visagedirect

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I like it, Great for Prologue, Renders are nice, written well and the slow burn is a must on this ! cant fault it so far, well Done !
 

Davewatch

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Another game with a college age guy with female roomates. I'm so fucking tired of the premise, even just reading, "college," in the overview gives me an intense allergic reaction where my entire back becomes covered in sweat, and my dick shrivels to a ridiculously small size and becomes intensely hot, to the point of steaming.
But he has left collage and started work?
 

Spfjolietjake

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Finding Martin's journal really was a mind fuck and put an interesting spin on things.

Love the LIs. And kudos for using the landlord/tenet thing right. Loved the lewdness with Sophia.

Best of luck with this, I'm ready for more and look forward to it. Thank you:)
 

SSJGOD

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Another game with a college age guy with female roomates. I'm so fucking tired of the premise, even just reading, "college," in the overview gives me an intense allergic reaction where my entire back becomes covered in sweat, and my dick shrivels to a ridiculously small size and becomes intensely hot, to the point of steaming.

It's a great developer. His content looks great.. I just felt like i've seen the plot 10 times already.
 

Wicked Garden

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Okay from the start we see three gorgeous women who are introduced as our housemates, if you will. And almost Immediately the presence of Martin, the former tenant lingers like a bad odor. Throughout the entire gameplay you as the player get the Law & Order SVU vibes that Martin somehow took advantage of Julia and raped her. Only to find out that Julia is just incredibly naïve and CONSENTED to having sex with Martin. Did Martin manipulate her? Yes. But she agreed to have sex with him multiple times after that night. I felt this this entire angle was a complete waste of time, it would've went over better if we knew from the start that Julia just dated an asshole had a bad breakup with him.

This whole time I thought that Julia was a rape victim, so my approach to her character was different from the other women. Fast forward to the "truth" coming out... and now I'm in an open relationship. Lol, make it make sense please. A girl who's "broken" is all of a sudden okay with sharing me? Speaking of sharing, I'm not into that or swinging or whatever word you wanna use to describe it. That all falls underneath the umbrella of NTR in my opinion. Alex all but made it clear that she's not "A one man woman" so the whole concept just seems pointless to me.

Then there's the choices or lack thereof, like what's the point of giving choices if it's not gonna matter to begin with? I wanted to avoid Julia as a LI after the whole Martin thing but I can't, I'm locked in. I wanted to avoid the whole panties on the floor scenario but once again I couldn't.

Lastly, the way Sophie chose to pursue you was very.. juvenile. I didn't expect to be such an easy lay but I can't complain.

I probably pass on this one, as I mentioned the whole Julia-Martin thing made me not care for the character. The only thing I can see you do moving forward with her is to corrupt her and make her sluttier. But the open relationship killed it for me.
 

Spfjolietjake

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Sep 26, 2019
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Okay from the start we see three gorgeous women who are introduced as our housemates, if you will. And almost Immediately the presence of Martin, the former tenant lingers like a bad odor. Throughout the entire gameplay you as the player get the Law & Order SVU vibes that Martin somehow took advantage of Julia and raped her. Only to find out that Julia is just incredibly naïve and CONSENTED to having sex with Martin. Did Martin manipulate her? Yes. But she agreed to have sex with him multiple times after that night. I felt this this entire angle was a complete waste of time, it would've went over better if we knew from the start that Julia just dated an asshole had a bad breakup with him.

This whole time I thought that Julia was a rape victim, so my approach to her character was different from the other women. Fast forward to the "truth" coming out... and now I'm in an open relationship. Lol, make it make sense please. A girl who's "broken" is all of a sudden okay with sharing me? Speaking of sharing, I'm not into that or swinging or whatever word you wanna use to describe it. That all falls underneath the umbrella of NTR in my opinion. Alex all but made it clear that she's not "A one man woman" so the whole concept just seems pointless to me.

Then there's the choices or lack thereof, like what's the point of giving choices if it's not gonna matter to begin with? I wanted to avoid Julia as a LI after the whole Martin thing but I can't, I'm locked in. I wanted to avoid the whole panties on the floor scenario but once again I couldn't.

