- Nov 27, 2021
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I don´t think there are a lot of "much better written stories on this site". Most of porn games are crap. Most devs think that knowing how to make a decent render and to use Renpy is enough to make a game, but know shit about creative writing.The tybalt thing is fucking stupid. He has nothing on the mc. The mc has an open invite to the house so trespassing is not the case and that is literally the only thing he could prove. It's more shitty writing to create fucking drama which seems to be dpc's thing, and I say that as someone who likes this game, a lot. But people act like it's the greatest fucking porn game ever made and their are much better written stories on this site.
In terms of writing, most of them are 3/10 and this one at least is 6/10. There are a lot of clichés in this story, plot holes, far fetched situations, and things that maybe (just maybe) can make sense in a path, but don´t make any sense in others. But this game has great characters, funny and witty dialogues and details like "roster" that add to the immersion of the player.