I did not think it deserved all the negative comments it got from some. I viewed it as a game... no more no less.
Negative comments are absolutely justified, and the author made every effort to obtain a negative reaction; a huge number of examples were given.
The author promised a game of choice, but actually made a KINETIC story. The author always turned any choice in one direction. The author created many variables, but they do not affect the plot, it is a prop. Episode "Steph dumps his shit on MC's head", no matter what options you choose, there is ONLY ONE ending, and it always is.
The author promised a story of love, a happy marriage and swing. Let's take a look at MC and Steph's relationship. MC chose Amber, he HAS to fuck her under the stairs of the club, Steph REFUSES to participate. MC chose Tori, he HAS to go to Tori, Steph REFUSES to participate.
Let's look at Steph. Steph chose Donny, she brings him HOME, MC MUST participate. Steph chose Gina, she brings her HOME, MC MUST participate. Steph chose Paul, she brings him HOME, MC MUST participate (MC can't send Steph to the utility room or toilet).
Last update. Steph doesn't want to fuck, MC can't do anything. Steph wants to fuck Gina, she brings her HOME, MC MUST participate.
I see Steph, when SHE wants, USING MC as an extra for a gangbang, this is NOT love and a happy marriage, this is not swing, this is NTR, MC in this story is not even a beta, he is an omega.
I don't want to remember about the "best friend", it is better to have ten enemies.
I don't see a love story, a happy marriage and swing, lies and manipulation are the story of NTR. As a kinetic story in the NTR genre, there are no complaints, but this is not what the author promised.