And that is the problem - the dialog resembles more a MTL translation, so I guess he has no or really bad English skills.
Some sentences are just gibberish for me - could be the Turkish version and I would understand the same ^^ - So I cant say how good or bad the dialog is - because most of the time the characters just put out some words that might resemble a coherent sentence or even some form of dialog. I am not a native speaker myself and just wing it with my rusty school englisch and what I pick up in the internet - so I dont care for the most eloquent writing, but I really want to understand what is going on
The game really needs a proof reader or translator to get more support, because as you have said, the renders look good and I do like the look of the MC, even if some facial expressions are a bit weird. ^^