shazba jnr

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I am not convinced, certainly it is a great facilitation for DPC which otherwise would have already broken through the 2-year limit per episode.

for the rest I don't know, in the end it's just for Jill and to get her to participate in student activities to which it was enough to make her less “weird” so that she didn't need an excuse for being there.

the fact that they are all involved in solving Maya's problem, besides making them all look dumber, generated that terrible “all for Maya, Maya for all” scene.

I accept it, it serves, but I don't see it as having any particular merit.
Oh you misunderstand me, I mean it's a good setup for the next DnG game. :p

> Be me.
> Get a song featured in B.A.D. stuck in your head.
> Don't know the name of it.
> Scour youtube for an hour looking for it.
> Give up.
> Try again in-game the next day.
> Listen to EVERY SONG IN THE MENU.
> IT'S NOT THERE.
Or be me:

I actually had the playlist playing in the car a while back and my young daughter liked the music and looked it up... (yep, that happened...) :eek:

She was like, "Dad, that music you were listening to, it's totally from some x-rated game". And I was like, "Wow, what a surprise", and she was like, "Phew, I thought you might be playing it!". :whistle:
 

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Oh you misunderstand me, I mean it's a good setup for the next DnG game. :p



Or be me:

I actually had the playlist playing in the car a while back and my young daughter liked the music and looked it up... (yep, that happened...) :eek:

She was like, "Dad, that music you were listening to, it's totally from some x-rated game". And I was like, "Wow, what a surprise", and she was like, "Phew, I thought you might be playing it!". :whistle:
"Maybe that game creator just has the same taste in music as me! Hahaha... haaaaaa..."
 

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that Jill wants to go to her first party just on halloween is fine, that she wants to go even though she just dumped the host of that party, or was dumped by him, already is less fine.

But the problem of lack of empathy is fairly generalized in AVNs
I agree it's not the best decision go to the same party as Tremolo after the dumping, but her lack of social experience and age can explain her decision... The main problem is Bella, she is old enough to know it wasn't a good idea to go the party unless she was dating Tremolo (even then, it's questionable)
 

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I agree it's not the best decision go to the same party as Tremolo after the dumping, but her lack of social experience and age can explain her decision... The main problem is Bella, she is old enough to know it wasn't a good idea to go the party unless she was dating Tremolo (even then, it's questionable)
Actually, I think It makes more sense for her to enter for a few minutes for Jill, than to come the entire night and sleep in for the MC.

She gets recognized she can say she isn't busting them out, she is just drinking a beer with a friend and going on her way. Mummy Bella being caught is way more problematic, both personally and professionally, but we roll with it since its porn logic superseding realism.
 
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there are 6 chapters so we are expecting several random twists and turns with little meaning. so that scene cannot fall on deaf ears.


i don't have a problem with Jill's presence IN GENERAL. just that in the end all these ramifications lead to the same scenes, and that remains a flaw, not a huge one.

that Jill wants to go to her first party just on halloween is fine, that she wants to go even though she just dumped the host of that party, or was dumped by him, already is less fine.

But the problem of lack of empathy is fairly generalized in AVNs
Jill went for a couple reasons. One, is she had friends that were going; iirc Josie invited her even if MC didn't, Bianca and her other close friends were coming. Secondly, she was also there to help give Maya legal advice (the party was a way to introduce the two). Obviously, the party sours a bit for her if she's in a bitter note with the MC, and ESPECIALLY if she is resenting Bella a bit over dating him (Bella is Jill's best friend and was the one who actually gave her advice to get with him, which clearly failed cuz Bella hooked up with him instead)
 

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Actually, I think It makes more sense for her to enter for a few minutes for Jill, than to come the entire night and sleep in for the MC.

She gets recognized she can say she isn't busting them out, she is just drinking a beer with a friend and going on her way. Mummy Bella being caught is way more problematic, both personally and professionally, but we roll with it since its porn logic superseding realism.

It's just suspension of disbelief, don't think too much ;)
 

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I agree it's not the best decision go to the same party as Tremolo after the dumping, but her lack of social experience and age can explain her decision... The main problem is Bella, she is old enough to know it wasn't a good idea to go the party unless she was dating Tremolo (even then, it's questionable)
Actually, I think It makes more sense for her to enter for a few minutes for Jill, than to come the entire night and sleep in for the MC.

She gets recognized she can say she isn't busting them out, she is just drinking a beer with a friend and going on her way. Mummy Bella being caught is way more problematic, both personally and professionally, but we roll with it since its porn logic superseding realism.
I write this roughly once every two months: after Bella thought it was a good idea to stay over at MC's in the sixth chapter, nothing can pose a risk.

if anything, the issue is that on halloween she has no real reason to be there and Jill's request remains rather selfish (we're talking about Bella without a real halloween costume)
 

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Yea bella being at a diks party given what just happened to the red headed teacher earlier thanks to the diks is not the smartest thing in the world. That being said, it works for Bella who would seemingly do anything for Jill ( cept stay away from tremolo).
 

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Yea bella being at a diks party given what just happened to the red headed teacher earlier thanks to the diks is not the smartest thing in the world. That being said, it works for Bella who would seemingly do anything for Jill ( cept stay away from tremolo).
and is it so necessary for Bella to attend the party to keep Jill company? there is Bianca for that. there is her very good friend Josy :oops: . Does Jill so need the one person who has trouble showing up at a student party?

there is no emergency to justify it
 

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and is it so necessary for Bella to attend the party to keep Jill company? there is Bianca for that. there is her very good friend Josy :oops: . Does Jill so need the one person who has trouble showing up at a student party?

there is no emergency to justify it
I don't remember the setup exactly. What was, Bella being bored of grading and Jill asked her to pass by to see her costume?:unsure:
 

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I don't remember the setup exactly. What was, Bella being bored of grading and Jill asked her to pass by to see her costume?:unsure:
there are many versions of the dialogue pandering to the love situation. however Jill phones Bella and asks her if she wants to attend the party, but Bella says no, then Jill gets her to at least drop by to say hello outside the party.

then when Bella passes Jill insists, for no particular reason, and Bella eventually agrees
 
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Why do you think that the update could go to December? Is the new chapter going to be so long or are there development problems?
 
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