VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Part 2 NTR Update] [The Typist]

[Rayne]

I know. It's just a dumb idea. I think he should reconsider. I'm invested in this game. I won't be invested in his next endeavor considering how this game has gone.

I understand you, I paid for some time until I realized that the game was moving in an unclear direction. But yes, with such an attitude he can lose some patrons, but there will still be those who will support him.

 

[Eleanorduval]

If he gonna focus on only one path every time, he releases a part of the updates people will be feed up and impatient.He should work on both paths at same time.

 

[Rake Tyler]

I hope that when the update of the path of love comes, there will be that scene with Gwen, the one that happened on the protagonist's path with her.

 

[onithegamer1]

Just an observation on the screenshots recently. Paul used to have a full head of hair. Is it explained why he's buzzed it off in the new update?

 

[zephryz]

im sorry. but why i download and play but nothing happen? it the same last version before?

 

[Nurikabe]

It seems there is a lot of love for Zoey. Like some of you said, once Zoey starts going for other men, I consider her a friend, and I don't care what she does. Even more so, once Claire starts cheating and lying, she is dead to me. I enjoy NTR and NTS, but all without cheating and lying. Nothing wrong with that, though. Just not my thing with Claire.

I am not interested in having the MC fall in love with Zoey only to be cuckolded by her, too. And on that love path, it would be nice to have a faithful Zoey as an option. However, adding more paths is probably not going to help the workload.

The Typist has written previous versions with extreme NTR and cheating. They are just fine, but I hope that the whole story does not devolve into the NTR cheating, "Claire is a pornstar slut." I don't think that is going to happen with this story.


For those who were hoping to avoid NTR, just don't go down that path. The love path does not include cheating or sharing.

 

[longjohngold]

What choices set the Claire_clothing_3 variable? I noticed a different scene at the club where she fucks some dude and comes back and jerks the MC off while telling him about it, rather than her blowing the couple dudes in the toilet with it set... but not sure what defines it. She's a lot meaner in that scene, but I've tried picking up the dominant points for her and that doesn't seem to be it. Both variations are missing from the gallery (like all the new stuff) but I don't think are new this update.

 

[TonyMurray]

What choices set the Claire_clothing_3 variable? I noticed a different scene at the club where she fucks some dude and comes back and jerks the MC off while telling him about it, rather than her blowing the couple dudes in the toilet with it set... but not sure what defines it. She's a lot meaner in that scene, but I've tried picking up the dominant points for her and that doesn't seem to be it. Both variations are missing from the gallery (like all the new stuff) but I don't think are new this update.

I think that might be the one dependent on Claire closing the laptop instead of watching the Gwen sex scene. If she closes the laptop and doesn't watch, she fucks at the club and comes home leaking, and she wears a more see-through top for it. If she watches the stream, she wears the white top and does the blowjob/s instead.

 

[longjohngold]

I think that might be the one dependent on Claire closing the laptop instead of watching the Gwen sex scene. If she closes the laptop and doesn't watch, she fucks at the club and comes home leaking, and she wears a more see-through top for it. If she watches the stream, she wears the white top and does the blowjob/s instead.

Ah okay, weird you can only get there then if the male MC fucks Gwen, rather than the black friend... as that's the only way she'd be watching... but then the scene difference is more kinda netorare vs more netorase.

 

[HBKTheIcon69]

First off, I want to thank any one of you who decides to try out my game. It's my first time rendering out images and doing slight post-work in photoshop, so I understand my renders aren't the greatest, but if enough people want to see me go through with more chapters, i'll be more than happy to abide. This is also my first time working in renpy, so if you encounter any bugs or odd behavior, please let me know.
Fair warning, I've noticed a fair amount of people are into the whole girlfriend/wife sharing scene, as am I. So this game will revolve around that idea somewhat, along with a few others. Though in the future I plan to have choices that seriously effect the gameplay... Again, thank you for your time. - The Typist

Great game so far I just got into it as in one area for this thread it had the lesbian tag and I was curious on it being valid for the game at all...as that's really my thing as I feel it would be for others.

 

[Maxus_mudo]

I don't think I even like her, let alone love her. The other girls, especially Zoey are just so much further up my street. I'm also not sure what this NTR means. In the real world it means that Claire is eventually going to go off with another man permanently, but I get the feeling that here it just means a bit of swinging. Either way it's ruined by the fact that I'd happily tell her to fk off if I could get with Zoey. And wtf is going on with Gwen? He acted like a faggot and stopped having fun, in the real world it would be the girl telling the man to stop. No normal man would just stop unless asked, because that would imply, he really wasn't having fun and that's not only incredibly insulting to the woman but begs the question of how he even managed to get a hard on ... so unless his specific fetish is making Claire a cuckqueen, which doesn't seem likely due to his limp wristed nature ....

Though perhaps the most jarring image of this update is seeing the man naked in the toilet with Claire. No mentally stable individual in the history of the world has ever gotten naked in a bathroom stall, it's just not a clever idea, and we have zips for easy access to the equipment. So, unless he's got a micro penis and bulky jeans, why?

Not going to lie but I hoped that Paul would have accidentally strangled Claire. As at least that would have been a surprise, rather than just more of the same.

The Claire model could also have been tweaked from the presets, as it just seems lazy to use out of the box settings, especially when the same model has been used in other games.

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Totally agree, just wanted to say that the only thing Claire lost total control over was her bowels.

 

[TonyMurray]

Great game so far I just got into it as in one area for this thread it had the lesbian tag and I was curious on it being valid for the game at all...as that's really my thing as I feel it would be for others.

