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MC is conveniently stupid about stuff like that, he should have put two and two together multiple times during the story. I mean why hasn't he already told Maya the entirety of what he knows about Quinn? No one knows, just plot convenience.Stephen clearly recognized the presenter at the preps party. It doesn't matter if the MC knows what was going on in the room. But the MC did notice that Mona was angry and later in the classroom the MC noticed that something was wrong with Mona and wondered if it had something to do with Stephen Burke.
And even discounting most of what I wrote above, Stephen still saw the MC and the MC saw Mona and Stephen. If the MC blabs in front of Jade, I already know how Jade will react.
"Stephen, you pig. First you fuck students and now your daughter's friends." Divorces cost a lot of money.
The more we advance with the story, the more annoyed I get with the limitations of DPC's writing, don't even get me started with him needing the plot of the house to happen and retroactively ruin Jill in the process, making the picnic the most important factor in her path. Or making that choice a Chick choice because Jill is a Chick, well, chick. Doesn't matter that the Chick choice should be taking care of the sick friend, but it is what it is, I just enjoy the ride and cross my fingers we survive the landing, at this point.