VN Ren'Py Abandoned Angel's Tear [Epi.1.5] [Cesny]

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Cesny

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Overview:
After a traumatic event, you find yourself in a mental hospital. You don't remember how exactly you got to this hospital, what you went through. The only thing you remember about this incident is someone named Dimitrov. You have to face it and bring things to light. There will be some obstacles and some people in your way. Will you crush them or will you pity them?​

Thread Updated: 2022-06-30
Release Date: 2022-06-30
Developer: Cesny -
Censored: No
Version: Episode 1.5
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English, Turkish, Portuguese(Only Prologue)
Other Games: Lost - Last Chance
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Havenless_

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Drama, mystery, romance... Sounds perfect to me. Let's give it a try.

I really like the overview. It makes it pretty clear that mystery will be a very recurring theme. But maybe it's too cryptic. A little more information about the main plot and what we can find in the game (like tags, fetishes, more topics that will be in the game, etc.) would come in handy.

It looks amazing. I wish you much success in the development!
 

rKnight

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The mere fact that U can play the role of an adult MC rather than another 18 y/o virgin wanting to bang his mom, is enough for me to give it a shot. (y)

EDIT: Great visual quality and hot scenes. The story is still being developed, but the foundation looks promising and interesting. Some of the dialogue might need a bit of polishing to keep the story from feeling a bit stiff and forced.
 
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MrFriendly

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Okay, if English is not your first language, OR you aren't confident in your ability to write your story in English, please find someone else to help you; check out the recruiting forums as there are people who will do that for free or a simple credit. This could be a great idea with a great story but it needs someone to polish it and make it coherent in English. I wish I could read Turkish, I believe that's the original language, as I'm sure it makes a lot more sense in the author's native tongue.

Best of luck to the dev, I hope this gets polished up.
 
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