VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[88stanford88]

This is not a documentary it's a porn game based on the 80's and 90's comedy movies

Obviously (porno?) I've seen the best one, the masterpiece of that comedy: John Landis' "Animal House" and almost all the stupid imitations made in the 80s and 90s based on the unsurpassed AH but BeingDik is written today and comes with a lot more content than the comedy on which it is based.

Why not add something less stupid .. what I mean the comedy(s) you are talking about have a duration of just over an hour ... the stories were stupid and inconsistent .... here we have so many seasons that should cover the individual stories in detail of the characters .... ms writing a more interesting story based on those comedies adapting it to today's problems would be much better ... I think the game would become much more interesting rather than just being a nostalgic remake of a past that no longer existing

The story has not a center and the result is an inconsitent plot with characters with characters taken at random from
trush-movies a surprising dramatic twist is necassary for the sake of the story

Just my 2 cents

PS: the porno scenes are too short to consider this a real porno game... and Chaty that is the classic porno teacher was thrown out too fast.

 

[shazba]

Obviously (porno?) I've seen the best one, the masterpiece of that comedy: John Landis' "Animal House" and almost all the stupid imitations made in the 80s and 90s based on the unsurpassed AH but BeingDik is written today and comes with a lot more content than the comedy on which it is based.

Why not add something less stupid .. what I mean the comedy(s) you are talking about have a duration of just over an hour ... the stories were stupid and inconsistent .... here we have so many seasons that should cover the individual stories in detail of the characters .... ms writing a more interesting story based on those comedies adapting it to today's problems would be much better ... I think the game would become much more interesting rather than just being a nostalgic remake of a past that no longer existing

The story has not a center and the result is an inconsitent plot with characters with characters taken at random from
trush-movies a surprising dramatic twist is necassary for the sake of the story

Just my 2 cents

PS: the porno scenes are too short to consider this a real porno game... and Chaty that is the classic porno teacher was thrown out too fast.

The game definitely doesn't have a "center" as of yet. We've spent 8 episodes getting to know and fuck a bunch of girls, get involved in, and solve random problems, and basically just float around college.

Kinda like a real college experience, with perhaps a bit more fucking.

But I think the game does need a stronger thread to emerge now, something to drive the next season, if not the rest of the game.

 

[pranabray]

WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE GUYS??

 

[XV71]

where do I practice jills song a second time, I can only do it once

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

where do I practice jills song a second time, I can only do it once

So, if I remember the game well. The second practice is Episode 6, during free roam.
The third practice - Episode 8, the first free roam.
But it's best to click the guitar every time you free roam, so you never miss it.

 

[88stanford88]

Kinda like a real college experience, with perhaps a bit more fucking.

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

 

[ffive]

Excellent explanation. Thus...could most of the images be substituted for various, newly created, images of Madame including sex acts? Asking for a friend.

Yes.
Yes.
Absolutely.
Goodspeed.

 

[soprano31]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

do i have to keep repeating it here?
I've said it before,this is the last time I'll say it.

if you don't like it,stop complaining,and play another game,
or better yet,
leave altogether,and that goes for all complainers.

tel me one porn game that is realistic.
the word says it all"porn game",do you want to see sex and nudity,
play this kind of games,
if you want violence and blood,play those kind of games ,It's that simple.

this is a masterpiece in this kind of genre.

 

[shazba]

I agree with Shazba. It doesn't matter, but not because I don't like to criticize DPC and also not because of any NTR-related matter; it's so because: 1) I think it was a bad conception in the first place: Sage doesn't fit the dumb-blonde-bimbo stereotype, thus she and Chad doesn't fit together, and we're left with this "mystery"; 2) trying to solve it would in fact be a workaround... like a "patch", and it would have to be made in one of those expository pauses in the narrative, which are bad per se.

As we can learn from one of the best books in scriptwriting, Robert McKee's Story:


And exposition that doesn't blend into the action is bad because it's easy. It's way harder to be creative and show the information needed surreptitiously than to pause the story and do one of those prologues or interludes.

So, Sage & Chad relationship is bad because the audience can't reasonably and easily assume why it has happened. But trying to fix would be worst, because the missing fact doesn't cause confusion, and trying to fix it would make us endure another one of those bad expository pieces that aren't parsed out in the main plot action.

You totally dodged a bullet there. You may not know this, but if you agreed with felicemastronzo on this topic, you'd probably be banned!

But it's possible you did agree with felice, because the reason he's pushing his requirement for an explanation is because he believes their relationship doesn't make any sense. So you may not be out of the woods yet!

