Yeah I mean the writing and setup are not the best, it's true that amidts the fall and total collapse of human civilization crossing that distance is almost a death sentence then crossing the damn distance once you're in the US and mostly by foot I assume because highways would be blocked and most roads unusable (well I mean you're kinda protected by plot armor since there are no other humans but that makes it even more difficult to do since you need other people to do civilization-level stuff like transport & logistics).
I feel he focused on the first few steps with the new personality test thing but that intro part was forgotten or left there as some sort of "mild lore" so you weren't dropped into the game with no knowledge, yet what the veteran dude up there said makes absolute sense, good thing is this dev actually listens to us so yeah maybe he knows shit about actual military stuff, I know I know shit and I would write something similar... yet again this guy is programming and coding can't expect the early lore to be Hollywood script writer level.
So yeah maybe give us some choices like "you were a surgeon" and you were trapped during this early chaos in a hospital, or "you had a past life of crime" and stuff like that...
Being closer to Jessica's residence also explains why you find her alive, the time to travel in the case of apocalypse from Okinawa to wherever in the US I assume she'd be dead by inanition long before you found her.
So yeah maybe next step is to add some content to calm the masses, then rework the entire background of the MC.

I feel he focused on the first few steps with the new personality test thing but that intro part was forgotten or left there as some sort of "mild lore" so you weren't dropped into the game with no knowledge, yet what the veteran dude up there said makes absolute sense, good thing is this dev actually listens to us so yeah maybe he knows shit about actual military stuff, I know I know shit and I would write something similar... yet again this guy is programming and coding can't expect the early lore to be Hollywood script writer level.
So yeah maybe give us some choices like "you were a surgeon" and you were trapped during this early chaos in a hospital, or "you had a past life of crime" and stuff like that...
Being closer to Jessica's residence also explains why you find her alive, the time to travel in the case of apocalypse from Okinawa to wherever in the US I assume she'd be dead by inanition long before you found her.
So yeah maybe next step is to add some content to calm the masses, then rework the entire background of the MC.
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