VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[SomboSteel]

My uncle was only a few years older then MC would be when he married my aunt, who was about Bella's age at the time.
Coming up on 40yrs that they've been married.
Admittedly, age gaps like that are far from common. But they do happen.
So... In my view... Bella is a perfectly viable 'long term investment'

i mean, yeah if you are in love then thats great and is likely worth it. but idk if thats what MC and Bella actually have, since it seems like Bella is in lust (not love) and MC is just a horny as fuck college kid. and btw, Bella is gonna be ultra saggy when she gets older, and it would be kinda lame to be in the prime of your life and your wife is already on the down slope. im not trying to sound like mega superficial or anything, but a chick who looks like Bella proportionally will probably not age well irl

 

[EmperorGus]

...Bella is gonna be ultra saggy when she gets older, and it would be kinda lame to be in the prime of your life and your wife is already on the down slope...

Saggy tits aside for a moment...
Given her apparent dedication to yoga and fitness, I suspect she'd be in excellent shape for a long time.
As for saggy tits... Marvels of Modern Medicine

 

[SomboSteel]

Saggy tits aside for a moment...
Given her apparent dedication to yoga and fitness, I suspect she'd be in excellent shape for a long time.
As for saggy tits... Marvels of Modern Medicine

yeah, thats definitely a possibility. but for me, id like to be saggy and old at the same time as my significant other

 

[rem3403]

Bella’s age will catch up with her LONG before the other girls when compared to MC. Jade, Bella, and Cathy are good flings but not good long term investments.

Correction...none of them will ever get old because THEY ARE NOT REAL

 

[SomboSteel]

Correction...none of them will ever get old because THEY ARE NOT REAL

touché

 

[felicemastronzo]

Well, even I admit and let's be real, Josy 's part during the scavenger hunt, wasn't really a horrible experience. All she had to do was Sex with MC, Maya was already did every other task, all Josy had to do was something she wanted to do anyway . of course she had a good time with it.

But funny, you are the three way fan, who don't like that we don't see them all three of them act like a couple, but with every comment you just pointing out, why it would not work , Because Josy and Maya will not work in the longer term either, MC just makes it complicated, surely, right now he is the common ground that unite them, but eventually Jealousy will take over.

This is not actually the case.
as for the scavenger hunt, the part Maya faces alone is if anything the most boring one, the one where she has to buy stuff for Quinn, then at least she completes some sexual points with MC.

the humiliating part for Maya was the one before, the one where Quinn teased and bullied her.
you're right: if MC is in the trouple surely he represents the main common ground between the 2 girls, absolutely the strong point of the relationship, if instead he's not in it he represents the main danger to the relationship between the 2 girls.

I don't like the fact that in the troupe for now there are mainly "individual" contents, but these are also personal tastes

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Sage is obviously wife material, but you understand Bella is a flesh and blood woman too? Not just a literally fantasy of a wet dream.

But she's no wife material to me, she is cheating on her husband w MC

 

[Kame-Sennin]

My uncle was only a few years older then MC would be when he married my aunt, who was about Bella's age at the time.
Coming up on 40yrs that they've been married.
Admittedly, age gaps like that are far from common. But they do happen.
So... In my view... Bella is a perfectly viable 'long term investment'

You're uncle is a very lucky guy then, its hard to seduce MILFS in real life

 

[Drakehardcastle]

This game really set the bar for writing, I only wish other games with cool renders took note, Power Vacuum is another great game, but this is just excellent.

The twist partway through with Josy and Maya nearly knocked me off my feet, I'm part way through the 6th episode and I think I see another one coming, but I'll keep that to myself as I wouldn't want to spoil anything, but if it's what I think, well-played sir.

Keep up the great work! Hope there is a chapter 3 in the works

 

[felicemastronzo]

I reiterate that the point was how Maya is forced to make unreasonable decisions very often, just to advance the plot, often making a bad impression.

