VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Better Cock Spock]

Right, thanks. So really the only hint MC gets on-screen is the Jacob one which only happens if you go for Sage after the body shots with Sarah instead of going to Maya or getting the restaurant special.

So first timers have pretty much zero chance to see it coming, but MC behaves like he should have. Then the "she uses Morgan" bit confirms that MC got a lot of information off-screen. Sloppy.

I don't really believe MC knew about Morgan before the reveal. I'm just gonna quote my thoughts from a previous convo because I'm lazy

When he asks that, and MJ respond with the "Morgan-Burke" hyphenate, he seems to act like he already knew the Morgan part, even though that was never established beforehand (the same happens with knowing Josy's last name, but that's more acceptable). Sage gives a good reason for not using Burke, and this particular instance is supposed to play out like "oh there's no way MC could have ever suspected this, why would he" but it's still another case of MC being a huge dumbass.

Tbh I don't really get that impression either, it's more like he's desperately trying grasp onto the newly learned fact that Sage only goes by Morgan as a way to validate his ignorance of who her family is. But just for the sake of argument, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt here and say he did know about Morgan beforehand. Still a dumbass though.

It really doesn't matter all that much in the end. Just wait until the next big reveal that was "under our nose" the entire time, like Jill's house.

No she wouldn't. Morgan-Burke is Sage's legal last name. Bella would either use that or accept Sage's preference of just Morgan. That's enough. Calling Sage just Burke is a cunt move not a power move. It's something someone like Becky would do. It's unprofessional. Bella is above that. And she doesn't need something petty like that. All Bella has to do is stare and Sage will fold. Just like everyone else.

All Bella has to do is whip out her tits to show dominance as the larger breasted woman

 

[MiltonPowers]

All Bella has to do is whip out her tits to show dominance as the larger breasted woman

Bella would win against everyone except Nora.

I just randomly started laughing, thinking about Cathy, withdrawing from the teachers & staff Wet T-Shirt Competition.

Maybe I should go to bed.

 

[hsaIV]

Only if Mona comes back.

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[Better Cock Spock]

Bella would win against everyone except Nora.

I just randomly started laughing, thinking about Cathy, withdrawing from the teachers & staff Wet T-Shirt Competition.

Maybe I should go to bed.

That's when she busts out her patented glare as the finisher move

 

[MiltonPowers]

That's when she busts out her patented glare as the finisher move
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I wonder if she knows that I actually find that look extremely hot. I'm not into femdom, but somehow Bella can make a glare look sexy.

 

[TheNowhereWolf]

That's when she busts out her patented glare as the finisher move
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*insert Gmod death sound* Bella really is the master of instilling a feeling of being scaroused, I love her.

 

[Elduriel]

I wonder if she knows that I actually find that look extremely hot. I'm not into femdom, but somehow Bella can make a glare look sexy.

the walk of shame song glare still gives me the chills

 

[Better Cock Spock]

I wonder if she knows that I actually find that look extremely hot. I'm not into femdom, but somehow Bella can make a glare look sexy.

She can do whatever she wants to me

I wouldn't be able to resist anyway

 

[Roger-a-Dale]

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I don't really believe MC knew about Morgan before the reveal. I'm just gonna quote my thoughts from a previous convo because I'm lazy
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It really doesn't matter all that much in the end. Just wait until the next big reveal that was "under our nose" the entire time, like Jill's house.

All Bella has to do is whip out her tits to show dominance as the larger breasted woman

Well to me the exchange reads like MC did know about Morgan. Maybe it's just me and depending on which part you emphasize you can interpret it in a dozen ways. The whole thing is that sloppy.

Man, I'm using that word a lot. Someone is going to meme it at this rate. Just my avatar with "Sloppy!" in a speech bubble.

It all just makes way more sense in my head if I assume things happening off-screen. Like MC knowing all the DIKs' last names, but DPC not revealing them to us because he is too lazy to give them last names. They know their last names and even MC knows their last names, but DPC doesn't and we will never find out.

 

[felicemastronzo]

There is also Jacob warning MC to be careful with Sage that makes it obvious that there is more to Sage than her relationship with Chad and her position among the HOTs. MC cuts Jacob off before he can drop the Burke bomb.

Then at the prep party Sage complains that her parents are there. I haven't combed through that recently, but I'm pretty sure Sage specifically says her mother is there but the only grown woman who has any lines is Jade.

