Giving this a shot now, just going to note some typos.
Just from the intro:
- "You're not that ugly but also not hansome-" Should be handsome
- "She's got an amazing figure for a 46 years old woman and although she's not the brigthest person in the world-" Should be brightest, and I feel like "46 year old woman" flows better without the "S."
- "This is mandy, you don't know her very well." Need to capitalise her name.
- "You interactions consists of being annoying to eachother at the same time that-" Needs to be "Your," and a missing space between "each" and "other."
- "Your find it unberable." Should be "You find it unbearable."
- "-how the fuck did this happened???" Drop the "ed" to make it "happen?"
- "You give it a little wigle-" Should be two "G's" for wiggle.
- "you understand what the voice is saiyng-" Should be "saying."
- "praiyed every day for years" Should be "prayed."
- "I live since ancient Greece, had many names and manifested myself in a lot of men to this day. always men who were going to keep being nobodies." Should be "I have lived," although given it's a sentient magic cock, "I have existed" would make more sense. Also need to capitalise the "A" in "always."
- "No, I did not chose you-" Should be "choose."
- "I still can't believe this happend." Should be "happened."
- "You make some coffe and still have time-" Should be "coffee."
Another note, when you get the opportunity to give the homeless man money, choosing to give him either $5 or $10 both lead to giving him $5 anyway.