iamcomming
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mc wasnt busy to help Maya. he got the papers, he is done with helping. he just sit there and dont do anything useful. he is not the brain in the team. they were talking and party, thats all. by the way, they said they will show the papers to Jill family's lawyer.I don't do lazy writing; I think that my writing is overly ambitious, and I am always deliberate about what I write and how I do it. I think I look at that part in a different way than you do. That phone call showed that Quinn needed MC, and for the first time, she tried to show it, but MC was busy helping Maya. And as a result, after that failed attempt and what followed, she reverted and didn't try again. It motivated why she was absent for large parts of the episode and affected their relationship in the way that I wanted.
On MC’s choice not to answer, you're on to the right answer. Quinn and MC had a nice talk at the BBQ the day earlier. How could he have realized that a phone call late on Thanksgiving was urgent? It wasn't a high priority for him at that moment; people don't answer phone calls when they are preoccupied. You might have prioritized Quinn higher than him because of what you know as a player. It's the same with Riona fans who want to help her but aren't given the choice to do so. Not every choice that the player wants to make will be presented to you for storytelling reasons. It makes the player get a bit frustrated with the MC, and the urge to help their favorite character increases with those storytelling techniques.
I wouldn't have handled it differently, even if I had another year to develop episode 11. The addition to that scene fulfilled the purpose I wanted, and leaving it out would make it worse.
at the end of the xmas party mc tells to quinn, he is into her. why wasnt high priority for him the call from the girl who he is into, at that moment when he doesnt do anything important/immediate?
oh, yes, we understand why. because: "I am always deliberate about what I write and how I do it." "It motivated why she was absent for large parts of the episode and affected their relationship in the way that I wanted." it is lazy and poor writing.
he doesnt pick the phone, because you dont want it. not because he has any reason for it, in that moment.