VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[LizaS]

By the way Sage and Isabella were never my favorites and Jill was until EP6

AC after EP6:

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[yossa999]

The Tybalt blackmail storyline ruined Jill for me. She went from standing up for MC against Chad to being led by the nose by the saddest clown on the campus and that shift in character made her my least favorite LI in the game. Like you just knew that no one can be that dumb. [...]

It's interesting that the same theme presents in many other games when a rich kid threatens to sue a poor MC. As I understand it, the problem is not in the charges itself or or how much of a clown the suer is, but in the fact that the poor cannot afford a good lawyer and will lose the court anyway, no matter how ridiculous the charges are. Maybe that's why Jill took that blackmail threat seriously. And while Tybalt hardly has anything on the MC that worth the court, he has daddy's power on his side and he is vindictive enough to get the MC's ass get kicked off the college.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Good writers reads others, writes everyday no matter how hard or little it is, and write new stuff or get stuck in endless rewrites, endless editing and possible writers block.

Now, why would you call

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out like that? Totally uncalled for...

I assume

Tybalt blackmail, story that made her, look a bit dumb, and of course the over the top, ultimate fanservice by making her a Virgin.
these 2 was the major 2 factor why she lost a bit of her charm for many, including me.
The thing is that Bella's funny personal mission, what was what saved the Tyblat plot, by making it funny. Altough at least by the end Jill finnaly stood up for herself.
with all that said , now that it's finally over, I still think that right now Jill and Bella has the most potential to grow, so me personally, I most excited about the next chapter with Jill, to see where and how things will play out

 

[shazba]

I just noticed this...

Now I've believed, the same as seemingly a lot of other people here, that Josy isn't as "Chick" as say Maya or Jill, and that she has a more naughty side (like when she deliberately gives the mc an eyeful when he's on the floor picking up the pencil, or when she's gagging on a banana in the library being more than slightly suggestive).

But here's the interesting observation (it's probably been pointed out already and I'm just years behind):

When Josy accosts the mc and coerces him into having a heart-to-heart with her and Maya (this happens immediately before the infamous library dumping scene), she says to him:

Josy: "I've realized I already made my bed with my choices..."​

And then, if she's fucked the mc and he's not a DIK (i.e. DIK affinity), she adds:

Josy: "...but if I got the chance to go back and change them...I wouldn't."​

However, if the mc's a DIK, or if she never got to fuck him, she adds:

Josy: "...and if I got the chance to go back and change them...maybe I would. I'm not sure..."​

This is quite interesting. Two things can make her possibly regret her past actions with the mc:

1. She never fucked him; or
2. She fucked him but he behaves like a DIK.

All along I thought she'd kinda be into a DIK mc, and it's Maya that holds her back, but this scene indicates otherwise.

I guess there were other signs way back even in episode 1, like if the DIK mc compliments her butt, she equates it to the way Steve acts...

But yeah, always thought she'd be into a DIK, well at least she's into "dick"...

 

[NebulousShooter]

bla bla bla

I like how in a couple of weeks Zelda overtook your entire account, hahah. Thats cool, she is a cutiepie.

 

[Lostanddamned]

we will find out something about Bella's husband a moment before we have to deal with the problem, so at the latest at the end of the chapter, not before

as with Sage and her family

I don't think he will pull the trigger on James in the next episode. Probably at the end of episode 10 or 11 so we will have to deal with it in the episode that comes after. But seeing how the end of the third episode has always been cliffhangers, I think 11 is more likely for it to happen.

I think so that all LI's will have about the same amount of content. DPC himself wrote in a status report that he wants to keep the balance. The sidegirls, on the other hand, might have less content because their "OTHERS" branch has too many characters.

I agree, but I also think depending on the episode, some LI's will have more content than the others. Personally I think Sage will have 2 scenes in the next episode (her room as we saw in the preview and probably one at the party).

If we assume that he will stick to the 15-16 scenes per episode number, I think we are looking at something like this:

Sage - x2
Jill - x1
Bella - x1
Josy - x1
Maya - x1
Zoey - x1
Quinn - x1
Nicole - x1
Heather - x1
Camila - x1
Riona - x1
Jade - x1
Cathy - x1
Maya and Josy threesome - x1
Nicole and Lily threesome - x1

Now I don't remember if he said that there will be 2 or 3 threesomes in the next episode, but I think he said 2.

Edit: Maya and Josy scenes can be solo versions of the threesome scene, which leaves room for 2 more, probably Lily solo and the vixens scene.

 

[cnovam]

excelente lástima que tarde tanto en actualizar, gracias por un buen juego

 

[Lostanddamned]

It's interesting that the same theme presents in many other games when a rich kid threatens to sue a poor MC. As I understand it, the problem is not in the charges itself or or how much of a clown the suer is, but in the fact that the poor cannot afford a good lawyer and will lose the court anyway, no matter how ridiculous the charges are. Maybe that's why Jill took that blackmail threat seriously. And while Tybalt hardly has anything on the MC that worth the court, he has daddy's power on his side and he is vindictive enough to get the MC's ass get kicked off the college.

It's not about taking the lawsuit seriously or not. She believe Tybalt without ever looking into it. Hell she could have found out that Tybalt is lying by just talking to Rich (or was it Lucas, my mind is hazy on that), who according to Tybalt wanted to sue the MC.

Besides, technically they can't even sue him for arson anyway, because there was no fire to begin with. The whole thing was badly written just for the sake of drama IMO, it was the most annoying storyline written until now in the entire game.

 

[LizaS]

I like how in a couple of weeks Zelda overtook your entire account, hahah. Thats cool, she is a cutiepie.

