- Jul 7, 2017
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It is indeed, like many aspects of many stories, a scenario that requires a minor amount of suspension of disbelief.
One thing that makes this game easy to enjoy, and read, is it rarely gets bogged down in details.
We don't need scenes with Maya trying to explain how her loan works, DPC trying to explain it to placate people just backfired.
Maya should have just said, "I don't fucking know, I'm just fucked OK!? My dad has got me over a barrel and I don't understand it and I don't know what to do!!"
Instead she's all like, "Well you see, I'm like a co-signer, and that means I'm responsible for the loan, and then you know, details and shit". Nah, fuck that shit. We don't need to know intricates.
The same goes with how the fuck the mc didn't know what he was walking into.
Do we need a post-meeting scene like:
mc: "WTF Sage! Why didn't you tell me Jade and Stephen were your parents!? Fuck!"Sage: "I thought you knew, and don't start fucking yelling at me! Why the fuck does it matter anyway?"mc: "It's because... um... like I would have been more prepared, um, Jade, um, she's like my teacher and shit. It was awkward!"Sage: "WTF are you talking about? What does it matter if she's your teacher. She's your teacher? You doing gender studies? Haha, really! Anyway, what the fuck does it matter if she's your teacher. It's not like you're fucking her or something!"mc: "..."Sage: "Oh my god no! No! Don't fucking tell me you've been fucking her!"mc: "I need to use the bathroom!"Sage: "What the actual fuck, and I mean the actual, actual fuck! Oh my... FUCK!"You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Just accept he didn't know, no one told him, she thought he knew, like, who gives a fuck.
The problem is now, if DPC has a post explanation (like after the event, and even if it goes down like the shit I just wrote above), everyone will be like, "DPC is just trying to fix his fuckup..."
It's just a molehill.
(Also, he wasn't even coming to talk with them, he was just moral support, Sage was going to talk with them with just Maya. The mc and Joey were meant to be fucking in the foyer)
Oh man it's simple why some characters don't disclose everything about themselves. Because they don't want to.go figure, in the end it is always my fault as a player both when Maya baffles me with implausible details about her loan and when other characters don't say things that anyone would have said
anyway, the problem is not that MC doesn't know, but that Sage doesn't tell him, when she SHOULD HAVE, with no plausible justification other than the construction of a bad twist. if Sage thinks it doesn't matter she appears very stupid or very selfish, which is not good
then ok, of course I have to accept it, it's not that I expect the scene to be rewritten, but it's a bad scene that ends an unexceptional season
- Maya had to trust the MC first, not only because she is introverted, but also because she has made the experience in her past that certain truths should remain hidden, because otherwise she harms herself with it.
- Sage wants to stand on her own feet, ergo it would be counterproductive for Sage if everyone knew that Sage is the adopted daughter of the Burkes. On the one hand she is a member of the Burke family, but on the other hand she is not 100% Burke because she was adopted. I even assume that Tybalt makes Sage feel this, because he is at least a 50% Burke, if he is the biological son of Jade.
- Jill is slandering her last name herself because she wants to meet normal people and not only snobs.
These are only 3 different reasons why the characters in the game don't want to reveal everything. To be honest, this is even realistic writing from DPC because he includes the characters' pschye.