 

[myukimo]

Me making animations, gifs and translations and here people are killing each other day by day
Leave the NTR already that is a thing of the past, we are not in 2018 when it was fashionable
stealth bullet

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

You wrote that there is no plot in this game, I'm already losing count of how many times you did it. But at the same time, you wrote yesterday that Chad as Columbiner (the school shooter) and MC saving the college from him would be a great script. Three conclusions:
1. You either didn't understand anything about the characters of this game and their motivation, and perhaps you have not even played it. Because Chad isn't even close to being a villain.
2. I won't elaborate on what you're wrong about, but... Please don't become a writer. You will save the world if you don't.
3. I feel sorry for you, that your college life was boring.
That's all for me.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I agree with Shazba. It doesn't matter, but not because I don't like to criticize DPC and also not because of any NTR-related matter; it's so because: 1) I think it was a bad conception in the first place: Sage doesn't fit the dumb-blonde-bimbo stereotype, thus she and Chad doesn't fit together, and we're left with this "mystery"; 2) trying to solve it would in fact be a workaround... like a "patch", and it would have to be made in one of those expository pauses in the narrative, which are bad per se.

As we can learn from one of the best books in scriptwriting, Robert McKee's Story:


And exposition that doesn't blend into the action is bad because it's easy. It's way harder to be creative and show the information needed surreptitiously than to pause the story and do one of those prologues or interludes.

So, Sage & Chad relationship is bad because the audience can't reasonably and easily assume why it has happened. But trying to fix would be worst, because the missing fact doesn't cause confusion, and trying to fix it would make us endure another one of those bad expository pieces that aren't parsed out in the main plot action.

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

 

[Lovetities]

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

I guess it was about the situation and people. Most people are afraid of Jocks so no way they are going to flirt or try to fuck sage. Pretty sure some of the diks tried but from the following flashback sage was bat shit crazy about chad and that one of the reason despite chad cheating she didn't left him. If chad someone become straight and return to her, I think she will definitely start dating him again. Also, Sage is tame if Mc is not on her route. (Probably a closet freak)

 

[shazba]

I'm stunned now... Well.. Maybe I agreed and disagreed with you both at the same time... With Felice, that the relationship doesn't make sense; and, with you, that it doesn't matter. But do you really think it makes sense? Life... On the surface, it does... President of the hot girls' sorority pairs with the President of the athletic jocks. Nothing surprising here... But do you think Sage, as she was developed, fits that role?

Impossible to make matters worse for a sexually daring girl who waits for months if not years for a boy who is clearly not interested in her in any way. Who begs until the last moment for tenderness from him and remains heartbroken by the end of this sterile relationship, despite everything, despite an overt betrayal

Then I can agree that it is now too late, but the damage is there for all to see.

If you see Sage back in the flashback, a few years back, she comes across a lot more naïve, definitely the Sage we know now is more mature (in some ways).

But I believe she would have been a loyal girlfriend. She was not actually looking for a fuckbuddy, and only fell into the mc's arms after she was convinced of Chad's unfaithfulness and enough was enough. For how long she put up with Chad's BS we don't know, but she reached her breaking point at the time the mc came into her life.

I don't really see what's so hard to accept.

 

[blackwolf12]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

that is what happens in real life....chad gets all the girls.....sub 5 males masturbate to porn and simp for female streamers......its brutal but that is life for you buddy boyo....lol

 

[88stanford88]

1. You either didn't understand anything about the characters of this game and their motivation, and perhaps you have not even played it. Because Chad isn't even close to being a villain.
2. I won't elaborate on what you're wrong about, but... Please don't become a writer. You will save the world if you don't.
3. I feel sorry for you, that your college life was boring.
That's all for me.

I was taking about the game...
why you talk about me?

.its brutal but that is life for you buddy boyo....lol

are you talking about me too?

 

[gg i]

guys is this game female protagonist?

 

[ffive]

guys is this game female protagonist?

Only in the Interlude which is a side-piece centered on one of the girls from the main story. The "main" game only has male protagonist.

 

[magaclaawe]

College is boring!
after 8 episode I realized that there is no story in this game and it is like a college... a place where I don't want back
and there is not that much fucking...
I think in some college there is a lot of more fucking... and some suicide...
actually there is a lot of violence in some college...

This game is just a boring vanilla story... where only the MC is able to fuck the girls nd teachers... this is unrealistic on my opinion.
No drama no realistic story line

Many of us want MMF threesomes, NTR and gang bangs but that will probably never happen.

 

[Don Sucio]

Many of us want MMF threesomes, NTR and gang bangs but that will probably never happen.

The NTR seems essential to me to feel immersion in the story and notice that the characters are alive, although I understand perfectly that there are people who do not want to see the female characters who seek to have relationships with others