HTML Aphrodisia [Ch.3.9.9] [Dr.Wolfman]

[EvolutionKills]

There is a character who already has a boyfriend. You walk in on them going at it and have the option to watch. That is not NTR, even by the extreme loosest defintion. That is voyeurism, which is clearly marked.


The game is tagged correctly.

Hehehehehe.

This just shows how easily the virtual ego can be bruised around here. Oh what's that? A lady having sexy times but not WITH ME!? I'm the MC, all of the girls clearly should be polishing my knob and no other, anything less makes me a betamax cuckold! BURN THE SLUT!! DOWN WITH NTR!!

 

[ChillVibes]

Simple story very effective seems easy enough.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

I haven't played your game yet so I don't know if you fell into this trap (but historically almost every game does because if not it's almost always a kinetic novel with each scene happening once and only once and no variation on where you can go/do), but I mean that if you force people to repeat sex scenes in any way, no matter how much variation you add it gets boring fast and that's ALWAYS exacerbated by more interactivity. Having 49 minor variations on a scene doesn't make it better if the player needs to do it x times to have the right stats to bring a partner to the next stage or unlock a new one. At that point it stops being sexy and starts being "what's the fastest way to get through this slog".

Ok I get your point. But this game it's just not for you. It's like saying that a game like Civilization has to many things to do and things take to long to happen. Or saying that FIFA is bad because you have to go back and forth with the ball every time hahaha.
If anyone is playing this game to simulate sex in 30 seconds then this game is absolutely not for them. The whole purpose of the game is realism in the scenes, and there's no other way to that that other than acctually having to choose what you'll do next.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

Hehehehehe.

This just shows how easily the virtual ego can be bruised around here. Oh what's that? A lady having sexy times but not WITH ME!? I'm the MC, all of the girls clearly should be polishing my knob and no other, anything less makes me a betamax cuckold! BURN THE SLUT!! DOWN WITH NTR!!

Thank you! Today I just realized how sensitive some people are to this type of thing haha.

 

[SASHAKAMEN]

Name?

 

[Trasher2018]

Thanks for the reply man. I listed it as 1.0 since there's a full chapter released. What would you suggest for a label?

everything else. version declaration is up to the dev, but 1.0 is considered (in general) as the final release of a game.

1.0 should be the version when you are finished.

My suggsestion?

0.1.0 (Chapter 1)
0.2.0 (Chapter 2)
0.2.5 ( 1/2 Chapter 3? - some kind of interim?)

 

[Disgruntler]

Ok I get your point. But this game it's just not for you. It's like saying that a game like Civilization has to many things to do and things take to long to happen. Or saying that FIFA is bad because you have to go back and forth with the ball every time hahaha.
If anyone is playing this game to simulate sex in 30 seconds then this game is absolutely not for them. The whole purpose of the game is realism in the scenes, and there's no other way to that that other than acctually having to choose what you'll do next.

The only recommendation I have regarding this is to increase the values gained for doing different acts. Keep the relative proportions the same, but make it that you don't actually have the ability to click on -every- option multiple times in order to progress the minigame. Balancing scores and having to worry about the girl's preferences is a solid foundation, no need to make it tooo long to go through or force too much repetition.


Other than that, interesting story, interesting game, I'm curious to see where you go with it.

 

[Jack Hatter]

I'm reading other players comments but seeing how some of my favorite games are HTML mind control I'll try it anyway.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

The only recommendation I have regarding this is to increase the values gained for doing different acts. Keep the relative proportions the same, but make it that you don't actually have the ability to click on -every- option multiple times in order to progress the minigame. Balancing scores and having to worry about the girl's preferences is a solid foundation, no need to make it tooo long to go through or force too much repetition.


Other than that, interesting story, interesting game, I'm curious to see where you go with it.

That's a solid advice. I'll probably fix that in a later release. The reason I left it as it is is for the sake of the player being able to go through every scene, at least in a first release of the game, just to see how the interactivity works. That being said I agree that it would be more interesting to not be able to do -every- action more than once during sex.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

I'm reading other players comments but seeing how some of my favorite games are HTML mind control I'll try it anyway.

It currently doesn't have much mind control yet, but I plan to focus a lot of content regarding that. Just wait until you see what other powers the mc will get muahahaha.

 

[Trasher2018]

Ok - had a look.

1. Was the L key broken on the keyboard at the start? There is aLways the L missing in "always" in the first texts. Or is it intentional, because other word do have L's in them ...

2. I miss a sandbox tag - and yes it is not a sandbox but a stat grinder (as far as I can see in this version) - I am not a big fan of stat grinders.

3. There should be a sound settings - its annoying that videos have sound and its on max. every time.

4. Not much content - yeah the sex scene is extensive, but I prefer more story over so much clicking during sex scenes. Different "styles" how the scene plays out is fine, but I dont need to set every short bit by myself.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

Ok - had a look.

1. Was the L key broken on the keyboard at the start? There is aLways the L missing in "always" in the first texts. Or is it intentional, because other word do have L's in them ...

2. I miss a sandbox tag - and yes it is not a sandbox but a stat grinder (as far as I can see in this version) - I am not a big fan of stat grinders.

