- Sep 30, 2017
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Have played the latest version, and have some thoughts on this VN's development.
One, for the most part, it delivers. It drips with sex and gets the point across. Your visual storytelling is a strength.
The story is serviceable, but is marred by problems with grammar and spelling. Like I say to many devs, this can be fixed in post production.
I am however left wondering when we'll actually get some agency in choice and impacting the direction of the narrative. As it is, player choice has been sorely limited and has no effect on the story. We have been effectively experiencing a kinetic novel, and you might consider rebranding it as such.
This is not a bad thing, as the story content has been great thus far.
Keep up the great work.
One, for the most part, it delivers. It drips with sex and gets the point across. Your visual storytelling is a strength.
The story is serviceable, but is marred by problems with grammar and spelling. Like I say to many devs, this can be fixed in post production.
I am however left wondering when we'll actually get some agency in choice and impacting the direction of the narrative. As it is, player choice has been sorely limited and has no effect on the story. We have been effectively experiencing a kinetic novel, and you might consider rebranding it as such.
This is not a bad thing, as the story content has been great thus far.
Keep up the great work.
- Nov 20, 2017
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- Feb 18, 2018
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The other half of the monthly CG I posted on my patron. Posted here for obvious reasons.
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- Jan 28, 2022
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It's impossible in real life, but since there's magic in the game it may happen. I wonder what the baby would look like
- Feb 18, 2018
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Can't say I was planning on it exactly but pregnancy in general was planned so I won't make a hard no, but it is a soft no for the time being. But it won't be a thing either way for a while so I'll revisit it then. If there is interest I will probably do a poll on Pantreon and see what people's feelings are then.
You can't say no !.... just kidding, of course.
But since in the dog event the MC was wondering if there was some spells to make her sister pregnant from her dog, and since she has ordered her sister to see the dog as her new boyfriend, I was assuming that this thing was planned. I do hope, at least, that the girl will indeed obey to the orders and fall in love with the dog, seeing him as her true boyfriend/husband.
Wow, just wow, just played through this and to be honest I did fast click through a bit of it as the lesbian sex scenes just get a bit samey, but love the way she gets her sister to let the dog fuck her, hope the MC gets a bit of beasty love as well.
- May 10, 2017
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- Feb 18, 2018
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- May 10, 2017
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Hello! Any idea when a new update will come out for Ariana's perverted diary?
- Feb 18, 2018
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Sorry been out of state for few weeks. I don't have an eta at this time as I am working mostly on the main project learning how to do some stuff and things have just been really busy for me these past few months at my big boy job. I do hope that starting next week things will calm down a little and I will have more time to focus on this game.
- Oct 12, 2021
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That's cool just take your time, but let me be that one clown that says - focus more on the futa/fem route and just calm down about the whole bestiality thingy....
Sure get that route going, but it shouldn't be the focus ( cause let's be real the lesbian route will go into the futa route aswell as you already stated early on and focus on Futa).
So in the end of the day, the main story line is a about MC getting that futa spell trying to claim all the girls (Don't know how the besty thingy can play into that, but whatever).
Anyway, what i want to say is work into that main path instead of keeping subpaths alive for the sake of it !
And yeah i know i have no say how you as a storyteller should shape your own story, but i'll just want to say it's easier to focus on a main route, which gives you the option to release updates more often...
But whatever, still love the game and the MC so yeah you go Girl/Dude !
That's cool just take your time, but let me be that one clown that says - focus more on the futa/fem route and just calm down about the whole bestiality thingy....
Sure get that route going, but it shouldn't be the focus ( cause let's be real the lesbian route will go into the futa route aswell as you already stated early on and focus on Futa).
So in the end of the day, the main story line is a about MC getting that futa spell trying to claim all the girls (Don't know how the besty thingy can play into that, but whatever).
Anyway, what i want to say is work into that main path instead of keeping subpaths alive for the sake of it !
And yeah i know i have no say how you as a storyteller should shape your own story, but i'll just want to say it's easier to focus on a main route, which gives you the option to release updates more often...
But whatever, still love the game and the MC so yeah you go Girl/Dude !
Man. Don't be the kind of person who thinks speaking for everyone. Because you love futa and don't like bestiality doesn't mean that everyone thinks like you. Your words are not the law.