VN Ren'Py Abandoned Angel's Tear [Epi.1.5] [Cesny]

3.10 star(s) 8 Votes

ScroxDieded

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Nov 6, 2017
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Looking... Good. I hope... What was it?... I can't remember... It's like... A haunting word... That's kept me up at night... But when the night is over... I forget all about it...


Jokes aside, the renders look good. I hope the dev can persevere and polish the game as he goes along. I'll keep an eye on this.
 
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Max Himself

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May 26, 2020
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Aga gene ingilizceden laf yemişsiniz gibi duruyor. İndirip bakacağım, bakalım nasıl olmuş. Fotoğraflardan gördüğüm kadarıyla modeller falan çok iyi görünüyor, hikaye de kopuk kopuk devam etmezse tutar.
 
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Cesny

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Aga gene ingilizceden laf yemişsiniz gibi duruyor. İndirip bakacağım, bakalım nasıl olmuş. Fotoğraflardan gördüğüm kadarıyla modeller falan çok iyi görünüyor, hikaye de kopuk kopuk devam etmezse tutar.
Çeviriyi çok kısıtlı bir sürede yaptırdık. 1.bölümde düzeltmeye çalışacağız.
 
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jaws4567

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Jan 5, 2018
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very original work, If you would like the English editing to a better idiomatic version let me know, I'd like to encourage the project.
 

desmosome

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Sep 5, 2018
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That guy has serious problem. He talks shits about almost every harem, incest, romance game that doesn't include ntr. I told him that dev is new, still learning,English isn't his first language but still he would be a pain in the ass. Ignore him bro. Stick to your vision and improve as you go. Good luck.
You kids are a riot lol. Not everything revolves around your imaginary NTR war. Get a grip.
 

dolfe67

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No idea. Just saying, it doesn't matter how a character look (in any game), if the creator given them a crap personality and characteristics. Looks is just superficial. Once they open their gab is when gears start to churn.
I would say both matter. For instance I can't take seriously a nerd looking guy who acts like a chad and get all the chicks
 

JC07

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It looks pretty good, I haven't played it yet, waiting for some future tags to see if this is going to be a safe trip for me or not. But from the perspective of the story it seems something with an absurd potential (the fact that some people I admire here on this forum, giving good reviews, makes me have this thought).

And desmosome , it may just be knowledge, but the fact that you are such a strong critic on some games that you don't have NTR and defender of some that do, is something that draws attention. But it might just be an acknowledgment.

I just think it's ridiculous for someone to give a low rating to a game because it contains or doesn't contain a TAG that they like. And it's also kind of unfair to give a low first release rating for DEV who are on their first project, give them Feedback here in the comments and try to help improve something. If he doesn't accept it and don't correct it, then he deserves to be negatively evaluated. Or if you're already an industry-savvy DEV.

All that aside, I would like to know about future TAGs, to get a sense of where this is going and not regret it later. And dear DEV, good luck with your project, may it bring you good results, don't let yourself be shaken by harsh criticism, try to get something constructive out of it and get on with your work. Stay safe.
 

desmosome

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Sep 5, 2018
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It looks pretty good, I haven't played it yet, waiting for some future tags to see if this is going to be a safe trip for me or not. But from the perspective of the story it seems something with an absurd potential (the fact that some people I admire here on this forum, giving good reviews, makes me have this thought).

And desmosome , it may just be knowledge, but the fact that you are such a strong critic on some games that you don't have NTR and defender of some that do, is something that draws attention. But it might just be an acknowledgment.

I just think it's ridiculous for someone to give a low rating to a game because it contains or doesn't contain a TAG that they like. And it's also kind of unfair to give a low first release rating for DEV who are on their first project, give them Feedback here in the comments and try to help improve something. If he doesn't accept it and don't correct it, then he deserves to be negatively evaluated. Or if you're already an industry-savvy DEV.

