VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[lipe2410]

My only anger over it was that you weren't allowed to choose Melissa unless you were fucking her. I would absolutely have saved her, even without having the sex. She clearly needed to be protected and cared for.

In Megan's end when MC say Melissa deserved way more to life than what she got, tears came so hard that i even didn't could see the rest of final scene. But enough off topic, i'm almost crying remember this again

 

[Heycock]

The problem is that we have accumulated so many mysteries and potential dangers that we are now addicted and do not react to anything.

Bella running away after the first date should make us tremble, but is there anyone who vaguely believed in real danger?

Classic show problems. The way it solves tension makes more difficult every time to build up tension again. Thats why kids shows always had a "bad guy" more powerfull then the previous one. But it's still the same thing.
Now, to be addicted to the story is a good thing. Or you mean addicted to tension and mistery?.

Well said. This is really a porn game, and there should be sex scenes in it, even if they are not plot-based. But I think it was done because DPC wanted to show what he had achieved as an artist. Another explanation is that the DPC does not know how to continue the plot. For me, season 2 ended almost with a happy ending. The girls are happy with MC and he starts a new chapter.

I think he knows, the issue is the main charm of a porn story is still the porn. So he makes porn bigger and bigger to cautivate the audiance and get good patreon numbers. Not a problem by itself but the story just dont grow at the same rate.

 

[Kodek]

I finally came back to discuss this game after forcing myself to not play the last three chapters. I really love this game and wanted to wait until the end of season 2 until playing the rest of it, simply because i can't handle waiting for something i like. I really like seeing so much of the theories made at the end of season 1 and beggining of season 2 being confirmed like Chad being gay and Sage being Tybalt's sister and Lynette probably being a Royce (Jill's aunt at most).

Well, my choice for LIs didn't change much although Sage still fighting Jill for first place, i really can't decide between both of them, i love them so much. As for my fav character outside of LIs, it still didn't change, it's Quinn and Riona. Also, for people shitting on Quinn, i get it. I really get all the hate, because Quinn seems untouchable in the writing POV, but keep in mind that she WILL end fucking screwing herself to death because of the road she keeps following and bringing people around her down with her, it's happening already. That's why i choose to follow the OTHERS route first and foremost, simply because i want to save Quinn from herself, because i can sympathise a lot with her situation. I hope i can save her before the hole gets too deep.

So for the ward of fav scene for me, there's probably Quinn's brocolli interaction and Riona's OCD shenanigans for not sex scene and Jill's for sex scene. For most painful scene, also Jill when she saw MC and Bella together by the window, fuck the look on her face hurt like a motherfucker. I'm really looking foward to the next season, it can't come fast enough. I will probably change some of the routes i followed at the end to get a CHICK affinity since i ended with DIK and NEUTRAL, but i will follow my playthrough to the end, even if i end screwing myself over. It's the choices i made and it's more enjoyable like that.

Have a good one everyone.

 

[felicemastronzo]

If you're Dik, then obviously you like Quinn. Just because you act out such an image. If you're a chick, she'll hear that Jill asks you out and refuses group sex.

Not obviously...

Quinn path and dik affinity are not the same thing.

Quinn likes a dik mc, mc could like her or not

And why a neutral mc has to like Quinn?

 

[Lookass]

When going only for Jill right from the start, she still has a scene in the bathroom with Josy where they say that I'm smashing other girls

 

[Hahn1900]

So Jill cant play before an audience. Everyone treats her like, no, it is not your fault, you are the best, etc. No one tells her to play the piano damn it or something like that. We even feel sorry for her!

And the game tells me at the end that I was at fault because I couldn't encourage her or whatever.................. The Whole Jill route was a fucking letdown for me.

for real though...

if you had a girlfriend and you are able to play an instrument, you wouldnt help your girlfriend to overcome her stagefright and later on blame her if she is disappointed in you that you didnt support her? think about it... if so, sorry you would be a awful boyfriend.

Jills recital is big time important for her, and a crucial part in the relationship between her and the MC in the first place, in one of the first meetings with her the MC is copying the sheets to practice the song for her and later on even give her advice for the recital and so on... the whole recital thing is THE main-thing going on for her the entire game... so if you want to be with Jill, of course you would practice the song and than help her out or not? but you didnt... and yep, thats your fault than. You could have done better.

Youre not the first guy around here that spits on jill for being disappointed if you let her down at the recital... dont know why, its a natural reaction of her.

So you were obviously on a Jill route, but not really in it, cause if you didnt get the option to help her, you screwed up at several points with her beforehand. Either didnt practice her song, or just fucked around a lot or something like that... to blame Jill for that is kinda strange, really. *shrugs*

 

[horusxcaen82]

so uh....

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[Hahn1900]

When going only for Jill right from the start, she still has a scene in the bathroom with Josy where they say that I'm smashing other girls

yeah cause you tell her that at the tennis date, that youre dating others, so shes thinking exactly that... she cant know that its not the case...

but thats a porblem with the game overall, the characters doesnt really tlak that much with each other about basic important things. Heck... they dont even talk about lastnames

 

[Ilhares]

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Nope. Timeline doesn't work out right for her either, we've had too much evidence otherwise. Heather and Sally are outlier options, the most likely is Ashley or Wendy.

