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Interesting.What if this is already planned in the story and we just haven't found out about it yet?
We've forgotten a lot of what is written and suggests such a scenario. Neil had a major legal dispute in his past and the MC doesn't know what it was about. What the MC says to Isabella is also strange.
The martial arts training not only increased his self-confidence, but was also a good way to bond with his father Neil.
As much as I enjoy writer-bashing. I don't think this is a huge deal as a 'lacking' detail. As well, I don't really consider that as a something even I could criticize either. I just chalk that up simply to not really needing to explain the MC's entire life story with his dad starting from a set age. Saying it's from 12-15 is just an assumption. When in reality it would more likely be 1-15. Not counting the time Neil would have to work and someone sit the child (MC) during his infancy years. Probably Luis' wife would be my guess.The martial arts training not only increased his self-confidence, but was also a good way to bond with his father Neil. How can it be that the MC only bonded with his father at the age of 12-15?
Claiming the MC only bonded for 3 years with his dad is kinda weird. If we haven't heard anything about that part of the MC's life while up to 75% of the story being played so far, it would epically stupid of DPC to squeeze that in for a plot twist at this point of the game.
did I really need to go that deep?
No. But I'm baked at present.
My first thought would be he played during high-school, in (at the very least) Phys ed classes.But the MC also told Jill that he had already played tennis in the past and Jill lets us know that she wasn't playing against a beginner.