VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

Hate is a Strong word and not True, i just completly Dislike her.
If i would Hate Jill, i would call Pink and ask him to include a nice Redhead who kills her ... AL Rules.

I loved Leah. It's too bad there was no real ending with her. If there had been both the other girls would've lived. But Jill and Bella aren't my thing. Neither of them are ugly, but for me there's too many red flags with Bella and Jill used to date Rusty. No, I'm not going to discuss my thoughts about that either as it's a can of worms I don't want to get into.

 

[Deleted member 6628651]

I mean...it's an orange Merc convertible vs. a silver BMW coupe, I don't see much difference outside of the color and the Merc being a convertible to be honest.

Hmm. You're right with Rusty's car, but I'm not so sure about Jill's. It looks like Porsche 911 Carrera to me. I mean BMW is kinda low for a Royce, eh?

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Money can't buy love, tho.

 

[felicemastronzo]

An MC pussy who just came from the countryside to the big city. This is actually a plot crutch again, because without it he wouldn't have ended up living in Maya's apartment.


It isn't. She was lucky to be accepted.


A rather emotional act, atypical of the cold-blooded Bella. Probably at that moment she was so excited that she forgot about everything.

Well as I understand it Derek was supposed to inform his sister of her father's arrivals and only once he made a slip because he was working at the mansion.
But on the other hand, it's not a valid problem anymore, considering Josy started living at the HOTs mansion.

all extremely weak excuses.
I am aware that alcuen choices are necessary to the plot (in the end all of those listed are) but to entrust the evolution of a story to unexplained comprtamenti is not a good idea

but there are 2 on which you completely missed the point.

Josy is later accepted at BR, and that leaves some doubt about her intelligence, but that is not why she runs away from home. i've only seen a teenager who runs away from home to go to school in those hyper dramatic movies where the family wants to avoid letting their children emancipate. with the father having to catch up with her by bringing her at least some clothes...

and also the issue of the key makes no sense. if the father wanted the key it is obviously so he can go there whenever he wants, why would he have to warn Derek? Maya only has to be careful of one thing: not to get caught by the father with Josy, any other situation is manageable, just see how the "dumb" MC manages to convince him that he is his daughter's roommate, but yet he risks everything so recklessly.

immediately afterwards even she pretends to have a single room (which normally should create even more doubts for the control freak Patrick)ù

there are very few dramatic moments that make any sense at all

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

good choice of car, but I prefer this one.

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I'd take a '71 Barracuda over that any day.

 

[Takkatakka]

Hmm. You're right with Rusty's car, but I'm not so sure about Jill's. It looks like Porsche 911 Carrera to me. I mean BMW is kinda low for a Royce, eh?

Looks to me like a BMW 6 series from a couple of years ago:



In the end DPC has to use what models are available for DAZ (or whatever he is using) and character-wise I don't think Jill would care for a super expensive car (not to mention the fact that the 6 series costs like 60+k new as well).

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Hmm. You're right with Rusty's car, but I'm not so sure about Jill's. It looks like Porsche 911 Carrera to me. I mean BMW is kinda low for a Royce, eh?



Money can't buy love, tho.

Look at the shape of the radiator and headlights, these are BMW M-series.
An unexpected car for Jill, not for her personalitycharacter, but we remember that she didn’t buy it.

 

[JJ1960]

I think the biggest red flag Isabella has is the axe she keeps in her garage.

The good news is there is also a fire extinguisher there so MC can save both Jill and Bella.

 

[ProxyGist]

Here's my five cents.
For a game of the caliber of ВAD or what DPC wants it to be, the characters in the game are too flat.
Hell, they don't even literally have hobbies, they're just regular puppets that walk and talk.
That's why Zoey is one of the best characters, because we know so much more about her than the others. Zoey loves rock music, skateboarding and surfing, loves to draw, and loves to take risks. Tends to get emotional and impulsive.
We don't know anything like that about other girls.
Bella - she likes yoga, drinking wine and reading books.
Jill - likes yoga and classical music, plays the piano.
Sage - likes whiskey, sex and parties.
Josy- likes strawberry daiquiris.
Maya - likes to watch movies.
Quinn - hates broccoli, likes to manipulate people, and hates making out with guys.
That's too little. None of them root for a sports team, none of them have speech impediments or write with their left hand, none of them have a bad habit that is cute or funny. None of them are into comic books or video games.
That's what annoys me the most. The characters are memorable, but they're too flat and superficial.

 

[hakuna-matata]

I loved Leah. It's too bad there was no real ending with her. If there had been both the other girls would've lived. But Jill and Bella aren't my thing. Neither of them are ugly, but for me there's too many red flags with Bella and Jill used to date Rusty. No, I'm not going to discuss my thoughts about that either as it's a can of worms I don't want to get into.

So... going on one date, an awful date where both parties don't see each other after is now considered "dating"?

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

So... going on one date, an awful date where both parties don't see each other after is now considered "dating"?

 

[Deleted member 5513179]

In honor of Halloween, here's Dany (or someone who looks a lot like her) being seduced by a vampire. Original art trademark & copyright Brad Guigar, from his webcomic Evil Inc.

 

[89898hh]

Extending branches why ? More work, longer dev time, 60fps animations why ? So many free roam events where they could've been avoided why ?