So there are hints to it, but they are the kind of hints that stand out after multiple playthroughs. For a first timer the revelation might as well have zero foreshadowing and the idea that MC should have seen it coming is entirely based on things that happened off-screen. It's sloppy.

My example was admittedly heavy handed and kinda reliant on the rest of the characters being more fleshed out so there'd be more red herrings. More name drops so Sage doesn't stand out so much and such. My idea is that there should be subtle hints that a perceptive first timer might pick on and the vast majority of first time players would go "Why didn't I see that coming?" at the reveal. Really get the players to identify with the MC in the moment.

Instead we got... sloppy.

Jacob's warning is really generic, Jade is an MC professor, talking about powerful people without going into specifics makes no sense.

while the presence of Sage's parents at the preps' party is deliberately a false clue since Jill's father does everything to behave just as Sage describes her father, who instead does nothing of what Sage talks about

then if we believe that for real Sage was using the name Morgan (I'm convinced it's a later addition when DPC realized it didn't hold up much, the same way he made Maya's story worse from time to time in the hope it would become acceptable) and MC knew it why would he think that in reality his REAL last name is another one?

good thing there's porn in this game

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Well to me the exchange reads like MC did know about Morgan. Maybe it's just me and depending on which part you emphasize you can interpret it in a dozen ways. The whole thing is that sloppy.

Man, I'm using that word a lot. Someone is going to meme it at this rate. Just my avatar with "Sloppy!" in a speech bubble.

It all just makes way more sense in my head if I assume things happening off-screen. Like MC knowing all the DIKs' last names, but DPC not revealing them to us because he is too lazy to give them last names. They know their last names and even MC knows their last names, but DPC doesn't and we will never find out.

It does make sense for MC to learn all this off screen.

That's why it definitely didn't happen

 

[Roger-a-Dale]

I wonder if she knows that I actually find that look extremely hot. I'm not into femdom, but somehow Bella can make a glare look sexy.

You don't have to be into femdom to find it sexy. She is mad at you and glares at you, but you are mad at her too and glare right back. Then something snaps, you start making out, clothes come off and then you are in the middle of some strange meeting place between make-up sex and angry sex. Neither of you can tell who the dominant one is anymore, but that's okay, because neither of you gives a damn. It can be seriously hot.

 

[AlexFXR]

Is it already known how many renders there will be in the new chapter?

 

[Bootyman92]

I don't think Nora was an after thought. The Swyper app was a way to introduce new characters to the story as well as add something to the existing ones. There were always going to be new types of classes that involve new mini games and new (potentially sexy) teachers. Nora is only the fourth sexy teacher in a porn game set in a college. There are plenty of subjects that have no teacher characters (yet) and it would be completely normal to have several teachers per subject. Frankly having another four sexy teachers would not be that much of a stretch. It's a lot weirder to have seven strippers among the characters.

The big plot hole in Nora's story is that the app gives you an idea of how near the other person is and she couldn't figure out that Distance + Age = B&R student. A doctor didn't realise that a guy, who was of an age typical of college students and living at the same distance as the college she teaches classes for, might be a student at that college and turn up in her class. This lack of deductive reasoning leads me to believe that B&R must be hiring people for their looks and thus there should be at least a dozen sexy female teachers on the payroll.

Well, seeing as Stephen is the Chancellor, that wouldn't be surprising at all.

 

[El_Magnifico]

Is it already known how many renders there will be in the new chapter?

He had a total of 6630 static renders 3 weeks ago. He said in a previous dev log that it will end up around 7000.

 

[Bootyman92]

I will kink shame as much as I please. If you like feet you're a fucking weirdo.

Same here. I won't go out of my way to do it, but pro-NTR supporters are the scum of humanity

 

[godkingxerxes]

She says her dad is there, with Geoff (his name unknown at that time) as the prime suspect. He said he thought his daughter was at the party, leading us to believe it was indeed Sage.

The only girl that lives in the HOT house is Jill. Anyone who thought Geoff wasn't Jill's father wasn't very smart.

And I said this back then too, the proof is painted throughout this thread.

 

[AlexFXR]

He had a total of 6630 static renders 3 weeks ago. He said in a previous dev log that it will end up around 7000.

Thank you. Did the developer say why there was a delay and why there won't be an update this year?

 

[Bazsa4]

I will kink shame as much as I please. If you like feet you're a fucking weirdo.

 

[Bootyman92]

Goth Maya is kind of Hot, but I would still prefer if this was only with Josy. or it would have been a separate scene for each
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Every time I see these renders, I think Jan/Feb can't come soon enough.