There is lesbian content, yes. I could be wrong, but for the moment at least, I think you can only get to it by choosing the early option that prevents any future NTR content.

 

[Temper Six]

Anyone have an idea what model(s) were used for Zoey? She reminds me of Leia Gotti who I really enjoy.

 

[Oliver Wendell Homely]

Looks like a lot of you guys are unhappy with how this game is progressing, but I gotta say that I think this is one of the hottest NTR/sharing titles I've ever come across. I realize everyone likes something a bit different, and strictly speaking there isn't much real NTR yet, but the sharing/swinging content so far is wild. Can't wait to see how bringing Zoey over to Paul will turn out.

 

[LoveWhores]

I just decide to try this one and it looks good and all but so far there isn't any cheating - all of the NTR so far is only a different type of sharing - watching female MC kiss another guy after her sister kissed you the previous night because of her,swinging partners first with Zoey and Damien and later with the Marie and Paul,sharing pictures of female MC giving blowjobs at the club after having permission from you to do such things,even when the female MC leave the bed and go back to Damien to fuck him again after that instead lying and trying to hide it from her boyfriend she did tell him the truth which is not cheating. I hope in future there will be a lot of cheating girlfriend path because i really wanna make her cheat behind hers boyfriend back without him knowing it while he is staying faithful to her and may be after a very long time of cheating when he finally finds out about it there to have a option either to stay with her and become a cuck or either to break up with her and have Zoey,Oivia or someone else as his new girlfriend and continue that way to play both characters.

I really didn't like the change of the female MC hair style - she was having a better hair style and color before Zoey help her change it - having some part of her hair shaved it's a bit of turn off and that orange color is really bad,her darker red one was much better if she needs to be redhaired - may be Zoey only pretended to try help her with new hair style but she actually did that on purpose hoping that way she will finally get more attention instead of her sister,especially by her boyfriend,after all there is a choice after the change "focus on Zoey" or "focus on your girlfriend" (and since i didn't like that new hair style i choose focus on Zoey) - may be at some point she will have another change of hair style or color or both and let's hope this time will be able to choose at least the color,but if we can choose the hair style it will be even better.

 

[Turret]

Anyone have an idea what model(s) were used for Zoey? She reminds me of Leia Gotti who I really enjoy.

Like Claire, Zoey is a highly modified model. Do not know the name, might be Maud, but it is one from Mousso as base.

 

[Suppaliliuma]

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Another fantastic example of why non-animators should really save themselves the trouble and just NOT try to animate anything, but most especially people. It would do us all a world of favor, and it would take less time and effort on their part. Win-win really.

For starters, she's made out of cartilage. Just because the 3D modeling/rendering program lets you bend humans like this doesn't mean that it's not horribly off-putting to see people bent so far it makes pretzels yell out that you've gone too far.

For second, this is an impossible to maintain position; because it ignores gravity. He's bent so far over that he would either need to to have one leg/foot far out in front, or both his arms otherwise stretched back, to have any hope of maintaining balance himself and not immediately faceplanting the carpet. Trying to hold up a whole other person like this is physically impossible, not because of weight or strength, but because of balance. Unless his feet are literally bolted to the ground and he has super-hero abdominal muscles, they're not staying upright for more than a second. The funny thing is, I've seen people pull this move off in actual porn. When real people do it in reality, the person doing the lifting is leaning backwards for a reason; because you cannot cheat gravity in real life. That also means that I know for a fact real-life reference materials (i.e. porn) exists for this, and they couldn't be assed to look it up to see how this pose actually works; which is a glaring sign of laziness and ineptitude.

For third, the animation is shite. You kinda need to see it in motion to really appreciate how fucking bad it is. The dude's shoulders are frozen in space, and everything else revolves around them. Literally, his shoulders don't move, but his hips hinge back and forth from them, as if they're not doing anything to support his weight. Doubly so the legs, that are again, impossible to hold both of them up unless they're bolted to the floor as they're flapping around more than his torso. Again, none of this makes any sense. It stems from a person with zero understanding or appreciation of human anatomy, locomotion, or kinematics, trying to animating people fucking with as little effort put into it as possible. This person doesn't understand how people move, or support their body weight as they move, and their absolute ignorance is abundantly clear; and thus the end result is complete shite.

If you aren't willing to hire a trained animator or put in the work to learn how to actually animate? JUST DON'T!

indeed!
it would only make some sense if the girl's feet was leaning a wall. still would require a superb physic. with the way it is, it looks impossible. even if she is only 85 Lbs

 

[Joshy92]

Looks like a lot of you guys are unhappy with how this game is progressing, but I gotta say that I think this is one of the hottest NTR/sharing titles I've ever come across. I realize everyone likes something a bit different, and strictly speaking there isn't much real NTR yet, but the sharing/swinging content so far is wild. Can't wait to see how bringing Zoey over to Paul will turn out.

For me, it was ruined by forced choices. I only wanted to watch Claire, and I hate chocking stuff.

It used to have a decent amount of options, but it keeps getting less and less.

 

[HBKTheIcon69]

There is lesbian content, yes. I could be wrong, but for the moment at least, I think you can only get to it by choosing the early option that prevents any future NTR content.

You mean the part of the dream or prior to the dream of Claire not staring at the black guy?

 

[Temper Six]

Looks like a lot of you guys are unhappy with how this game is progressing, but I gotta say that I think this is one of the hottest NTR/sharing titles I've ever come across. I realize everyone likes something a bit different, and strictly speaking there isn't much real NTR yet, but the sharing/swinging content so far is wild. Can't wait to see how bringing Zoey over to Paul will turn out.

I absolutely agree. I particularly like the Zoey sharing scenes.