3. There should be a sound settings - its annoying that videos have sound and its on max. every time.

4. Not much content - yeah the sex scene is extensive, but I prefer more story over so much clicking during sex scenes. Different "styles" how the scene plays out is fine, but I dont need to set every short bit by myself.

Thanks for the feedback. Kinda passive agressive hahaha, but apreciated.
Answering you:
1. My bad. As I said, I'm not a native english speaker. I'll be fixing the typos.

2. I don't like stat grinders myself. But the bad thing about these type of games is that some stats must be achieved for certain events to be activated which isn't the case in Aphrodisia. I see it developing more to be like "College Daze", an amazing game that also have a lot of stats without being grindy.

3. I'll have look on that.

4. Well, it IS a first release. I actually already have more content being worked on, but I chose to realease a first bit to have some feedback. The story will be a main focus on this game, since it's not made to be just a "sex simulator".

 

[Trasher2018]

Thanks for the feedback. Kinda passive agressive hahaha, but apreciated.
Answering you:
1. My bad. As I said, I'm not a native english speaker. I'll be fixing the typos.

2. I don't like stat grinders myself. But the bad thing about these type of games is that some stats must be achieved for certain events to be activated which isn't the case in Aphrodisia. I see it developing more to be like "College Daze", an amazing game t

Passive aggressive? ... naaa ... I am just german

1. It was just strange that every "always" missed the L ^^

2. Ok - that sounds promising. CD is a really nice game

Good luck.

 

[horkuss]

Another feedback:

1. Some of the gifs autoplay, some don't. I don't have that problem in other html games.
2. You have always written weird, as wierd or wierdness
3. I wouldn't release this game with only 1 chapter as a major release (1.x) as it suggest a rather complete game. I would start with 0.1.X (every minor release for a new chapter maybe).
4. I would try to reduce the filesize for the full release. There is half an hour of playtime with over one gigabyte of data already.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

Another feedback:

1. Some of the gifs autoplay, some don't. I don't have that problem in other html games.
2. You have always written weird, as wierd or wierdness
3. I wouldn't release this game with only 1 chapter as a major release (1.x) as it suggest a rather complete game. I would start with 0.1.X (every minor release for a new chapter maybe).
4. I would try to reduce the filesize for the full release. There is half an hour of playtime with over one gigabyte of data already.

Thanks for the feedback.

1. I did this on pourpose. My logic was that a video will not autoplay if comes "unannounced", but will aLways autoplay if the player knows that there will be a video in the next passage. I'm still thinking if i'll change that since no one had a complain.
2. I'll fix that.
3. I'll fix that too.
4. I'll also fix that. On this first release I didn't cared much about it since I just wanted the feedback to know if i'll keep working on new releases.

 

[gutihaz_14]

Name of megan model?

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

The developpers notes and the samples made me come. I don't know what to think about the game yet.

The worldbuilding is very limited but enough for what is happening.
The characters are few and different.
The story is interesting but confusing at the end.
The photos and gifs are well chosen.

The game has already meaningful choices which is great.
I'm less sure about the mechanisms. It's difficult to understand how it works at first. I was like "cool he added color bars". And it took me some time to realize their meaning. Plus, even after knowing, I just continued until I run out of stamina and lost, though I made her cum twice (yeah, I was more focused on pleasing her).

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If we "Look for a job in the industry", it takes the entire day and you can't train but if you start with the pushs up, you can do everything. You can watch porn infinitely. It should at least move the time forward.

I know you're not a native english speaker but there are several spelling errors. Be careful, there are people really sensitive to this.

Good continuation.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

Hello.

The developpers notes and the samples made me come. I don't know what to think about the game yet.

The worldbuilding is very limited but enough for what is happening.
The characters are few and different.
The story is interesting but confusing at the end.
The photos and gifs are well chosen.

The game has already meaningful choices which is great.
I'm less sure about the mechanisms. It's difficult to understand how it works at first. I was like "cool he added color bars". And it took me some time to realize their meaning. Plus, even after knowing, I just continued until I run out of stamina and lost, though I made her cum twice (yeah, I was more focused on pleasing her).

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If we "Look for a job in the industry", it takes the entire day and you can't train but if you start with the pushs up, you can do everything. You can watch porn infinitely. It should at least move the time forward.

I know you're not a native english speaker but there are several spelling errors. Be careful, there are people really sensitive to this.

Good continuation.

Thanks for the feedback man. Many thanks for the compliments.
About the things you pointed out:
I think the bars might be a little overwhelming at first but with time people will get used to it. It is meant to be a complex system.
The story is supposed to be confusing at the end hahaha. It's script hook. It will make sense later.
The time passing when you do an action really has to be sorted out, in future releases I'll be prioritizing choices that not just progress in time but keep the player from choosing more than one option. (doing push ups feels a little grindy)
I think that with the more I write, the better I'll be on avoiding typos. That will come naturally.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

Name of megan model?

That's Megan Martinez, fap with moderation bro.

 

[Dr.Wolfman]

I never knew how sensitive people would be to this kind of content. I won't put any tags just because of this one scene. It is a one time thing, just for the sake of story development. There is no actual content on the topic of NTR and I don't plan on putting it on future releases.
Also, what do you mean by evil protagonist?