- Dec 12, 2017
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Yea and it's not about looking for flaws in the writing, most here have very reasonable expectations and we take the game for what it is, an adult novel.yeah the writing wasn't the top we all can agree (unless Dalli think too deep hell even DPC didn't think of friction Dalli think
he made lily undercover spy for burke but he give you something to read and it's fine he maybe right)
now for sage scene she clearly in my point of view was trying to help MC with his struggles because well he did help her and want to help him in a way with movie in HOT's house any kind of help would be good and also we all know words in HOT's house spread so fast so if they got caught Chad will know (we seen it in EP8 when she confront him about cheating he said he knew
so Yeah you know when a guy do some stupid shit to help you? you know that friend i guess some of us know
i have one too so yeah having dumb shit done to make you laugh or something is good way ( not wayy to dumb tho)
The stuff that makes no sense to begin with, like Maya's tuition or reading the diary 1 page per episode and ignoring the picture that comes with it, are prime examples where it's just too much. It's hard to justify it and yet it drags out and out and the very long development time sure doesn't help, because you get reminded of them again and again.
Overall DPC's writing is fun, easy to digest and it comes with good pacing, and that's good enough for me, but man some of those stories make you wanna rip out your hair.