wrong version of "they're."
And finally,
5. This is a pirate site that exists to pirate porn games. Given that it probably wouldn't exist if porn games didn't exist, I think it's pretty accurate to call this a porn site. Any argument against this is just a pointless question of semantics.

The developer deserves all the credit in the world for making a game he wants to make while asking for 0 financial support in return. He's very clear in the OP about what this game is and what to expect from it, and if you have some problem with it then that's on you. What you're doing now is like walking into a steakhouse and being unhappy that they serve primarily steaks.

I hope the dev doesn't get discouraged from comments like yours and keeps on working on this project.
you do realize this is a Forum...for discussions and opinions...and if I'm not mistaken top left before Ren'Py is VN in big red box last time i checked VN didn't mean porn game would be a weird abbreviation ;)
 
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you do realize this is a Forum...for discussions and opinions...and if I'm not mistaken top left before Ren'Py is VN in big red box last time i checked VN didn't mean porn game would be a weird abbreviation ;)
Are you expecting something other than a porn game from this site?
He was using the AVN thing as a very specific definition to which he could criticize this game, which is ridiculous. I don't think I should have to explain this, but a VN and an actual novel are very different things. The VN just tells us what format the game is in, not what to expect from it

Why do you think I don't know that this is a forum? He's entitled to post his stupid opinion, and I'm likewise fully within my rights to be amused by it.
 
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adr5ian

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Maybe you should do some research, they are called AVN's, And AVN stands for ADULT VISUAL NOVEL,
VNs are not novels, it's just a rather improper name for a genre of video games. This is not a novel, it's simply a porn game. Calling these games VN is just a convention. In a way, these games are like the old porn cartoons, but in a video game format with some choices added in. Your disappointment (and not only yours, I saw this before) that porn has porn in it, is absurd.

It's a shame to many people believe they are games when they clearly show they are novels you read just like flipping through a book, but instead there on a computer or a phone, and for your information this is a pirate site not a porn site.
It's a shame that people believe that VN , a genre of video games, are games? And that a porn game is a porn game?
This is a pirate site? Seriously? Is the developer himself pirating his own game? This is not how it works. These developers expect support from those that appreciate their work and want to help further development.
 
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I get this is a slut simulator running on porn logic, but even then, it was pretty bad.

Mostly because it is completely inconsistent. So much stuff is brought up that goes against all the choices you have made. It's like no variables are being set, and the game is on rails regardless of the choices you make.

If you didn't spy on Landon, it doesn't matter because he talks about it like you did later in your room. Even though you never did. Same with the spanking thing at school. If you never got spanked, she still talks about it like she was spanked. Same when you're in the computer room and those guys assault you, saying you showed your ass and let the other guys touch you, when it never happened.

The game is full of stuff like this. None of your choices actually matter at all. The game assumes you are just picking all the slut choices and ignores any of the other choices you make. Thus, leading to tons of inconsistencies that make absolutely no sense.

So yeah, it just wasn't good. Might as well make a kinetic novel if you are going to ignore all the choices and railroad people down one path. Because as it is right now, it's a mess of inconsistencies. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.
The inconsistencies will eventually get weeded out in the final release of this game. Up to this point, there are a lot of choices and variables to keep track of, and inconsistencies like those you speak of in the Pure path are admittedly the last that get checked for accuracy, solely because the main focus is that this is a porn game.

I assure you that the inconsistencies will all get weeded out by the time the final version is released.

Thank you for pointing out the inconsistencies so that I may address them for the next update.

If you play all three paths and then a mixed choice path, I assure you that your choices do matter and effect the story.
 

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I get angel is Naïve and Pure but the teacher straight up humping her outside her panties is a bit much, no way she wouldn't run away or tell someone about it. especially on "Pure" path, even though the Pure option was suspiciously missing from the choice pool
I will look into this missing Pure choice and fix for the next update. Thank you.
 
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Is the developer himself pirating his own game?
In a way I am, since I'm doing all this work for free lol
developers expect support from those that appreciate their work and want to help further development.
I do appreciate the support. Just wish those that give criticism would do it in a more helpful way rather than bashing. I'd understand the bashing if they paid money for this, but this is free stuff! Lol

They also seem to think this is a finished product rather than a work in progress. I've never understood that, especially when someone reviews the game as if it should be fully polished like a final release.

Anyways, I appreciate your common sense here.
 

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Thank you to the page owner for the warning. Even if there is a fine line between getting nearly raped and raped, it helped to decide not to watch this novel.
 

adr5ian

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In a way I am, since I'm doing all this work for free lol
I follow about 4 games here, including this one (I just realised the MCs in all of those have a lot in common) and in all of them the developers are present in the forum and probably adding the updates themselves as soon as they are released. I didn't see any of them saying this is piracy. These games are not easy to be distributed as any other game/software, so this is a way to make an income out of them, because the popular games make quite a bit of money (some even make a lot, like tens of thousands a month) from donations.
This game should be more popular, because other games like this, and not even this good, with corruption of the female main character etc are quite successful. There's also a bit of luck involved, because many good games here are buried in the pile, but it may have a snowball effect once it gets some popularity. Maybe one good strategy is releasing smaller updates more often for a while so the game is on the first page more often and gets a good moment when not a lot of other games are added, so more people will give it a chance.
 
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