I've been trying out this version of the game you made, and to be honest, it's an improvement in every aspect. Even beyond the spell checks, the additional detail you added to the events make them better than before. The scene (or scenes, rather) where you catch Cream with the vibrator is exquisite, and I love the added descriptions to stuff like anal and peeping on her while she's changing in her room.
I'm excited to hear about the expansion of some characters like Tails and Marine in the game. Tails because it'd be interesting to see him "fool around" with Cream, and Marine because she's the only other loli in this game. I was hopeful for something new in the scene with her, like maybe Cream watching Sonic plow Marine and getting jealous or even joining in for a threesome, but I'm glad to hear that they'll be expanded on later.
I also enjoyed new stuff you added like searching Cream's room and spanking her, though I was kind of surprised that the spanking didn't get naughtier the more you do it. I was caught off guard by the perspective switch, but it was a unique situation that made Cream more involved, so I didn't mind it too much. I found the changes you made to Cream interesting as well; she's more outgoing and sassy than she was in the original game, which makes for some interesting back and forth.
While you said that you wanted to remove the "violent" aspects of the game, I'm glad to see that some stuff was kept, like the "special ice cream". I'm also glad that stuff like Knuckles joining in for a brutal threesome was maintained. Are you thinking of expanding it in some way, like adding a more descriptive scene?
Sorry for the word vomit, but this is the best version of this game that I've played, and it's incredible that you've taken the time to add so much to it already. I can't wait to see what else you add in future versions as the game becomes more complete.