Yes, she is.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I don't think he will pull the trigger on James in the next episode. Probably at the end of episode 10 or 11 so we will have to deal with it in the episode that comes after. But seeing how the end of the third episode has always been cliffhangers, I think 11 is more likely for it to happen.

now that the relationship with Bella is "official" it can't be long before they broach the subject
it is already extremely ridiculous that they started without doing so.

in my opinion the closing of the ninth chapter would be a good solution, already late, but you can't go back in time.

it is the case that some mysteries begin to be closed

 

[Lostanddamned]

now that the relationship with Bella is "official" it can't be long before they broach the subject
it is already extremely ridiculous that they started without doing so.

in my opinion the closing of the ninth chapter would be a good solution, already late, but you can't go back in time.

it is the case that some mysteries begin to be closed

He intends to do at least 4 seasons though. If he solves all the issues by season 3, what he's going to do in season 4? IMO, he'll stretch it out, so that season 4 is actually for problem solving and season 5 will probably be for endings.

 

[desperatecub02]

It's finally here
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is this better than karlsson gambit?

 

[felicemastronzo]

He intends to do at least 4 seasons though. If he solves all the issues by season 3, what he's going to do in season 4? IMO, he'll stretch it out, so that season 4 is actually for problem solving and season 5 will probably be for endings.

so I have to wait for the 16th chapter to know what happened to James?
come on now, let's not go overboard

finding out what happened to him is not the same as having solved the problem, but it is developing the premise, which is still ridiculously stuck, figuring out what needs to be done

and if "old problems" end there will be new ones added as in every narrative (as there are already new ones added with every chapter...)

 

[HoshiEx]

so I have to wait for the 16th chapter to know what happened to James?
come on now, let's not go overboard

finding out what happened to him is not the same as having solved the problem, but it is developing the premise, which is still ridiculously stuck, figuring out what needs to be done

and if "old problems" end there will be new ones added as in every narrative (as there are already new ones added with every chapter...)

guess have to play "waiting game" to the end?

 

[Lostanddamned]

so I have to wait for the 16th chapter to know what happened to James?
come on now, let's not go overboard

finding out what happened to him is not the same as having solved the problem, but it is developing the premise, which is still ridiculously stuck, figuring out what needs to be done

and if "old problems" end there will be new ones added as in every narrative (as there are already new ones added with every chapter...)

You got the wrong impression, my friend.

We will get some clues here and there as to what happened, which will keep us guessing and discuss it more and so the game gets even more exposure. Quite the simple marketing trick my friend. Have people talk about your product more and more, so that even more people find out about it.

We will probably get another hint in the next episode about James and probably will find out about the locked room in episode 11. Then at the end, James will be shown coming back in the epilogue and we will have to deal with him in episode 12 and possibly 13.

The guy has ready storylines in work already, what's the point of him blowing them all off in one episode and dig himself into a hole to think new storylines to keep people interested in the game?

 

[desperatecub02]

so I have to wait for the 16th chapter to know what happened to James?
come on now, let's not go overboard

finding out what happened to him is not the same as having solved the problem, but it is developing the premise, which is still ridiculously stuck, figuring out what needs to be done

and if "old problems" end there will be new ones added as in every narrative (as there are already new ones added with every chapter...)

is this better than karlsson gambit i havent played this yet

 

[shazba]

so I have to wait for the 16th chapter to know what happened to James?
come on now, let's not go overboard

finding out what happened to him is not the same as having solved the problem, but it is developing the premise, which is still ridiculously stuck, figuring out what needs to be done

and if "old problems" end there will be new ones added as in every narrative (as there are already new ones added with every chapter...)

A bit of mystery is fine, but it's best if it's maintained sensibly.

You don't start dating a woman who has pictures of her fucking husband in her house without asking a few questions. It's ok that Jill didn't tell him stuff, because maybe it's not her place to say, but the mc should definitely be questioning Bella by now, and she owes the mc some answers.

If it's innocuous then it's just a response like, "Yeah, I was married before, but it ended 3 years ago. It's taken me a while to get over it, but your cock has done wonders for me." But if she's still not able to talk about it, the mc should back the fuck away.

 

[felicemastronzo]

guess have to play "waiting game" to the end?

I don't think so, for some things I can even accept it, for example at the question of Maya's debt it was necessary for it to drag on for a long time, but knowing whether the woman you are dating is really married or widowed is not a question that "can pass mind," it was not at the first question, then it must be the second question.

now the real problem will be to see how long we will have to wait not for the ninth chapter, which changes little whether it comes out in october or november, but for the tenth. if we don't get back to timelines under 6 months for me it will be really bad news

 

[yossa999]

Surely Jill living with them should be able to see that too? All she had to do was ask another Prep what happened and she'd know that Tybalt hit first (if indeed Fuckface even hit back), there was no fire and the worst thing done was the egg throwing, and that's what the other Preps would say in court. [...]

We all know that Jill is a little bit dense naive, so she assumes at first that people speak truth. But while there was no fire, she would find that Derek has started the sprinkler system and MC helped him. So, they at least vandalized the mansion in front of the witnesses, aren't they? And the clothes they stole, everybody have seen them wearing it. No matter that they threw it away before leaving the mansion (And Derek stole the cane and hat with him, if I'm not mistaken). I think there is definitely something for a lawyer to work with.

 

[shazba]

We all know that Jill is a little bit dense naive, so she assumes at first that people speak truth. But while there was no fire, she would find that Derrik has started the sprinkler system and MC helped him. So, they at least vandalized the mansion in front of the witnesses, aren't they? And the clothes they stole, everybody have seen them wearing it. No matter that they threw it away before leaving the mansion (And Derrik stole the cane and hat with him, if I'm not mistaken). I think there is definitely something for a lawyer to work with.

This is a dangerous discussion to start...

I think about 95% of posters to this thread are lawyers, so it gets pretty heavy!