VN Ren'Py Abandoned Angel's Tear [Epi.1.5] [Cesny]

[Deleted member 1571716]

As long as you fine with the extra sag in the caboose and the need for some motor oil aid to get the engine humming, people would tap it if get offered... that is just humans being humans.

Of course. lol There will be other LIs also. But, 2 are GILFs. So, people will have a choice.

 

[House Of Black]

Oh. Ahahaha Yeah. Not many games with GILFs. I'll be changing that after the first of the year.

Hey nothing with Gilfs I love them when they’re characters are done right.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

While the Amnesia trope is kind of a been there, done that thing in a lot of games. I find this game looking great and i want to play it. While the trope may be cliche the story might not necessarily be 1 to 1 like some games. So I'm looking forward to playing and seeing where it goes.

 

[leon02457]

Yeah go milf and dilf power

 

[Sucre Abernathy]

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[drifter139]

not trying to dismiss your work but maybe look for a proofreader as the English translation is a bit hard to make sense of. again, not trying to dismiss your work thus far. good luck going forward

 

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Angel's Tear Prologue Unofficial Android Port - Mega

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You work fast! Thanks for the port

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

I confused it with angel's tower
Finally a mature looking mc. Not one of those baby face 18y. For mc alone I will give it a try.
Overview could be a little less texing ? I hurts my brain.

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

Future tags in Genre spoilers please. Also, the overview is Engrish, so it's starting off on the wrong foot.

Not everyone speaks English or has has money to buy proofreader. Dev is new.

 

[tonny]

Story seems very interesting and nice renders and girls

 

[Boehser Onkel]

game looks good so far

story can be a interesting one
renders are very good

text needs a proof reader ofc , some sentences need to be rewritten

i smell a big drama incoming ( Lucy )

anyways - nice new game , will see where its leads to

gl with your game Cesny

 

[Yoru]

Nice renders!
Good luck dear dev

 

[Simon93333]

not trying to dismiss your work but maybe look for a proofreader as the English translation is a bit hard to make sense of. again, not trying to dismiss your work thus far. good luck going forward
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Well I think I'll take over the translation if the Dev doesn't have any problems with that, but trust me I'm turk and there are words that even I don't know how to translate despite studying English 8 years

 

[Simon93333]

Wallahi çukur 3 sezon 1 bölümü izlemiş gibi oldum doktor ve mc replikleri aynı böyle devam edersen oyun uçar gider

 

[Cesny]

Looks good, decent production value. But I'm sick of seeing amnesiac stories, they're all similar in how the story plays out, and there's only so much you can do with amnesia as a plot device. Will try this when I have amnesia about playing amnesiac VNs.

Best of luck, thank you for sharing your work!

It won't be a memory loss.

 

[Cesny]

I won't tank the rating with a sole low star review this early in development, but this level of Engrish just won't do. I would probably give it a 2* at this point almost entirely due to the horrendous Engrish that hampers any characterization and natural flow of dialogue.

Since the dev doesn't want to reveal future tags and facepalmed my inquiry, I'll just assume the game revolves mostly around the current tags under Genre. Meaning, this will likely lean heavily into the mystery and drama aspects. It seems to be a rather serious game that isn't trying to be simple fap game or cookie cutter tropey harem/incest/whatever type of game that rehashes the same plot elements. That should be a good thing, but the atrocious Engrish that is even worse than what we see in the overview makes it hard to take this seriously. I wonder how it reads in Turkish, but the English version gives me the sense that the writer just couldn't translate any nuance in the dialogues. Only the bare minimum and core message of the line is translated, and sometimes even that core meaning is lost.

On the plus side, the visuals are quite nice. The dev has talent in creating visually stimulating scenes that has some cinematic quality to it. It's certainly better than most new devs that default to face to face conversations with a person at the center of the screen. The music was alright. It fit the claustrophobic nature of the prologue. The presentation as a whole does a great job in setting the atmosphere.

I consider the writing to be the most important category, and the Engrish presented here just cannot deliver the story the dev wants to tell. It seems like an interesting story, though. If the dev gets an actual translator or editor, the game could definitely be worth following.

We know that English is not good. We plan to fix this in part 1.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

We know that English is not good. We plan to fix this in part 1.

That guy has serious problem. He talks shits about almost every harem, incest, romance game that doesn't include ntr. I told him that dev is new, still learning,English isn't his first language but still he would be a pain in the ass. Ignore him bro. Stick to your vision and improve as you go. Good luck.

 

[Prokopije]

Hello. I see there will be few girls, so want to ask will it be possible to maintain sex relations with just one of them we choose and have no sex stuff with other girls?

 

[Chris_Prat]

To put an effort and make a game with nice renders and a story to tell, that's the right thing by now. English will be polished on future updates, it's the right choice to do in the future, there's no room for that right now if there's almost any support yet or any income (by the time that I write this, the DEV has 3 patrons and 8$). So let see...

By the way, best luck to the DEV for this project...