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Probably a rejectHow the hell a person like Areith got accepted in B&R. She is so stupid that she is not smart at anything.
Probably a rejectHow the hell a person like Areith got accepted in B&R. She is so stupid that she is not smart at anything.
There is exactly one moment of narration after the intro - in the library with Bella, when he says:What does Chekhov's gun have to do with Bella? What's there waiting to be used?
Or perhaps that will just be the complication, and Bella's terrible day will cause everything else to get revealed to the powers that be, and the climax will come from that. Either way, the future doesn't look very good for Bella.There is exactly one moment of narration after the intro - in the library with Bella, when he says:
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That's it. That is, so far, the only narration post-introduction. The fact it is the only time DPC has done it makes it IMPORTANT. It could be something other than her dying, but the major event of the story's climax (not that kind of climax!!! I'd tell you to get your mind out of the gutter, but I'm on this site too...) is going to involve Bella's very bad awful terrible day. You can't draw that much attention to a (metaphorical) gun in the first act if you aren't going to use it in the fifth act.
My guess; she is going to sleep with the MC, and feel so guilty she kills herself. Or she gets over her reservations, sleeps with him, and then her husband walks in on them and storms off again. She might get so jealous she goes on a kill crazy rampage, or something else entirely. But it will be a bad day for Bella.
If you replaced the mod, start from a save point BEFORE the free roam. If you start from a save during the free roam it won't work.I still get the same error.
Guess i'll just skip the Lily rooster thing and go on with the rest of the game.
Money would be my guess.How the hell a person like Areith got accepted in B&R. She is so stupid that she is not smart at anything.
The only problem with the Chekhov's Gun theory is that Chekhov recommended that you not carry over things past the next chapter or two. We are still dealing with dramatic situations from the 1st episode and we are now going on 6. Plus saying how DPC doesn't always research his dramatic situations I would bet he has no clue who Anton Chekhov is.There is exactly one moment of narration after the intro - in the library with Bella, when he says:
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That's it. That is, so far, the only narration post-introduction. The fact it is the only time DPC has done it makes it IMPORTANT. It could be something other than her dying, but the major event of the story's climax (not that kind of climax!!! I'd tell you to get your mind out of the gutter, but I'm on this site too...) is going to involve Bella's very bad awful terrible day. You can't draw that much attention to a (metaphorical) gun in the first act if you aren't going to use it in the fifth act.
My guess; she is going to sleep with the MC, and feel so guilty she kills herself. Or she gets over her reservations, sleeps with him, and then her husband walks in on them and storms off again. She might get so jealous she goes on a kill crazy rampage, or something else entirely. But it will be a bad day for Bella.
I do discuss most of the topics you raised in the second half of my post.1. ?
2. We don't know that it was Chad. Everyone blames Chad for everything but all we know is that it was "some Jocks"
3. See #2
4. If Chad is gay than Sage is his Beard. Which means it behooves him to keep her there at his side. Maybe he thought giving her the guitar would buy him some brownie points. He doesn't have to like her for her to be camouflage but she does have to be there.
He's from a country with a really excellent education system. I think we can assume he knows the concept, even if he doesn't know the name. Plus, he is a good story teller (which is why this thread is impossible to keep up with!), and a good story teller knows this stuff institutionally if they don't know it through education. I'd also say that act one is season one, and we are just now getting into season two, so...The only problem with the Chekhov's Gun theory is that Chekhov recommended that you not carry over things past the next chapter or two. We are still dealing with dramatic situations from the 1st episode and we are now going on 6. Plus saying how DPC doesn't always research his dramatic situations I would bet he has no clue who Anton Chekhov is.
See and that's why I have trouble immersing myself in parts of this story. Chad seemed so indifferent in the flashback and is still indifferent. How could Sage, a beautiful and desirable women, still being hanging on 2-3 years later? Has Chad been claiming impotence this whole time? If so why is Sage so concerned about the whole relationship? Doesn't make a bit of sense.I do discuss most of the topics you raised in the second half of my post.
On #4, I agree that would make a lot of sense, but I can't reconcile that logic with the way Chad acts towards Sage in the Episode 5 flashback (complete disinterest once he establishes the HOTs only party with the jocks), and when he asks Sage for help in Episode 3 (the peck on her forehead). Neither of those do much to keep Sage at his side.
