VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bad Company [v1.6] [Lennier]

[Carpe Stultus]

Does this still have the green screen issue in the bedroom?

No there is no green screen anymore.

Overall a really nice game with a decent story, its a bit sad that Lennier doesn't have the time to release updates faster, but it is how it is. I like it even if the english needs some polishing.

 

[Lennier]

Is the cute little nerdy girl gonna be our Lucius Fox?

Yes

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Yes

That's hot.

 

[Mormont]

Well after playing that update I hope Liza has listened to the MC and doesn't go back to that douche can't take him seriously after he called us a little turd good update overall but I wonder who this woman is that is helping the MC.

 

[ontach]

That's hot.

You've lost me - which Lucius Fox are we talking about? Picture appreciated.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

You've lost me - which Lucius Fox are we talking about? Picture appreciated.

The og Lucius Fox not the trash one from the new tv show lol

 

[mrme]

I'd forgotten what game this was, until I saw the banana dick

 

[krakos9]

feels like a xxx version of Largo Winch, the french comic about a corporate heir trying to find the killers of his father. The X was nice, but the story took me further than what i could imagine in that type of game. Well done Dev , well done.

 

[crewfalcons]

Lennier

Love the game so far

One note.. you might want to look into some sort of compression for your images (noticed that most of them were 3MB to 5MB a pic). That's not a huge deal now when your game has 300+ or so images/renders....

Haha however... Over time when you've got 1000-2000+ images it's going to add up a bit

 

[JonSnowKnows]

What's with the android download? An empty rar folder.

 

[Lennier]

Lennier

Love the game so far

One note.. you might want to look into some sort of compression for your images (noticed that most of them were 3MB to 5MB a pic). That's not a huge deal now when your game has 300+ or so images/renders....

Haha however... Over time when you've got 1000-2000+ images it's going to add up a bit

The compress version is there on the front page.

 

[Lennier]

What's with the android download? An empty rar folder.

I just tested the Mega link. got all 4 APK file after I unrar. (Though I'm not sure if they work since I don't use Andriod myself.)
If you still having issues, let me know what version you need. I'll upload the single file. Also if anybody else have the same issue please do let me know.

 

[crewfalcons]

The compress version is there on the front page.

Yeah... Got that.....

Just saying in general for future updates (not a "compressed" version but just in general -- for example if your game at some point has over 2000 images at 3MB a picture that's going to be roughly 6GB on just images).

I don't care about overall game size (some do), so was just offering advice/recommendation.

 

[ontach]

I'd forgotten what game this was, until I saw the banana dick

It looks like a dog's tail - I almost expect it to wag.

 

[JonSnowKnows]

I just tested the Mega link. got all 4 APK file after I unrar. (Though I'm not sure if they work since I don't use Andriod myself.)
If you still having issues, let me know what version you need. I'll upload the single file. Also if anybody else have the same issue please do let me know.

Got it to work. No idea what happened the first time. Maybe network issues on my end. Thanks

 

[Walter Victor]

This is a very good game, and interesting to play.

But, sooo many errors. For instance, for almost an entire scene (where Raika visits the MC at his home), Raika is referred to as Rachel, because the wrong definition is used for the conversations. Between that and the constant switching of tense from past to present, in sentence after sentence, and the improper use of verbs [n "Raika quietly walk up and standing next to you with her phone out recording." or n "[e] turn toward the room where the sound coming from and open the door."], and the neglect of possessives in nouns [e "It wasn’t like that he a student. He gave me a ride home that all."], it becomes almost painful to read.

Not painful enough to stop playing, or to not look forward to the next release. Just painful enough to bitch about it.

 

[Lennier]

This is a very good game, and interesting to play.

But, sooo many errors. For instance, for almost an entire scene (where Raika visits the MC at his home), Raika is referred to as Rachel, because the wrong definition is used for the conversations. Between that and the constant switching of tense from past to present, in sentence after sentence, and the improper use of verbs [n "Raika quietly walk up and standing next to you with her phone out recording." or n "[e] turn toward the room where the sound coming from and open the door."], and the neglect of possessives in nouns [e "It wasn’t like that he a student. He gave me a ride home that all."], it becomes almost painful to read.

Not painful enough to stop playing, or to not look forward to the next release. Just painful enough to bitch about it.

LOL. If I can't take criticism. I wouldn't make VN. If there's a bug/mistake feel free to point them out. I'm still learning. I can't fix the mistake and learn from it. If I don't know I made them. As long as you give the VN a fair shot I have no problem with people bitch about legit stuff.

Has there been another instance where I use the wrong definition for a character? I already fix that scene that you point out. Any other bug I might have miss feels free to point them out.

About my English tho. The best I can do for now is to break the script down into scenes and post them up here. If somebody has the time to poof read it. You'll have my gratitude. Outside of that, I all can do is try my best to proofread it myself with happy thoughts and good intentions. That is until I could find or afford a pro proofreader.

 

[Lucifer_Morningstar]

Made the Rachael-Raika correction. Made corrections to the script content of events of the new version.

 

[ThunderRob]

maybe the changelog should be updated to say there is a whole new chapter of content with ginger-boinking included...ya know..so more folks will not just go(like i had) "oh..another lame bugfix after so much time" so ya..update that...say
New Chapter added
explicit content
story progression
ginger boink

 

[Lennier]

maybe the changelog should be updated to say there is a whole new chapter of content with ginger-boinking included...ya know..so more folks will not just go(like i had) "oh..another lame bugfix after so much time" so ya..update that...say
New Chapter added
explicit content
story progression
ginger boink

Expect explicit content on every update dude. Even if it a short story progression there always time for a quicky...