Yes it's right. What doesn't make sense to me is the fact she was wearing jeans overalls with no bra, teasing her grandpa and her friends. That was more provocative compared to the black dress she's wearing now and many other clothes. It was a little bit to misleading. Maybe Deep wanted to portray her as innocent and pure, idk...
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It's clear in that scene that Anna only expected her and her grandfather to be on the farm that day, since Rebecca and her friends turn up unannounced having spent the whole Summer travelling from city to city. So she couldn't be wearing that outfit to tease them, because she had no idea they were going to turn up. And at no point does her grandfather show any sexual interest in Anna. Her and him just don't have that kind of relationship. Anna was most likely dressed that way, because it was a hot summer's day, and she was helping out on the farm. It had nothing to do with her being provocative, but just wearing something that was comfortable and practical in the hot sun.
Yes, the outfit was made more provocative than it needed to be. But that was likely for our benefit, rather than any intension by Anna to tease the other characters
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I don't recognise the scene of her being on a farm. The only version of her first story I've played was on a Mac version which was shown as a visual novel. Was it an abridged version as well?
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Anna First Time. Available from the OP. Literally starts on the farm with her grandfather and yes it is a VN.
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Cheers, my learning curve for finding decent games is like the Eiger. This one is pure class.
The issue I have is I downloaded the separate files in Rar form but I'm using Mac and the unarchiver thing I use said it was incomplete. I suck at the tech side of opening a bloody game.
Just bear in mind, that Anna in that short novel, will be nothing like she is presently. If you're expecting more of slutty Anna you're going to be very disappointed. In all the short novels, Anna is still the stunning, voluptuous girl we've all grown to love, but before her condition made her into a nymphomaniac.
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I understand that now. I wish the sandbox version had some kind of depravity guage which made it so you had to be more selective over her choices. Also, in the second chapter she allows herself to be photographed and filmed without the consequences of being blackmailed. I love the character and find the story to be well written but I wish the choices had a real impact on the story arc.
Your choices do have an impact. You can choose whether Jeremy, Patrick and Earl live or die. And ultimately who she has sex with. In the future you'll be able to choose whether she stays with Andrew or dumps him. And if she does, there''ll be endings with 4 other characters, and probably another where she stays single. There are two routes at work, two at the hospital, two criminal routes, two at the Bar and two different routes with Lenny. There were supposed to be two porn routes, but they eventually decided against that, and made the escort route into a separate storyline
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Andrew is a real piece of shit. It's fun seeing him getting mugged off while she shags random guys. I really enjoy the game but as I have a Mac was forced to see the first part as a VN.
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Ehhh...redoing a different route after a while and catching up on the last couple of updates...started from the beginning..seriously, has a native English speaker not offered to help Deep yet, the writing is truly attrocious on a top level, I'd actually forgotten just how bad it was/is. If it wasn't for Anna herself I'd have dropped this a long time ago.
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You ever get a reply to this, I'd forgotten this happened, very annoying, most of my own saves are the same scenario.
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Most of the writing on Chapter 2 has been done by Awake. Deep mainly concentrates on rendering these days. Neither of them speak English as a first language and sometimes they get it wrong. But they're hardly alone in that, in the adult game world, where many Devs are far worse than them. Yes I agree, sometimes Awake does murder the english language, and he has a tendency sometimes to over-elaborate some descriptive passages, which if he'd kept it simpler, would have worked much better. But I think he has improved since the beginning of Chapter 2. I don't think he'll ever be perfect, and it's unrealistic to expect that of someone who speaks English as a second language. It's just something you have to accept, and try to ignore as you're playing the game. It's not that difficult for english speakers to fill in the gaps. That used to bother me a lot when I first started playing these games, but these days hardly at all.
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True but I have my limits, if it's so bad then I just can't continue with it, the rest of the VN becomes moot. Also, sorry, but I find it an unacceptable excuse Zara, when you are marketing something to a predominantly English speaking market, then you should ensure it's acceptable for that demographic. A Chinese game, novel, whatever, predominantly made for the Chinese market, then I'll accept dodgy translations if they never intended the west to be their market. If you intend for the Endglish speaking demographic to be your market, then find someone who can speak it to a good level to translate it for you so it makes sense.
As for the other issue, I'm guessing this has never been addressed no? Case of take the Jeremy alive option but then fix the points and variables for Diane yourself in URM?
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