The decisive scene for Maya in EP1 was the initiation, the rubbing of MC. Maya thinks to herself that it shouldn't happen that she gets wet. Oops what happens there.
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so if she rubbed herself against a sofa, she fell in love with the sofa? your reconstruction seems very superficial to me. it's normal that she feels pleasure, but the interest in MC stems from something else entirely

Maya needs the tuition to be together with Josy undisturbed. That's why she takes a chance with Quinn and the HOTs.

if it is dictated by desperation, it is clearly not a reasonable choice.

As soon as the scavenger hunt is over Josy points out that in the end it was just a rumor.

Of course she was confused. Don't you read the texts. Maya says herself to the MC that the relationship with Josy was about to end and then the MC came along. In EP2 after the cum petition Maya thought that's what in his eyes and is it because I need something new. The little one is totally confused when Josy comes in EP3.

I don't know what you mean here...
Maya is convinced that the relationship with Josy is over, Josy supposedly goes to Maya to end the relationship (at least that's what she implies on the phone to MC), they meet, one minute argument and then plan the future, to me it seems at least a rushed transition. but surely that's the least of the problems

Yes she knew that Patrick had the key to her room. But she also said that Patrick always announces himself to Derek and Derek would warn her. Shortly after, Maya mentioned to the MC that it was another lie from Patrick.

So Maya's dad has the keys to make announced visits? It doesn't make much sense to me. And anyway, since the only person Patrick should never find Maya with is Josy, it remains a risk beyond all reason.

Josy went to B&R to study finance to follow in her father's footsteps. The HOT's are just a college experience she would like to have, but Maya is Josy's priority. You can read that at the end of EP4. Even in EP7, Josy's would have left the HOT's for Maya.

Of course Josy goes to college to study... but she really cares about the experience with the HOTs, in the scene you're talking about Josy expresses this will, and gives it up (maybe) only because Maya makes a scene

I saw the ideal evening of Josy and Maya in a preview and I don't need to imagine it anymore.

where 99% they are with MC, so if anything it's the perfect night for the three of them.

 

[Tserriednich'sNen]

i mean, yeah if you are in love then thats great and is likely worth it. but idk if thats what MC and Bella actually have, since it seems like Bella is in lust (not love) and MC is just a horny as fuck college kid.

She's been trying to convince herself for a couple episodes now that her attraction to MC is purely physical and nothing else only to finally come to terms with her feelings for him in Episode 7. She also directly tells him that she isn't looking for something casual if rejecting him during the car scene.

 

[PashafromRussia]

Maya is convinced that the relationship with Josy is over, Josy supposedly goes to Maya to end the relationship (at least that's what she implies on the phone to MC), they meet, one minute argument and then plan the future, to me it seems at least a rushed transition. but surely that's the least of the problems

This.I agree that this is the weakest part of the story. Both Josy and Maya were ready to give up on each other and stay with the main character. But in the end, they just drop his. I agree with MC. They just didn't love him.

 

[SomboSteel]

She's been trying to convince herself for a couple episodes now that her attraction to MC is purely physical and nothing else only to finally come to terms with her feelings for him in Episode 7. She also directly tells him that she isn't looking for something casual if rejecting him during the car scene.

i don’t believe that any of the characters in this story could possibly love each other yet, no matter how DPC writes it.

All the characters have known each other for only a couple months at most. MC hasn’t even spent much time with any of the girls individually other than Maya or Josy who are the most forced upon him for plot reasons. Like if we tallied up all the time we know for certain the MC has spent with each of the girls, it might be maybe slightly over like 24 hours over the course of two months for each of them (some less, some more).

Nobody is in love because they all barely even know each other. The girls/MC might be horny or infatuated, but I don’t believe for a minute that anybody is in love. Bella has who knows how long of sexual frustration pent up, she would likely get mixed up emotionally for the first person to start melting her ice (MC or not). Right now she just wants to fuck and the wife in her wants to make it more official somehow so she doesn’t judge herself so harshly

thats how I see it anyways.

 

[MykeRosy]

hows the development? been 4 months since last update.

 

[felicemastronzo]

i don’t believe that any of the characters in this story could possibly love each other yet, no matter how DPC writes it.