 

[Kodek]

so uh....

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No, it isn't the LIs. And i doubt it would be Zoey. It maybe (and probably) has nothing to do with MC at all.

I can guess Ashley is pregnant of Derek, that would be a big blow for Derek's character or most probably be DIK related with Tommy being the winner and for funz it can be fucking Arieth like lolz and it could be the thing that can bring Mona back, so maybe it can be her. So for me it would be Ashley or something Tommy related, but there are other options.

 

[Hahn1900]

so uh....

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why zoey? would be a strange pregnancy carrying a baby this small for more than 6 month dont you think? At this point of the game she already has given birth if its from the MC... If she is pregnant, than not from the MC, and than i would ask... why show up? "Hey Tremolo, iam pregnant from another guy, wanna help me out?" erm.... no?

I just think, Zoey screwed up in san diego and is now back, and jhust still has feelings for the MC... nothing really to it, that would completely normal. No need to add up pregnancy for her.

No its another girl... favorite around her would be Ashley, cause that would be a major impact for derek and involves the MC too. (and yeah is certain that she had sex with derek, no doubt)

Or maybe its one of the girls Stephen Burke had intercourse with... every other option is kinda pointless cause it wouldnt matter that much.

 

[Kodek]

why zoey? would be a strange pregnancy carrying a baby this small for more than 6 month dont you think? At this point of the game she already has given birth if its from the MC... If she is pregnant, than not from the MC, and than i would ask... why show up? "Hey Tremolo, iam pregnant from another guy, wanna help me out?" erm.... no?

I just think, Zoey screwed up in san diego and is now back, and jhust still has feelings for the MC... nothing really to it, that would completely normal. No need to add up pregnancy for her.

No its another girl... favorite around her would be Ashley, cause that would be a major impact for derek and involves the MC too. (and yeah is certain that she had sex with derek, no doubt)

Or maybe its one of the girls Stephen Burke had intercourse with... every other option is kinda pointless cause it wouldnt matter that much.

For me Zoey is back because of porn game and drama. It's a porn game, so fucking more girls is a given, but it can also serve to shake MCs emotions and maybe be connected to some LIs as well.

 

[Pijee]

game not start, no report ether

 

[anonymoussposter]

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Lynette flashback

 

[Hahn1900]

For me Zoey is back because of porn game and drama. It's a porn game, so fucking most girls is a given, but it can also serve to shake MCs emotions and maybe be connected to some LIs as well.

yeah and i dont like that...

There is no need for Zoey, not one bit...

This game already has enough drama going on, and there are more than enough options to shake up emotions from the MC... Zoey is just another person adds up to the game and blocking progress for way more important things.

I dont like that one bit i have to admit... 8 big episodes, but only few questions and storyline are solved so far... instead every episode did poile up more and more, and now Zoey too... its worrysome, cause how the heck should be all that solved in a decent amount of episodes? *shrugs* dont know... at this point iam rather sceptic that this game will ever end in a good way

But what more is there to do as to wait ^^

 

[Hahn1900]

Lynette flashback

hm dont know what for...

Just a prank from DPC to drive us crazy?

I mean... hey suprise lynette is pregnant... oh wait, yeah we play her son

Nah dont think so.

 

[horusxcaen82]

maybe its Mona lol jk you guys are right its probably not Zoey but I find it odd why shes just back all the sudden, not that I wouldn't mind more sex drama out of it, maybe Tommy knocked up Heather or like it was said Derek could have knocked up Ashley I want the pregnancy to be out there, I think it would have been funny if MC had gotten Jade pregnant I dunno I'm still on a "end of game" high and a lot of thoughts crossing my mind right now.

 

[inevitableandinfinity8]

Ok, i just finished every route. I also was reading some of the comments, trying to follow this mess. I had the feeling there was a lot of negative comments and deception from this episode. It's funny how even if DPC seemes to put everything in this update it still face with so much negativity. We not only got the biggest episode so far but for sure it tried to satisfied everyone, with Bella and Jill scenes, and the good bunch of secondary girls.

Yet I understand them. I had the same feeling, it wasnt as exciting as ep 7, and not even close as the first time I played ep 1 to 6. With his good momments didnt had the punk punch it had the first episodes or the sweetness of the latest ones.

Now, the issue is: a lot of it always comes more from the player than the writer. We waited 7 months to get 1/16 of a story. That's not the natural way to tell a story. A story is meant to be told in front of a fire in half four, to be watched on a tv screen in 2 hours or to be read in a book in a couple days. Thats why shows always have the same problems when it comes to narrative and audience starts to get tired at some point of the little problems that normally overloocked. Just like relationships. So, remember guys that you are not the same guy playing the game than when you did it for the first time.

It also doesnt help that we keep theorising and arguing over the game. Just think about it, pretty much everything in this update was guessed by someone the last months. Nothing was a surprise for me couse every posibility was already considered, not by me but by someone. It's even worst when in the heat of the argument you get stubborn about your ideas and they are proven wrong by the story.