All that aside, I would like to know about future TAGs, to get a sense of where this is going and not regret it later. And dear DEV, good luck with your project, may it bring you good results, don't let yourself be shaken by harsh criticism, try to get something constructive out of it and get on with your work. Stay safe.
I have never, in my entire time here, rated a game based on a tag, be it NTR or anything else. I consider what the dev is trying to do and try to be objective about their success in achieving that. So what are you guys even talking about? It's just projection on your part. Go read all my reviews if you feel like. I also specifically did not rate this game at this early stage because I would rate it rather low due to the Engrish that actively hampers the story and characters. I also listed all the things it does well. This is constructive criticism. I never even mention the direction of the plot. That is something I leave up to the dev. Plot and characters are the main manifestation of the dev's creativity. I only touch on these topics if it literally doesn't make sense at all even with porn logic and fetishes involved.

If you guys who rate games with 1 star because it has borderline NTR or whatever can be even half as objective about it as I try to be, the mods wouldn't have to delete all the garbage reviews that break the rules and break their backs cleaning up every fucking game thread.
 

JC07

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I have never, in my entire time here, rated a game based on a tag, be it NTR or anything else. I consider what the dev is trying to do and try to be objective about their success in achieving that. So what are you guys even talking about? It's just projection on your part. Go read all my reviews if you feel like. I also specifically did not rate this game at this early stage because I would rate it rather low due to the Engrish that actively hampers the story and characters. I also listed all the things it does well. This is constructive criticism. I never even mention the direction of the plot. That is something I leave up to the dev. Plot and characters are the main manifestation of the dev's creativity. I only touch on these topics if it literally doesn't make sense at all even with porn logic and fetishes involved.

If you guys who rate games with 1 star because it has borderline NTR or whatever can be even half as objective about it as I try to be, the mods wouldn't have to delete all the garbage reviews that break the rules and break their backs cleaning up every fucking game thread.
Well, first of all I didn't say YOU do this kind of thing, I said I think it's ridiculous who does it. As you said whether you already have NTR or not. What I said goes both ways.

What I said about you was that it caught my attention that in some games that contain a certain tag you seem a little more, how can I say, calm. But like I said, it might just be an acquaintance.

And no, I practically don't rate games, much less the ones I don't like, save the case for one or two, and I may have referred to the topic not because it contains, but because it's meaningless and totally messed up. So I think my criticism may have this more focused on the construction of the story, than for containing an X or Y tag.

I never criticize games for their English, I don't speak English and I can't judge. If it's something like meaningless dialogs, ok. But by incorrect translation or things like that, I think it's silly to evaluate for that. And I think it's really cool when I see that the DEV doesn't speak English and someone fluent in this language offers to help translate the games and not just stand there criticizing it.

And again, to be clear, I'm not saying that you rate games for things I've talked about earlier, I'm saying that some of your comments caught my attention in some posts. But have nothing to do with it, you are free to comment as you please and I respect that.

I don't know if you'll understand what I mean, as I don't speak English and I use google translator to communicate here.
 

FAP369ZONE

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Just tried it and from what i could decipher with my super A.I. linguistic cracker :KEK: the story seems mysterious yet is quite vague even for a prologue... or my super A.I. linguistic cracker is messing around with me and this is just a plot for some new DCmovie where that little girl at the end is Harley Quinn and this is a story about her parents :illuminati:

Joking aside, if the overall dialog and English improves by just 50% this EGame could skyrocket in 2-3 updates for sure!

Will keep this one on my watch list for now and see how future updates are... Good luck Cesny (y)
 
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Tysonator2000

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This story so far is quite intriguing. The English isn't great, but that's fixable. Very suspicious of the doctor. She doesn't tell you about your relationship with Cara when mentioned. It feels like you've been there longer than she's letting on as well. Curious as to where Lucy is, assuming she's still alive at this point. That would explain why you're situated in a psych ward and not in a regular hospital. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
 
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XXXNinjas

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Jun 17, 2021
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Just finished the prologue and uploaded it for viewing if you want to check it out before downloading..... but you might as well just go and download it as this is one. The renders are spot on and the dialog is actually really good for saying there is a warning as English is not his native language. Really excited for when chapter 1 drops

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