All the characters have known each other for only a couple months at most. MC hasn’t even spent much time with any of the girls individually other than Maya or Josy who are the most forced upon him for plot reasons. Like if we tallied up all the time we know for certain the MC has spent with each of the girls, it might be maybe slightly over like 24 hours over the course of two months for each of them (some less, some more).

Nobody is in love because they all barely even know each other. The girls/MC might be horny or infatuated, but I don’t believe for a minute that anybody is in love. Bella has who knows how long of sexual frustration pent up, she would likely get mixed up emotionally for the first person to start melting her ice (MC or not). Right now she just wants to fuck and the wife in her wants to make it more official somehow so she doesn’t judge herself so harshly

thats how I see it anyways.

To speak of 'love' is perhaps excessive, but why should they not 'fall in love' with him? (I don't know if in English the two terms are different as they are for me)
you don't need to know each other so much to fall in love, you fall in love with the wrong people in life, more than who they really are, when we fall in love it matters who we think they are.

every LI has a quite different path, but at this point of the story we can say that all of them are more or less in love with Mc, the two most delayed in this path are Sage and Bella. Josy, Maya and Jill expose themselves quite a bit. if there are no explicit declarations of love it's just to keep the story still in suspense

 

[Tauro Thurius]

 

[`Ray`]

It's really funny that some people still believe that this girl is Josy...

 

[felicemastronzo]

Josy did not go to Maya, Josy was assigned the same room, which confronted all three. All three were surprised. Hey these are 19 year old teenagers. They were all three through the wind and there was no one planning the future.

I wasn't referring to the night of arrival (which is a series of coincidences to create a certain effect), but in general

Josy calls MC (and not Maya) and if he could have hosted her (like by kicking Troy out and not getting kicked out) she would have gone straight to him, probably spent the night there, and at that point her story with Maya would have ended (then maybe the one with MC too). of course later she would have cleared up with Maya, apologized to her for avoiding her etc.. but their story was in fact over.

Really now. You are comparing the MC to a SOFA.

you started it, comparing rubbing to falling in love....

Yes Josy would like to make the college experience with the HOT's. But at all times Josy has been willing to neglect those experiences for Maya. Josy has voiced that several times and that's why she feels shitty talking to the MC. Josy clearly says that she doesn't want to hurt Maya and that maybe Maya thinks Josy is getting her way now. Josy and Maya were both not happy with the solution that Josy is moving in with the HOT's.

here you know you're lying too....

Josy says that she would like to go to the HOTs, Maya attacks her and then Josy says that she wouldn't do it knowing that Maya would suffer, otherwise she would do it. and all this before it became a necessity, Josy sincerely expresses a desire, which she would give up, but she does have the desire

It doesn't seem to me that overall she goes to HOTs reluctantly.

 

[dalli_x]

This.I agree that this is the weakest part of the story. Both Josy and Maya were ready to give up on each other and stay with the main character. But in the end, they just drop his. I agree with MC. They just didn't love him.

Let's play different games. In EP4, it was clearly shown that they both want the MC. Look at the look on Josy's face when she learns from Jill that the MC is dating Jill. Read Josy's thoughts. Josy writes the MC via MC and really wants to talk to him. Maya has one of her strongest scenes for in EP4 when she offensively approaches the MC in the gender study. Josy and Maya want the MC.

Guess why things are complicated? Josy and Maya love each other. Both fall in love with the MC separately from each other. Josy is afraid of losing them both and Maya is afraid of not being able to keep up sexually, maybe not even being bisexual. You can read that in the Hangout.

In EP7, the MC has the opportunity to show Josy uand Maya who he really wants. This reminds me of the end of EP4. Who does the MC sleep with. Josy, Maya or on the floor, bed, floor, bed. Well they all three end up in a makeshift double bed.

You should start to look at the option of all EP's in context and not each option separately.

 

[Deleted member 2128394]

Haven't kept up with the speculation, where are we on the Josy/Josephine front mate?