Lastly, the way Sophie chose to pursue you was very.. juvenile. I didn't expect to be such an easy lay but I can't complain.

I probably pass on this one, as I mentioned the whole Julia-Martin thing made me not care for the character. The only thing I can see you do moving forward with her is to corrupt her and make her sluttier. But the open relationship killed it for me.
I don't think she was "broken" lots of women have lost their v card to cheating or douchebag boyfriends and went on to have nice healthy relationships.

I personally love this vn so far, but I do hope there are choices in the further updates, but I get it ain't for everybody. If it stays the course I'll follow it.
 

Tragic Princess

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I don't think she was "broken" lots of women have lost their v card to cheating or douchebag boyfriends and went on to have nice healthy relationships.

I personally love this vn so far, but I do hope there are choices in the further updates, but I get it ain't for everybody. If it stays the course I'll follow it.
I think it was Alex herself that brought up her being broken.
 

Tragic Princess

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So when Alex saw Mc jerking off to a pair of Sophia's panties, wouldn't her first instinct be to keep Mc away from her sister because he might be a pervert like Martin?
 

Spfjolietjake

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Sep 26, 2019
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So when Alex saw Mc jerking off to a pair of Sophia's panties, wouldn't her first instinct be to keep Mc away from her sister because he might be a pervert like Martin?
The dev planted the idea, that the way to win Alex's trust and affection was honesty. Is it perfect, no. You do have a point. But I just see it differently and can see where you are coming from.

Edit: to make meaning more clear ( hopefully:p )
 
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Okay from the start we see three gorgeous women who are introduced as our housemates, if you will. And almost Immediately the presence of Martin, the former tenant lingers like a bad odor. Throughout the entire gameplay you as the player get the Law & Order SVU vibes that Martin somehow took advantage of Julia and raped her. Only to find out that Julia is just incredibly naïve and CONSENTED to having sex with Martin. Did Martin manipulate her? Yes. But she agreed to have sex with him multiple times after that night. I felt this this entire angle was a complete waste of time, it would've went over better if we knew from the start that Julia just dated an asshole had a bad breakup with him.

This whole time I thought that Julia was a rape victim, so my approach to her character was different from the other women. Fast forward to the "truth" coming out... and now I'm in an open relationship. Lol, make it make sense please. A girl who's "broken" is all of a sudden okay with sharing me? Speaking of sharing, I'm not into that or swinging or whatever word you wanna use to describe it. That all falls underneath the umbrella of NTR in my opinion. Alex all but made it clear that she's not "A one man woman" so the whole concept just seems pointless to me.

Then there's the choices or lack thereof, like what's the point of giving choices if it's not gonna matter to begin with? I wanted to avoid Julia as a LI after the whole Martin thing but I can't, I'm locked in. I wanted to avoid the whole panties on the floor scenario but once again I couldn't.

Lastly, the way Sophie chose to pursue you was very.. juvenile. I didn't expect to be such an easy lay but I can't complain.

I probably pass on this one, as I mentioned the whole Julia-Martin thing made me not care for the character. The only thing I can see you do moving forward with her is to corrupt her and make her sluttier. But the open relationship killed it for me.
100% agreed and this is where the weirdness only starts for me (check out my analysis under the spoiler button on the previous page). Part of me hopes this was a set-up for a psychological horror story with kinky themes so I can say: well yeah that way it makes sense and from a certain POV it's well done. Because I don't know what the point was for sure I'm withholding judgment until the second release.
 

Joyce Harding

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The dev planted it that to win Alex's trust and affection was honesty. Is it perfect, no. You do have a point. But I just see it differently and can see where you are coming from.
That's sort of a ludicrous way of testing someone's trust and honesty but that's just my opinion. As far as the Julia being "broken" comment I think people are going to have a problem with the fact that the mc wasn't first in line to make love to Julia. I myself, don't care because it happened before we arrived but I heard comments about her being Martin's sloppy seconds or what not. Some feel like she's damaged and mc is their to fix what was "broken" .
 
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