None of this issues are hardly to blame on the story itself. Althought not blame, its on us. That's why art is subjective, couse it's the traits of the subject who defined the way a story will be enjoyed or not. You cannot force people to like a story. Schools try every year and they failed, spectacularly.

Saying this, in my opinion this episode did have a lot of flaws. Worst, some of them are a trend, wich comes all across the first of season 1, at least. So let me point them out.

1) The prose was not there. If something BADIK always had good dialogues. Every conversation in the first season had some lines wich makes it interesting to read. A joke, a good pun, even a well achieved sweet or deep moment. And yes comedy was there, true, but we also got a lot of... "Talking about feelings". A conversation mostly boring for male population, even more when they re not even your feelings. We got this instead of thoose small signs, subtle hints, who feels great presisly couse they are small. Bella smiling for first, Quinn resting his shoulder on MC, Jill finger trying to reach MC dick.

And even if its not feelings talk, still most of the dialogue were simple not as interesting. A lot couse of:

2) The MC is becoming more of a Mary Sue. Now this is always a problem with porn. Porn its a narcisistic activity, its self congratulatory. On top of that, mary sues are a frecuent problem in modern fiction. Yet Badik was different mostly couse it avoided it the first episodes. The joks hated the MC, the preps too, the nerds overlooked him as an idiot, even the DIK's didn't care too much since he was a maggot. Quinn and Sage were just sex no love, Bella thought he was a stupid kid, even Josy and Maya, the cutest ones let it clear that even if they like him he was just one wheel in the tricycle. On top of that he was broken and insecure.
Yet since ep 5 everything started to change. The DIKs become less of a cool gang you want to be with, and more of the group of "beta" male MC club fans. Quinn is less of: "let me show you the dark force, kid, see?, this is weed" and is more of a: "Wow, this is a relationship daddy, show me how it works?". The guy plays the Pachelbell song on a classic music concert and becomes a "Rock Star".
As a result we have line after line of: "Wow MC you are so cool/great at doing X/ big/ handsome/ strong/ intelligent". Sometimes is just ridicoulus and you laugh, sometimes is lame and you feel embarrased, but mostly is boring.

3) The punk punch is as gone as our hopes for a M/J birthday threesome. First Bella scene she hate us, give us a chance and we arrive drunk untill she felt sorry for us. Last Bella scene we had a romantic dinner on her house. First Maya scene we were sleeping, she suddenly start to teasing us untill we get electrocuted. Last one we went to a water park. First really sexual scene we break into an unknown house full of girls. Two unknown girls threat us untill we get naked, then throw us naked into the streets. Last one was a sleepover on our place (best dorm in campus).
Instead we get some emotional strong moments, some quite touching. And that's cool, but we want the punk punch, that's why we are here.

4) Lack of drama (yeah, lack of it) Everything work so fine, everything is so cool. If season 1 was a struggle to remain in college (literary survival), season 2 concerns are girls troubles, wich one of this hotties should MC choose from. It's like one of thoose shows where a guy has to choose beetween girls. Even worst i am picking all in different saves so...
MC status has not been really challenged since he join the DIKs.

5) Porn is eating the story. Now a lot of this I already talk about it. The MC becoming a Mary Sue, the lack of drama... But there is more. EP 8 had the smallest ammount of renders compared to animations and you can notice it. The renders cannot follow the growth on animations. So episodes take longer yet the story goes slower, mostly couse its interrupted at every 5 mins with a long (longer for some people) scene of a random girl being fucked. As long as we enjoyed the porn, the story still pays for it.

This are currently the negative things i saw from last update.

Well said. This is really a porn game, and there should be sex scenes in it, even if they are not plot-based. But I think it was done because DPC wanted to show what he had achieved as an artist. Another explanation is that the DPC does not know how to continue the plot. For me, season 2 ended almost with a happy ending. The girls are happy with MC and he starts a new chapter.

I think anyone that play game seriously understate gravity of claim that there is lot of sex. serious player basically make a choice and LI dependent path for their game. So in clear pov mc don't get lot of sex until he is lose cannon and game is being played by non-committed gamer.
After choosing a LI there isn't much of so called porn. Like chose bella how many scene you have or jill, josy or sage.

CHOSE A LI AS PATH THEN SEE THERE IS NOT SO MUCH OF A PORN BUT STORY.
ARE PEOPLE EVEN PLAYING THE GAME ? THE LEVEL OF NON EXISTENT INTELLIGENCE SURPRISE ME EVERY TIME.

so uh....

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Zoey Pregnant ? Pure Bull

 

[anonymoussposter]

hm dont know what for...

Just a prank from DPC to drive us crazy?

I mean... hey suprise lynette is pregnant... oh wait, yeah we play her son

Nah dont think so.

It might be a good distraction

he knows people will be speculating but in the end it will be nothing new

 

[hornywhiteboy]

i really want to keep playing cause im loving the game and want to know how the story is going to progress but im having trouble with downloading using the regular links so i was wondering is there a difference between compressed and the regular download and does any one know why i virus software keeps telling me there something bad in the download from uploadhaven is it something small or stupid i can just ignore ?