VN Ren'Py Abandoned Angel's Tear [Epi.1.5] [Cesny]

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Trasher2018

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The renders are spot on and the dialog is actually really good for saying there is a warning as English is not his native language. Really excited for when chapter 1 drops [...]
And that is the problem - the dialog resembles more a MTL translation, so I guess he has no or really bad English skills.

Some sentences are just gibberish for me - could be the Turkish version and I would understand the same ^^ - So I cant say how good or bad the dialog is - because most of the time the characters just put out some words that might resemble a coherent sentence or even some form of dialog. I am not a native speaker myself and just wing it with my rusty school englisch and what I pick up in the internet - so I dont care for the most eloquent writing, but I really want to understand what is going on :p

The game really needs a proof reader or translator to get more support, because as you have said, the renders look good and I do like the look of the MC, even if some facial expressions are a bit weird. ^^
 

Cesny

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And that is the problem - the dialog resembles more a MTL translation, so I guess he has no or really bad English skills.

Some sentences are just gibberish for me - could be the Turkish version and I would understand the same ^^ - So I cant say how good or bad the dialog is - because most of the time the characters just put out some words that might resemble a coherent sentence or even some form of dialog. I am not a native speaker myself and just wing it with my rusty school englisch and what I pick up in the internet - so I dont care for the most eloquent writing, but I really want to understand what is going on :p

The game really needs a proof reader or translator to get more support, because as you have said, the renders look good and I do like the look of the MC, even if some facial expressions are a bit weird. ^^
We actually fixed the English a little bit, but when we reported the update, they got it wrong. We added the link again, sorry.
 
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kartolas

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Third new game I tried today without landladies. Is it christmas already?

Thank you and good luck.
 

DanThaMan

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There has been a new post on Patreon but its just a 'special render' doesn't seem to be any news about the update..
 

h0Ws?!

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I know it's too early for such questions, but you know when the game will be compressed?
 

BaasB

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Cesny you're previous banner was a lot better than what you have ATM:unsure:

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hazzi

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something is wrong with the gofile download. i got an error when i tried to extract.
 

xinkala

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yoo dev...change it to webp
either way this game will be bigger in size then a being a dick in 3-4 update :KEK:
 
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