VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Crowangel]

yeah... that's not how this works.
the ending of acting lessons was as if i would write a crime thriller story and set up hints who could be the murderer. then through deduction it could only be one of two people, but at the very last page i introduce a talking dog who says he is an alien and that he killed the human by accident.
just because i wrote a story with compelling characters and had you hooked for the mystery, doesn't mean that my ending didn't made absolutely no sense.

that is not good writing.

doesn't matter that DPC had good writing in acting lessons right before the ending. the ending itself was badly written.
you don't have to like any character in the game to know that this was a badly written ending.

quite a lot of creators out there really cant stick the landing when it comes to endings.. Super Writer has been one of them Daniels K another who for some reason refuses to listen to critics when they compliment his work but he rushes his endings.. often doing the crappy if your on this girls route the story ends here choice.. if not play on till you get the girls ending you wanted leaving half a story unfinished most of the time.. Yes creating a narrative is tricky and you cant always please everyones desires for how a story will end but taking the time to structure a story well throughout its production should give you a clear idea of how to end it well.. Then again.. look at how game of thrones ended lol

 

[Crusader of Romance]

Damn, Tommy really did a number on Oscar. That's one messed up eye.

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It was a Chick playthrough so the MC never hit him here.

 

[Crowangel]

Damn, Tommy really did a number on Oscar. That's one messed up eye.

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It was a Chick playthrough so the MC never hit hime here.

lol its ok.. he got his.. i had her in the toilets via sarah at the dorm party.. made out with her at halloween and the spent the night with her and her friends during the halloween party end.. so his treatment of josy was repaid 10 fold lol

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Damn, Tommy really did a number on Oscar. That's one messed up eye.

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It was a Chick playthrough so the MC never hit hime here.

He shouldn't be hurt at all if it was really a CHICK choice.

Tommy only goes after Oscar because a Neutral/DIK MC tells him that Oscar called Josy a bitch.

lol its ok.. he got his.. i had her in the toilets via sarah at the dorm party.. made out with her at halloween and the spent the night with her and her friends during the halloween party end.. so his treatment of josy was repaid 10 fold lol

If only that last part was as awesome as it sounds

 

[Crusader of Romance]

He shouldn't be hurt at all if it was really a CHICK choice.
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Tommy only goes after Oscar because a Neutral/DIK MC tells him that Oscar called Josy a bitch.

I ment that I couldn't punch him. I definitely threw him out.

 

[Crowangel]

He shouldn't be hurt at all if it was really a CHICK choice.
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Tommy only goes after Oscar because a Neutral/DIK MC tells him that Oscar called Josy a bitch.

If only that last part was as awesome as it sounds

yeah i tried multiple routes to try and get Tiffany, Gina and ?? her lol to have some kind of further path on halloween but no go.. even choosing Tiff during the shots contest doesnt change things much going forward other than additional dialogue during her convo with Tommy after the DIKs photos get posted up

 

[Crowangel]

I ment that I couldn't punch him. I definitely threw him out.

use the mod and change your dik rating just before the scene ;P that way you can get the full trifecta against him lol

 

[Ray_D]

I ment that I couldn't punch him. I definitely threw him out.

Well I always choose the physical options whenever they are available.

 

[Birdnman993]

Will riona be a LI in episode 11? Are there news about this?

I hope so, for me she's the best girl in the whole game, too pretty not to be with her, she has the right looks and personality.

 

[Ray_D]

Will riona be a LI in episode 11? Are there news about this?

 

[KyoumaZen]

When is Episode 11 being released? I stopped playing after the interlude, so I'm hoping it will be soon....

 

[Crowangel]

When is Episode 11 being released? I stopped playing after the interlude, so I'm hoping it will be soon....

no official stuff but most predict March at latest

 

[The Senior Perv]

When is Episode 11 being released? I stopped playing after the interlude, so I'm hoping it will be soon....

DPC is releasing Madame Rose interlude part 1 this Friday, part 2 by January and episode 11 is coming next year around April-May.

 

[Night Hacker]

yeah... that's not how this works.
the ending of acting lessons was as if i would write a crime thriller story and set up hints who could be the murderer. then through deduction it could only be one of two people, but at the very last page i introduce a talking dog who says he is an alien and that he killed the human by accident.
just because i wrote a story with compelling characters and had you hooked for the mystery, doesn't mean that my ending didn't made absolutely no sense.

that is not good writing.

doesn't matter that DPC had good writing in acting lessons right before the ending. the ending itself was badly written.
you don't have to like any character in the game to know that this was a badly written ending.

I respectfully disagree. Different opinions, they're a bitch.

Anyhow, this is off topic. I disliked the ending, because he wrote the characters and story well. That is what is called my opinion. Like it or not.

 

[ShiShi!]

Damn we really went one year without update. Is two years going to be next?

Maybe time for DPC to hire more people to work on the game.

 

[Crusader of Romance]

I hope so, for me she's the best girl in the whole game, too pretty not to be with her, she has the right looks and personality.

Depends on the outcome but I hope so.

 

[Crusader of Romance]

When is Episode 11 being released? I stopped playing after the interlude, so I'm hoping it will be soon....

February or March looks most likely. January if we are really lucky but it's doubtful.

 

[Crusader of Romance]

Maybe time for DPC to hire more people to work on the game.

Because that went so well with College Kings when that Dev did that...
It depens on what is most important, high quality or getting the game quickly.

 

[Ray_D]

Damn we really went one year without update. Is two years going to be next?

Maybe time for DPC to hire more people to work on the game.

DPC has some positive aspects, but being a leader is not one of them.

 

[Better Cock Spock]

DPC has some positive aspects, but being a leader is not one of them.

What are you talking about? He's an excellent leader! He always praises the team, gives big bonuses, lets them make their own hours, no crunch time whatsoever, and there's no sexual harassment in the workplace!

No one ever complains about him as a leader, that's just how goddamn good he is