1 update a year is crazy doesn't look like its going to get any better when it comes to dev time

 

[Ray_D]

Extending branches why ? More work, longer dev time, 60fps animations why ? So many free roam events where they could've been avoided why ?

1 update a year is crazy doesn't look like its going to get any better when it comes to dev time

just wait, it will get worse, probably by the last chapter DPC will take 3 years developing it.

 

[hakuna-matata]

Extending branches why ? More work, longer dev time, 60fps animations why ? So many free roam events where they could've been avoided why ?

1 update a year is crazy doesn't look like its going to get any better when it comes to dev time

Everyone should have realized he was milking the moment he announced the interlude. We were all dying to play that interlude. I really wanted to know about her time hanging with those hepatitis infected crackheads. Zoey is cool and I expected her to come back at some point. It was super obvious. A game was not needed. A flashback explaining what happened could have done the job.


He makes more money if it takes a year or more.

How is it bait? I am being serious. You can't call two people dating if they only went on one date.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

just wait, it will get worse, probably by the last chapter DPC will take 3 years developing it.

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3 years?

 

[Pax Draconis]

Here's my five cents.
For a game of the caliber of ВAD or what DPC wants it to be, the characters in the game are too flat.
Hell, they don't even literally have hobbies, they're just regular puppets that walk and talk.
That's why Zoey is one of the best characters, because we know so much more about her than the others. Zoey loves rock music, skateboarding and surfing, loves to draw, and loves to take risks. Tends to get emotional and impulsive.
We don't know anything like that about other girls.
Bella - she likes yoga, drinking wine and reading books.
Jill - likes yoga and classical music, plays the piano.
Sage - likes whiskey, sex and parties.
Josy- likes strawberry daiquiris.
Maya - likes to watch movies.
Quinn - hates broccoli, likes to manipulate people, and hates making out with guys.
That's too little. None of them root for a sports team, none of them have speech impediments or write with their left hand, none of them have a bad habit that is cute or funny. None of them are into comic books or video games.
That's what annoys me the most. The characters are memorable, but they're too flat and superficial.

You're right but to be fair that's more characterization than most LIs in AVNs. Most characterization in other works is "blonde, brunette, redhead.", wants to bang MC.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

Everyone should have realized he was milking the moment he announced the interlude. We were all dying to play that interlude. I really wanted to know about her time hanging with those hepatitis infected crackheads. Zoey is cool and I expected her to come back at some point. It was super obvious. A game was not needed. A flashback explaining what happened could have done the job.


He makes more money if it takes a year or more.



How is it bait? I am being serious. You can't call two people dating if they only went on one date.

 

[Ray_D]

3 years?

DPC: Of course dear fan who don't pay my patreon, 200 fps animations, real time physics for the tits and ass of every main and secondary female character, dlc with the main girls story, more madame rose content, 2000 animations and 60000 render and much more. and you're going to enjoy it whether you like it or not. " I'm out of ideas so insert a DPC power trip monologue describing how he is the best thing that has happened to the AVN industry ".

 

[poser002]

Everyone should have realized he was milking the moment he announced the interlude. We were all dying to play that interlude. I really wanted to know about her time hanging with those hepatitis infected crackheads. Zoey is cool and I expected her to come back at some point. It was super obvious. A game was not needed. A flashback explaining what happened could have done the job.


He makes more money if it takes a year or more.



How is it bait? I am being serious. You can't call two people dating if they only went on one date.

Are you even paying for the game? Have you given them one penny?

Yes be nice if they slowed down some of the branching story lines and focused on a few of them and tied up a few to shorten some of the dev time on other updates. Be nice if they had a few more people working on the game to be working on future updates to start renders out a cycle a head to keep render time up as that is the biggest time snyc.

 

[JoeAngel]

so Far the MC did All hot stuff without bing a Dik yeah I mean Who Would use Girl in hard relationship it's Dik move I didn't make and yet sage asked the MC again With Clear mind and yes Time for The Red Fox, and who would Pick Girl Who Humiliate him Made him walk outside Nude Also offer Service =_= yeah .... no thanks as the MC Said No money for sex...yet he had Threesome with A Pure Heart cool right and also Another one with Mexico Asian Mix in the Party without having Queen as Pimp let's blam the Drink Okay And I hope to see Chance With Maya Soon no clue if it would rise or not But I told her Brother That I still like Her and to be Honest Maya & Josy both Are Simple Confused girls But in My opinion Maya Deserve more sympathy I mean Look at her, She didn't Make the Move to start with she had Simple Crash same as MC and when we look at it Josy know How Throw Bone But even when the MC didn't Bite She still Act Like You Did Too ..... Anyway My Fav is bella Simple She's the Perfect Women for the MC the Mother Figure that he Never Had yet More Than that and that what Makes her Perfect about The Classy Lady I am Not Interested I mean she Smooth Looking But Idk I made the Mc Jump on her when she Kissed him in Bella house But That far that I did and I didn't do the Dik move to The Snopy Boby Tybalt even his Name is Annoying to write and by the way if you search this name his is a Cousin of Juliet anyway I am here now to ask and Give my Feedback about Some of The characters
and About the question that I have, Can someone tell me WTF is This Supposed to mean And I know I can Look up the Answers in WT but I want to understand What this Supposed to mean it's Like the other Qustion -3-5 15 why don't u say 5x3 = what that would make me understand what it's need to be done there here What This first Row NOT second Raw HIN Third row G ,,, ? WHAT ?????