The Episode 3 case is particularly bad, because that's when he is visiting Sage specifically to beg for a favor. Even if Chad wasn't gay, his treatment of Sage makes no sense. If there was ever a time to butter her up, you'd think that would be it. But he could only have acted like less of a boyfriend if he'd pinched her cheek.
So I'm forced to conclude that Chad isn't interested in keeping up the idea that Sage is his girlfriend, whether she's a beard or not.
That's not actually the only narration during the game: there's also the MC's monologue on doors at the end of Episode 3.There is exactly one moment of narration after the intro - in the library with Bella, when he says:
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That's it. That is, so far, the only narration post-introduction. The fact it is the only time DPC has done it makes it IMPORTANT. It could be something other than her dying, but the major event of the story's climax (not that kind of climax!!! I'd tell you to get your mind out of the gutter, but I'm on this site too...) is going to involve Bella's very bad awful terrible day. You can't draw that much attention to a (metaphorical) gun in the first act if you aren't going to use it in the fifth act.
My guess; she is going to sleep with the MC, and feel so guilty she kills herself. Or she gets over her reservations, sleeps with him, and then her husband walks in on them and storms off again. She might get so jealous she goes on a kill crazy rampage, or something else entirely. But it will be a bad day for Bella.
I'm not scrolling back through over a week of pages to find where I could show you that I disagree with that statement. DPC has a ton of plot contrivances in his story that are impossible or highly improbable and yet there they are. I think there Plot Holes rather than just flubs for the sake of the story but that's me.He's from a country with a really excellent education system. I think we can assume he knows the concept, even if he doesn't know the name. Plus, he is a good story teller (which is why this thread is impossible to keep up with!), and a good story teller knows this stuff institutionally if they don't know it through education. I'd also say that act one is season one, and we are just now getting into season two, so...
i'll try that, ThanksIf you replaced the mod, start from a save point BEFORE the free roam. If you start from a save during the free roam it won't work.
Hey, yeah, I forgot about that one. Still, it is being used extremely sparsely, and I think we can definitely say it portends something wicked, in a story sense. And while it's true DPC doesn't have to go the deadly route again, the best way to make a story compelling is to ask yourself, "what's the worst possible thing I could do to this character?"That's not actually the only narration during the game: there's also the MC's monologue on doors at the end of Episode 3.
I can see a few ways to make sense of it (Chad and Sage were childhood friends who morphed into semi-lovers over time, Chad was having an off day in the flashback, Sage started dating Chad after the flashback and he was affectionate at first). But I agree we are going to need to see a lot more explanation for what the Sage sees in him if her storyline is ever going to stand up.See and that's why I have trouble immersing myself in parts of this story. Chad seemed so indifferent in the flashback and is still indifferent. How could Sage, a beautiful and desirable women, still being hanging on 2-3 years later? Has Chad been claiming impotence this whole time? If so why is Sage so concerned about the whole relationship? Doesn't make a bit of sense.
The idea thatHey, yeah, I forgot about that one. Still, it is being used extremely sparsely, and I think we can definitely say it portends something wicked, in a story sense. And while it's true DPC doesn't have to go the deadly route again, the best way to make a story compelling is to ask yourself, "what's the worst possible thing I could do to this character?"
5.2 is to fix a bug created in 5.1 no new content in either.Hi all. I just started playing a couple of these types of games for the first time and I have to say DIK is by far the best - the dialog and characters are much better... along with everything else... I'm addicted. Does the 0.5.2 patch add any content or is it just bug fixes?
Also, how does Acting Lessons compare to this? I'm thinking I need to load that up while waiting for new content. Thanks.
Pretty sure DPC is among them, though. His Pateron says, "The general tone will be happy, but if you're in a dark period of your life, I'd advise you to not play the game." And we all know where Acting Lessons went.The idea thatYou must be registered to see the linkscertainly has a following, but I am not among them.
Thing is... and I seem to bring up this particular meta point a lot... would people be on board with her being actively (visibly) in love with him? It’s just a concession the story has to make to remove all NTR and anything remotely within that same ballpark. Dude never should have written so much of his cast as being in relationships if he didn’t have the balls to also write those relationships as functioning lest we brush up against something vaguely in that area.See and that's why I have trouble immersing myself in parts of this story. Chad seemed so indifferent in the flashback and is still indifferent. How could Sage, a beautiful and desirable women, still being hanging on 2-3 years later? Has Chad been claiming impotence this whole time? If so why is Sage so concerned about the whole relationship? Doesn't make a bit of sense.