- Jun 15, 2022
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I've been thinking about one major plot slip if you're on Bella's path. If you have both Jill's and Bella's paths active at the same time, then it's looks like Bella doesn't care. She just asks "what is your relationship with Jill?" and "you should talk to her." And that's it. It seems that she does not care about her friend and that she will regard this as a betrayal. But throughout the story, we are shown how important Jill is to her, how she tries to protect her, but when Bella starts dating Tremolo, it seems to become unimportant.
It is not clear if the DPC did this on purpose to show that Bella is not so highly moral and is ready to take the guy away from her best friend, or just a plot flaw. In my opinion, it would be wise to make a block on Bella's path in which she rejects MC if he started dating Jill.
Yes, I know that we get this scene with any plot confluence:
But the consequences if you've dated Jill before can be disastrous.
It is not clear if the DPC did this on purpose to show that Bella is not so highly moral and is ready to take the guy away from her best friend, or just a plot flaw. In my opinion, it would be wise to make a block on Bella's path in which she rejects MC if he started dating Jill.
Yes, I know that we get this scene with any plot confluence:
But the consequences if you've dated Jill before can be disastrous.