A positive element is that I found that the LI was well managed in the episode.
Jill is true to herself, DPC avoided the mistake of turning her into a sex goddess after just one ride in the MC's bed. His way of managing their relationship, which becomes official, is fairly consistent with what we could expect from Jill.
There are also little reminders of problems in certain relationships. For example with Bella the difference between an adult woman and a young student, not to mention her status as a teacher. This made me a bit pessimistic/worried about the possibility of a lasting relationship (which is quite realistic).
I felt the same with M and J when the MC asks Josy for her wildest fantasy, and she replies that it would be to be able to live their relationship at 3 in broad daylight. The little sting of reality that hurts.
For Sage, her sexually liberated and enterprising side, and in my opinion completely in line with her character. However, the episode lacks a moment that makes them more of a couple than just a fuckbuddy. I don't know if the sex scene interrupted by the MC to ask his questions was made for that, but it failed.